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Stellafreyja Vice Captain
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 Posted: Wed Feb 03, 2010 7:25 pm
Yes the story is called Unfinished. It was a game I was thinking of...I just want an opinion...= w=
But what happens is that a man (who is unnamed) is in love with a woman (who is also unnamed) and have been going to behind their parents backs to date. But since the man is a prince and next in line for the thrown he is forced to marry someone else (and she as well has not name). This new woman has no feels for the man and does he to her. But when the wedding comes they fool their parents. During the ceremony it will be the man girlfriend under the veil, for in this country the bride wears the veil the entire ceremony. Afterwards the other woman would switch during the Reception. All is fine and nice for the first few months but then the man's parents find out about everything and hang both the girls. What was to happen in the game is to play as the 2 dead girls and stop the mans parents from doing something that may ultimately shatter him, marry again. (And yes that is a bad thing...Imagine being married to the love of your life, watch her get hung, then have to marry someone else...) Throughout the game you'd meet other spirit who will help you stop this final wedding.
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Posted: Wed Feb 03, 2010 8:24 pm
i have a few problems, if the one the man was spose to marry didnt care about him why whould she help stop another wedding?...
and why would he marry another person after the love of his life was murdered by his parents...
He is my suggestions to it...
(Im using BoB) and (Diana)
Bob, fell in love with a young girl name Diana. Bob had to keep his love secret,He was soon going to force to marry Lea, a Rich daughter of another kingdom. Soon, right before his marriage Bob, ran away for his life to go find Diana. Diana was already gone taken by Bobs, family. His family sent Diana to a place far from their kingdom and plated a curse. Where her soul would leave her body and would roam the world as a ghost. So, she can never be able to find love again.
The game starts off as Diana body place on a pedistal in the middle of a forest. She soon wakes up but not as Diana, but a ghostly women. She doesn't know what has happened. So, she franticly finds a way out of the Forrest to find Bob.
Parts to the game.
She needs to find a way to lift the curse (once she does she isnt turned to her self again but as child.)
Find a way to tell how she really felt to Bob.
And find out how the family found out about her
Find a way back to the castle.
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Stellafreyja Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Feb 03, 2010 8:38 pm
For your second question Kane, he's a prince so they need him to marry someone to gain alliances. :3 I don't understand your first question though...O_o
(I'll use Bob, Diana, and Lea). Bob marries Lea to not cause any trouble for his parents for refusing and he knows that his parents would not approve of Diana. But I do like the curse thing. :3 That may work... whee
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Posted: Sat Mar 13, 2010 2:54 pm
Uhhh I like the first one it kinda needs a disambiguation, between the two girfs
and and Bob should probably end up in my pants
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Posted: Wed Mar 24, 2010 9:10 pm
╠════ ɱăƙĕ ƥėăčė ὢỉʈһ ɥȭȗȑ ƿȃśť ══‖╣I agree with Forsakins idea of the game but instead of only the girl dying,how about they "both" die and change into their ghostly souls and during their searching,the guy bumps into a human who can "see" him.After much pleading,the human finally agrees to help him find the girl.And so on...
╠════ ŝō ǐţ ὥὅήț ɱἕṣṣ ữṗ ṯɧє Ƿȓɛșɇἤʈ ══‖╣
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Posted: Wed Mar 24, 2010 9:22 pm
rofl This is hella old now...I hate this story now...= w=
I could probably think of a better story with this same concept...But I dun wanna...>w>
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Stellafreyja Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Mar 24, 2010 9:34 pm
╠════ ɱăƙĕ ƥėăčė ὢỉʈһ ɥȭȗȑ ƿȃśť ══‖╣Damnit,But anyway i do agree it is a bit "cliche".I can help you out biggrin .
╠════ ŝō ǐţ ὥὅήț ɱἕṣṣ ữṗ ṯɧє Ƿȓɛșɇἤʈ ══‖╣
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