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I was with my family when it all began. The horror that would kill us all. The Volto were coming. As we all standed in the cramped room deciding what to do, we then heard them. The screeches and growling. Me and my family ran to the town gate and got behind it. I turned around and saw the people running to the gate with the Volto behind them... Then the gate closed with a big rush of wind. I looked at the stone gate and heard the people pounding on the gate. Then it stopped and the screaming began. I froze with fear and wanted to help the people. As I ran to the gate opener the guards grabbed me and forced me away. I and my family started to leave. I would never for get those people’s faces of fear and there screams. It is the year 1290 A. D. my name is Rosalie Crowley this is my story.

I was with my family when it all began: the horror that would kill us all[You realize by saying this you are implying that Rosalie will die eventually, correct?]. The Volto were coming. As we all stood in the cramped room deciding what to do, we heard them. Screeches and growling [Maybe describe where the noises are coming from?]. My family and I ran to the town gate and got behind it[Maybe describe what kind of gate it is. Solid stone? Iron bars with spaces you can see through?]. I turned around and saw the people running to the gate with the Volto behind them... Then the gate closed with a big rush of wind. I looked at the stone gate and heard the people pounding on the gate. Then it stopped and the screaming began. I froze with fear, but part of me wanted to help the people. As I ran to the gate opener[figure out proper name of mechanism and describe it briefly], the guards grabbed me and forced me away. My family and I started to leave. I would never forget the fear on their faces and their screams. It is the year 1290 A. D. my name is Rosalie Crowley and this is my story.