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 Posted: Sun Feb 07, 2010 11:45 am
Some days you wake up feeling great,
full of wisdom and possibility.
Those are the days you live for,
seems like you've got it all figured out-
But I don't know if I'll ever really get over you.
I don't understand why I miss you -
Your face, your hair, your smile.
But it seems like you've got it all figured out.
I hope that someday I’m going to look back on this.
and I hope that I’ll get over you. It might just take time.
I guess I’ll know that you changed me.
Because some days, I wake up feeling great,
full of wisdom and possibility.
Those are the days I used to live for.
But I haven't had one of those days in a long time.
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Posted: Sat Mar 20, 2010 9:15 pm
...Any critique or something?
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Posted: Sat Mar 27, 2010 2:08 pm
That's a nice poem. there's not much more i can say...
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