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PostPosted: Fri Feb 05, 2010 2:41 pm


I've been brought aboard to help with a few forums and I ask a poerty forum to work with. Any poetry is acceptable. If you are new to poetry and wanna give it a shot, go ahead; you will not be critized. I'd also be glad to accept anyone who would like to help others learn how to write poetry. Thank you.
PostPosted: Thu Feb 18, 2010 4:13 pm


Just a question about the "you will not be criticized" bit? Constructive criticism is encouraged, right? Obviously, saying "Wow, that was really horrible" is a no-no, but saying "this line is weak" or "this bit needs work because..." is all right, right?

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PostPosted: Thu Feb 18, 2010 7:49 pm


that's fine but only as long as it doesn't discourage the writer
PostPosted: Sat Feb 20, 2010 10:15 pm


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But some people are real babies about it. Don't get me wrong, I hate any kind of criticism just as much as the next person... at first. Nobody likes being told "Ok... that really wasn't that good" especially when YOU thought it was. However... some people just can't take any kind of criticism and through temper tantrums and "poor me" fits when someone is simply trying to help them.

Just saying... "can't handle the heat, stay out of the kitchen." And if you're a woman... you better get used to the heat because leaving the kitchen is not an option. XD

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PostPosted: Sun Feb 21, 2010 1:49 pm


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But some people are real babies about it. Don't get me wrong, I hate any kind of criticism just as much as the next person... at first. Nobody likes being told "Ok... that really wasn't that good" especially when YOU thought it was. However... some people just can't take any kind of criticism and through temper tantrums and "poor me" fits when someone is simply trying to help them.

Just saying... "can't handle the heat, stay out of the kitchen." And if you're a woman... you better get used to the heat because leaving the kitchen is not an option. XD


*LIKE!*
But, yeah, that's what I was thinking, too. Writing is a challenge, especially to new writers, so any kind of imperfection (however inevitable that is) could be discouraging. So, is what you mean more that our INTENTIONS must be to help, not to discourage?
PostPosted: Sun Feb 21, 2010 8:36 pm


ya,basicly, and since u brought up the "cry baby" subject, if u can't take help or u're a shitty snob, please go somewhere else

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PostPosted: Mon Feb 22, 2010 6:27 am


Preferably, if you're a girl, to the kitchen. *Cough* Honey *Cough*
PostPosted: Tue Feb 23, 2010 8:24 pm


BWAHAHAHAHA! I'm going! I'm going! They're making me take this stupid sanitation class first, though!

I LOVE YOU!

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PostPosted: Wed Feb 24, 2010 7:26 am


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BWAHAHAHAHA! I'm going! I'm going! They're making me take this stupid sanitation class first, though!

I LOVE YOU!


Sanitation? Psch! The steak'll be fine once you fry it--none of the germs will survive. smile

I love you, too! biggrin

Now, you know, on to poetry and stuff. XD
PostPosted: Thu Feb 25, 2010 3:08 pm


ya, onto the poems, remember, any kinda poem is allowed

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PostPosted: Thu Feb 25, 2010 6:01 pm


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ya, onto the poems, remember, any kinda poem is allowed


Do you have one to submit? You did start the thread, after all, which indicates that you have an interest. smile
PostPosted: Fri Feb 26, 2010 3:37 pm


I want to post a couple of mind... however... the few that I feel are worthy of posting are good enough that I'd like to see about publishing them in something, maybe making a few bucks off of them or something. I'm paranoid someone will steal my poems. Lol!

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PostPosted: Sun Feb 28, 2010 10:13 pm


Blood Dragon Maiden
I want to post a couple of mind... however... the few that I feel are worthy of posting are good enough that I'd like to see about publishing them in something, maybe making a few bucks off of them or something. I'm paranoid someone will steal my poems. Lol!

I know the feeling. XD And feel conceited for it, sometimes. lol.
PostPosted: Sun Feb 28, 2010 10:15 pm


Blood Dragon Maiden
I want to post a couple of mind... however... the few that I feel are worthy of posting are good enough that I'd like to see about publishing them in something, maybe making a few bucks off of them or something. I'm paranoid someone will steal my poems. Lol!

lol. I know the feeling. XD And sometimes feel conceited for it. lol.

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PostPosted: Mon Mar 01, 2010 2:27 pm


yes i do....i will post it later tonight if i can since it's pretty long =/
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