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 Posted: Mon Feb 08, 2010 8:17 pm
Please post here for a mod to timely respond to your request for a already made taijutsu style, be sure to completely fill it out. If you have any questions, PM myself, or another mod. Thank you. [b]Name of taijutsu style:[/b]
[b]What you know:[/b]
[b]RPC using it:[/b]
[b]Rank of RPC:[/b]
[b]Class of RPC:[/b]
[b]RP sample:[/b] (6 sentences long, nothing less in description of the style and how you will use it alone.)
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Posted: Wed Feb 10, 2010 8:59 pm
Name of taijutsu style: 8 Gates
What you know: Well... duh there's 8 gates, each one is more deadly than the last, up to 6 sustain minor-heavy injury, but nothing fatal. 7th can be fatal. 8th is soul chakra, so the user dies. Many techniques do not require gate activation. Some gates can stop poison, and even negate it. The 8 gate's names are similar to stages in life.
RPC using it: Svellos Ukyohan
Rank of RPC: Spec. Jounin
Class of RPC: Ninjutsu
RP sample:
Svellos was losing the battle, he had sustained a slash from his right side of neck down to his lower left shoulder. He was breathing hard, and knew he had no choice but to resort to taijutsu. "First Gate: Gate of Opening!" Suddenly his strength and speed would double, as well as a slight burning sensation as he smirked. He was going to go as far as he could go. "Second Gate: Gate of Rest!" He previous wounds were healed, and his stamina increased, the burning sensation was now an irritant. His speed and strength increase further. The opponent began to perform handseals, as Svellos sped up a tree, performing Tree Climbing by focusing chakra to his feet. He then performed the Full Body Sling attack, by shooting towards the opponent's right ankle from above. Svellos then jumped into the air, and gently spun his body forward once, then twice, and finally a third time. Svellos hurled the opponent into a stone wall, the crackle of the stone and snap of bone could be heard as high damage was inflicted. "Third Gate: Gate of Life!" Information would now travel significantly quicker, the limit on the nervous system weakened severely. His strength and speed increased once more. "Fourth Gate: Gate of Pain!" His skinned turned dark red, as his speed and power doubled. He could feel pain, tearing of some muscles. "Fifth Gate: Gate of Limit!" Suddenly Svellos reached the peak of his ability with the taijutsu style, his strength and speed the maximum that it could possibly be before activating his curse seal. The opponent, who was quietly resting, attempting to heal herself with what limited medical jutsus she knew, did not expect Svellos to come back. He seemed to flash by with amazing speed that would trouble the sharingan and the byakugan, as well as any other expert doujutsu that could read movements. He slid downwards, kicking her in her groin as it shot her upwards. He then kicked and struck her repeatedly, stepping backwards with amazing speed, barraging her throughout, keeping himself behind her the entire time. His hands were wrapped in training cloth, this of which he used to wrap using the chakra that was bleeding and venting from within him to entrap her. He then turned their bodies inversely, before rapidly drilling downwards, before pulling off of her, as a massive impact collision took course. Her skull shattered upon the touch. Svellos then fell over, exhausted, with light muscle tearing throughout his body, and a lack of chakra. He blacked out.
Name of taijutsu style: The Fox Stance
What you know: A new type of taijutsu that is not widely renowned. It is a movement-specific taijutsu that acts as a subjective mixture of multiple styles and can be manipulated to form a perfect style in which allows the user to find openings, whilst being able to nimbly move out of the direction of alternative assault. It requires lightning or fire elemental chakra. It is weak against water, wind, and earth.
RPC using it: Aeldevera Mistalune
Rank of RPC: Genin
Class of RPC: Samurai
RP sample:
The opposing ninja came running towards Aeldevera with his one-handed sword and kunai. Aeldevera timed it, holding Fulgora, his lightning-based two-handed sword in a defensive stance. He then used the Counter Strike technique, striking an open location near the upper-right torso. The rather unexpected strike caught the opponent off-guard, as the pulled back and held their blade in a defensive lock with Fulgora. Aeldevera knew this would not go anywhere, so he reverted to his single-handed use of Fulgora, freeing his left hand. He then built up chakra in his fist. He then slammed it forward, his opponent unable to block it, due to having no free hand, slid sideways, opening himself momentarily, the shock-wave tripping the opponent. Aeldevera then plunged Fulgora into the opponent's waist, and pulled upwards, then out, sliding backwards three feet. The opponent lay there, holding up his hands, his eyes weary, it was blood. "It's over..." He coldly stated, before taking out a kunai and hurling at the man in shock, impaling it into his skull instantly killing him.
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A faint smile Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Feb 10, 2010 9:03 pm
Jaded...
Sacrifice yourself
And let me have what's left
I know that I can find
A fire in your eyes
I'm going all the way
Get away, please... Since your ninjutsu class, you can only have one taijutsu style
...You take the breath right out of me
you left a hole where my heart should be
You've gotta fight just to make it through
Cause I will be the death of you
Propaganda...
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Posted: Wed Feb 10, 2010 9:22 pm
One is for Svellos, the other for Aeldevera. Each can have one taijutsu style.
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Posted: Fri Feb 12, 2010 5:06 pm
I hope you read the entire style, because you will have to roll after you finish using gates. This will determine how much damage your body deals itself. Also, as a ninjutsu user you have to do A LOT of training to use the style even before you begin training the usage of the gate techniques and the opening of the gates themselves.
The only problem I saw with your RP was that you flipped "gently". You spin at high velocity to get enough speed going to deal any damage to your opponent. Had you spun gently, the opponent would have been able to attack you right in the middle of the technique.
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Posted: Fri Feb 12, 2010 6:55 pm
Deil, I read it carefully, I knew that gates require rolls. I know you can't spin gently either, it was an RP sample against NPCs. In a real match, it'd be far different, and this taijutsu style is just secondary for my RPC.
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Posted: Sat Feb 13, 2010 5:17 pm
I'm just trying to make sure that you know all of the work that goes into this style and the weaknesses that go with it. Anyway, I see you have sufficient knowledge of how to use the higher powered techniques. Just remember that you will need to know how to use the basic techniques to make this style worth using, especially against multiple opponents.
So yes, for the 8 gates you have approval from me, however this is not a place where I have the authority to do so. You will need to get Jade to do the official approval.
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Posted: Tue Feb 16, 2010 4:52 pm
Name of taijutsu style: Kunoichi Combat Style
What you know: I know that this technique can only be used by females, it deals alot with flexibility, defending, and usage of pressure points. Also, good for counter-attacking. It also does alot of damage with kicks, as well as the pressure points
RPC using it: Koutaya Sorikata
Rank of RPC: Genin
Class of RPC: Ninjutsu {Able to master 1 taijutsu style}
RP sample:
Taya rolled her neck as she stretched out her arms, one arm acting as a bar at the elbow of the other. She was getting ready to start her afternoon training, though wanted to limber up first. After stretching her arms, Taya sat on the ground, bending over one leg easily to touch her toes. After her stretching, Taya rose to her feet, and assumed a loose stance. Despite her having already mastered this Taijutsu style, she always liked to keep it fresh. Thus, she walked over to the beginning of the obstacle course, which changed daily. Taya started out by walking up to two poles, and smacked the button which started the trial. Two red and white targets popped up, an equal distance apart. Taya knew she would have to hit both at the same time, so she jumped up to the air, and performed a split kick so easily in the air. The targets went away as she moved to the next section. It was rather dark at first, though Taya remained aware of her surroundings. Suddenly, a light went on, revealing 4 men, who each whipped shuriken at different levels towards her. Taya jumped into the air, contorting her body in such a way that she dodged the projectiles. She brought herself up from the ground, and beckoned the men forth. One of them approached, and kicked towards her chest. Taya brought one leg up swiftly, blocking the kick, and then snapped her foot at his head. The man's eyes crossed as he was dazed a bit, though that is all she had needed to deliver a sharp jab to the crotch of the man, rendering him useless for a bit. Her back bent under an armbar from another one of the men, and placed her palms on the ground. Her legs came forth as she spun on her hands, delivering a number of kicks to the man's chest. He had gotten the wind knocked out of him. Taya had managed to get around him, and jabbed her fingers forth to the area between his shoulder blades and neck. The man could barely scream in pain as he fell to the floor, clutching at his chest and shoulder. His arm would be useless for the time being. It seemed as if the last two men made a quick getaway, so Taya shrugged and headed to the next part. This one was familiar, as it dealt with sound. She would have to run across the floor, not making a single noise, or risk the walls closing in on her. Taya took a deep breath, and sprinted across the floor, making no more than the wooshing of wind. She was safely on the other side, but did not expect the long drop to the floor. Taya spun in the air, offsetting her gravity point, and landing perfectly on her feet. She had absorbed the shock by bending her knees, and once more, making hardly a noise. Taya ran forth, approaching the next obstacle. There was a single target on the floor, and Taya looked around, making sure she wasn't about to get attacked. Taya simply tried stepping on the button, only to see it didn't budge easily. She sighed, and raised her right leg straight into the air, and brought it down crashing onto the button, which gave way and opened the next door. Taya walked through it, only to receive a smashing fist to the side of the head. Taya relaxed her muscular system, and instead of getting a concussion, spread the attack throughout her body. It hurt alot less, though her head was slightly fuzzy. Taya opened her eyes, only to face an onslaught of projectiles. She backflipped easily in the air, and contorted her body once more. Though, this time, she landed on her hands, and pushed back towards the man who had punched her. While she pushed off the ground, she spun her body, delivering a smashing foot into the mans face. He skidded back some, and then fell flat backwards. The last man came forth, he was certainly the burliest. He sent a kick to her chest, and Taya caught his foot with her hands. She twisted it as one would do a wheel, and heard the man scream. It was certainly sprained, though Taya was not finished yet. Taya flipped onto the man's chest, and her arm cocked back. The man foolishly turned his head to the side, as if she was going to poke his eyes out. In reality, Taya wanted to hit his temple, and her arm shot forth. It was not enough to kill the man, though his jaw slacked, and he clutched at his ear. He would only be hearing a high pitched ringing, and wouldn't be able to talk. Taya nodded her head, and walked out the door, happy to see the final room; Tea and cookies.
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A faint smile Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Feb 16, 2010 5:06 pm
OMG, that was like the best RP for something I have ever seen! And you used the style so well, I'm glad that I was able to incorporate all of that into the style. Idk who approves this stuff, but I don't see any way how this won't be approved! Good Work! blaugh
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Posted: Tue Feb 16, 2010 5:08 pm
Jade is accepted.
*cough* I need an official go still...
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Posted: Tue Feb 16, 2010 5:57 pm
Since my main job is to approve custom things related to taijutsu such as styles and weapons, I guess I'll be the mod for this topic.
For the 8 gates, approved
For the fox stance, could you please incorporate a little more of the style into the post? A one pass attack seems to be insufficient to portray your knowledge of the style.
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Posted: Tue Feb 16, 2010 7:43 pm
Oh damn! That's Deil and Aaron =D
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A faint smile Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Feb 17, 2010 7:50 am
<-<;; I'm afraid of posting my application now.
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Posted: Wed Feb 17, 2010 2:09 pm
Nothing tried nothing gained.
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Posted: Wed Feb 17, 2010 9:22 pm
Name of taijutsu style: Kunoichi Combat Style
What you know: This style is made, and practiced only by the female members of the world, as their unique figure allows natural flexibility and several other things. It was made for the female body type, and deals primarily with kicks, and disabling shots to the pressure points.
RPC using it: Yasukawa Zenko
Rank of RPC: Genin
Class of RPC: Ninjutsu
RP sample:
Zenko drew in a well-deserved breath, beads of sweat were trailing the lines of her face to end in a drop to the earth, to return to where it was taken from. She had been practicing for hours on cardio, and strength, to improve her technique in a unique style developed and usable only by the female sex. Being able to use such a refined style gladdened her, and with the added boost of being able to deliver destructive force with augmentation, it would be deadly. If one were to experience her all out rage, death would be had by the victim. Or were they the aggressor?
That didn't matter, what was important now was the spar that would be taking place. To make sure she wouldn't be at a disadvantage, he grasped the form of a bottle that contained refreshing water. It was quickly laid bare as it all flowed down her throat, re-hydrating her hungry body. It was then that her supposed sensei appeared, an eager expression on his face. This was the man that had given her the scroll. This was the man she was going to fight, and he seemed to want to experience the devastating effects of the style. She would go easy on him.
"Now, Zenko, why not show me what you've learned." He said in a goading tone. Did he seriously want her to hurt him? 'Must be a masochist' She thought. With that, she silently launched herself from the still position at the man. What she had learned at the first stage wasn't much, but it would be adequate for her needs at the moment. "Of course, I'll only be using Taijutsu as well." He added.
With that, she started. The first movement was silent and swift due to her light feet, and she was upon the man within moments. Her hands went up fast directly for his ears, feinting the man so she could move in for a quick defeat. Taking the bait, he brought his forearms to his head, taking a rather disatisfying blow to the crotch. Zenko had taken advantage of the feint and sent a quick jab to his groin. This was followed by a quick pose recovery, and a snapping roundhouse kick to the head. Her foot slapped itself into the mans ear and knocked him clear off of the hurtful position he was in.
A soft thud signaled that he hit the ground, a smile of satisfaction carving itself into her crimson lips. He got up slowly, shaking as if he were drunk and sent a kick directly for her abdomen. All his foot met were the hands of Zenko as she grasped its large form firmly, twisting it violently almost directly on contact. A rather discomforting sound arose from the ankle as it hung loosely for the moment, throwing the man back upon the ground, except on his stomach.
"You've been drinking, haven't you?" Zenko asked. He was the kage, how could he possibly lose so easily?
"Oh dear, you've caught me. I suppose-" He let out a breath that contained laughter and a wheeze of pain. "I suppose... I should be punished. Whisk me away to the hospital!"
"Fine, I'll ask the medic to do it slowly. It'll wake you up a bit more."
(( Didn't want to take Jade's idea, so this is the best I could come up with. >->;; ))
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