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PostPosted: Wed Feb 03, 2010 12:14 am


PERFORMANCE

Performance Title:
Lucian

Genre:
Theatrical Performance

Starring:
Recks Aldwin as Lucian
????? ?????? as Margarete
????? ?????? as Virgil
????? ?????? as Gabriel
????? ?????? as Dietrich
(and various other characters played by unknown Broadway actors)

Description:
After being a hit in a Californian workshop theatre, the new musical "Lucian" moved to Broadway, where its fame continued to soar.
The plot of the musical goes as follows:
Set in the Victorian era, Lucian, a mortician, is given the opportunity to go to university to learn the new thing called cosmetic surgery by a rich man, Dietrich, who's wife, Beatrice, has just died, after having been impressed by the boy's work on his dead wife. Dietrich pays for the schooling with the agreement that after his schooling is done, Lucian returns and performs surgery on his daughter, Margarete, who though she is a woman, still has the face of a child. Believing the father well intentioned, the funeral master, Vergil, persuades Lucien to take the man's offer.
The plot thickens upon Lucien's return, where all is not as innocent as it once seemed. Dietrich's true intentions are revealed as a romance begins to swirl around the lives of Lucian and Margarete.

Scenes/Musical Numbers:

ACT I

Confession
Beautiful Dead
Medical Perfection
An Offer You Can't Refuse
Consider It
I Accept
I Should Have Said No
University
Dearest Gabriel
Letters from the Dead
Lament
Gabriel's Funeral
Society's Sin

ACT II

False Pretenses True Intentions
Perfect Perfect
I love her
The Plan
Daddy Knows
Pursuit/Runaway
Love Heals/Love Kills
Confession Reprise

PostPosted: Wed Feb 03, 2010 12:15 am


ACT I


Scene 1:
The theatre was dark as the play began. The curtain was still closed, but sounds were already coming from the stage - rain and small rumbles of thunder. Heavy breathing as Reck's character, Lucian, sits down in a confessional. We then hear the preacher speak:

"What are your sins, my son?"

Another heavy weary breath is heard, and then "Father, forgive me, for my life itself is a sin. The things I've seen. The things I've done. Everything. Listen, and let me recant my tale."



Scene 2:
All sounds die down, and after a short moment the curtain pulls open and the lists come on stage, dim. It appears that we are in a basement - somewhat grubby, and looking somewhat like a surgical unit. There are various funeral home paraphernalia, including a table with a covered body - all except the face. The face is that of a woman, and we see a man, Lucian, applying makeup to it.
Lucian is wearing a labcoat over his simple victorian clothes. He has long blond hair with darklights added(to darken Recks' hair. Recks' bangs have also been slicked back) and a subtle wave. His face, though young, had a crease between the brow, and lines under his eyes.

We hear a knock at the basement door.
Lucian: "Enter"
The Funeral Master, Virgil Reinhard enters. He is a short, pudgy, man with very good clothes, and a clean appearance.
Virgil: "Fine work as ever, Lucian. Why, I remember when you were just starting out. You've always done such wonderful work." Virgil says as he walks over and studies the woman's face, putting a hand on her cold dead cheek. It is then that music begins the play. The number is called "Beautiful Dead"

The deep voice of the Funeral Master begins: "From your skillful hands, my Lucian, you create beauuuuty from the dead. Their untimely end, and they depend on those like youuuu to bring back their beauuuu' till at last their layed to reeeeeest~
Beautiful dead.
No one but youuuuu could make them be. Corpses that look aliiiiiive as you and meeeee.
Beautiful dead.
Here's your scalpel and the needle. In your haaaands I know you can haaaandle.
Beautiful dead."

Then Lucian, tenor, cuts in taking the scalpel and needle fro, Virgil
"These hands are not all you praise them to be. They once stooole and they thieved, committed siiiiins unknown to theeeee. I was an orphan found cold and almost deaaad on your dooooorstep. It was yuuou wooo taught me to create~
Beautiful dead.
Faces of the elderlyyy so sweet and tenderlyyyy, I make them look like the grandparents Iiii know they'd been.
Beautiful dead.
Young and oooold, I've seen them aaaall, tended to their booooodies readied them for heaven.
Beautiful dead...." Lucian sang solemnly.

Funeral master again, with a hand on Lucian's shoulder.
"The stuuuuuudent haaaaas surpassed his master cleeeeearly it's plaaain to see, that thooooooough I haaaaaave taught you well, you are the angel of the dead~"

Lucian tears away back to Virgil, hands propped on and empty table and head hanging. The song's over.
"I'm no angel."

"No, but you are be best mortician in the province. Which is why, as your employer I request your appearance at miss Echardt's funeral."

"But," Lucian tries to interject, looking back over his shoulder at Virgil.

"No buts! You are to attend the visitation!" Virgil then chuckles. "It's not like you have anywhere better to be, unless you're going to stay locked up down here."



Scene 3:
The scene blacks out, then changes to the upstairs part of the funeral home. There is the visitation room, and outside of it a hall with some nearby steps. There is an aristocratic crowd in there, gossiping and looking at the body. Lucian nervously stands off to the side, dressed nicely, but trying not to be seen. It is obvious that he is nervous. however, the main going-ons happen to be in the visitation room, where Virgil and Dietrich are talking. Suddenly music begins, and we are able to hear their conversation.

Dietrich; "It's medical perfection! Saaaay you haaave, and ugly face (lower, a whisper) and trust me sir, you do, (back to normal) They've come to a solution! Surgery is no longer just for saving a limb, or chopping it off. Taaaaake a faaaace so ugly and hooorriiiiiiiiiiiiid and with your scalpel and your needle craft in to perfeeectioooooooon~"
Dietrich then puts his arm around the stunned virgil's shoulders and motions to his daughter who is looking down at her dead mother in the casket. She is old enough to be married, but has the face of a young child.
"You see my daughter is well on in age, however she has a lamentable face. The faaace of a chiiild is her blessing and her curse! With medical perfection she can look just like her mother! But fiiiiirssst I'll neeeed someone of skill! Not just any man to shape my baby's face."

Virgil looks proud and puffs up his chest. "Well! If you insist sir!"

"Not you! (whisper again)Hiiiiiimmmmmm! (back to normal) I saw the work he did to my wife and I say, though young, his work is divine. I'll paaaay the priiiiice and send him of to Universityyyyy~ And when he returns my daughter, Margarete, shall receive the face of the woman she most certainly is! It's and offer he can't refuse." Dietrich grins, almost eevily.

"So, do we have a deal? You and I shall go talk to your boy, and get things under way."

"Now? Here!? Sir, it's your wife's funeral! Surely you need time to think!"

"Oh, I've thought long enough. I've grieved and now I am trying to make my wife's final wish come true."

"I see."



Scene 4:
The set has shifted with more of a focus on the outside room where Lucian is standing. He seems to have not overheard Dietrich and Virgil's discussion. As Virgil's hand comes down on his shoulder, Lucian jumps, and sees another man with Virgil.
"Hello?"

"Lucian, my boy!" Virgil begins. "This is Dietrich Echardt, husband of the late Beatrice Echardt."

The two shake hands. "Nice to meet you, sir."

"Yes. I have a proposition to make Lucian....?"

"I have no last name."

Dietrich laughs. "Well that's preposterous!" He sees Lucian give him a sour look, "Well, Fine then," He waves it off.

"You said you have a proposition?"

"Lucian! Manners, boy!" Virgil says, elbowing him. Lucian also gives him a look.

"Yes. It is an offer you cannot refuse. I guess that you have received little to no education, I assume?"

"I don't see what that has to do with anything," Lucian says, going on the defensive.

"Yes well, you can read and write, at least?"

"Yes. And tie my shoes and count. What are you getting at?"

The funeral master is getting nervous at Lucian's attitude.

"I am looking for someone to send to University to learn about the new study of cosmetic surgery. It's not too different from what you do now, only it's on living people. Making ugly people beautiful."

"Why would anyone want to do that? God gives us a certain set of features, and be they good or bad, we are to learn to deal with them. The trial we face are sent to us to make us stronger."

"That may very well be," Dietrich is getting irritated. "but either way, I am making this offer to you. I pay for your schooling for however long it takes. Say....oh....two years. Then you come back, and fix my daughter, Margarete's face."

"I see nothing wrong with your daughter's face." Lucian says looking into the visitation room at the baby-faced girl he assumes to be Margarete.

"Would you marry someone with the face of a child? Be careful how you answer that, or you may just end up looking like a *****, my dear Lucian."

Silence, and then, "I'll consider it."

Deitrich again gives his villainous grin. "Good."



Scene 5:
The scene changes to the basement again where Lucian is sitting at a table. He seems troubled as he contemplates the offer made earlier that day. He runs his hand through his hair, and shakes his head with a sigh.
He stands up and begins pacing. Music begins.

"Every day doctors try to defy god.
Every day some scientist in his lab discovers a new cure.
Shooooould I throooooow myyyyyy mooooraaaals out the dooooor? Fooor a chaaance at what I never haaaaad?"
Lucian grabs a picture off his desk. It's of his mother and father.
"I was raised with death. Mother and father gone to the heaven up aboooooove. I'm Left in a hell with corpses left and right, ghosts of saints and murderers in my heaaaaaad~ (next comes the highest part of the song)
This crossroad between the unknown and all I've ever haaaaad. A literal choice between life and deeeeaaaaath.
(the song takes back on a more somber tone.)
"I saw her face. Sweet and innocent as any of god's children. I thought medicine was to saaaave life not destrooooooy. To answer Echard's question - yes, I would. To marry and angel to light up this life of DEATH around me....would be......."

Scene blacks out.




Scene 6
The next scene opens to the outside of the Echardt's home, where Lucian knocks on the door, which is opened by Margarete.
"Hello. Come in." She says, and sends for a maid to go get her father.

The two walk over to the couch, Lucian watching Margarete closely. The two sit, and silence falls between the two.
Margarete finally speaks up. "So, I suppose you're hear to accept my father's offer..."

"You don't sound too excited."

"It's scary, but it's what my father wants."

"You are happy with how you look?"

Margarete nods. "God made me this way for a reason."

Lucian begins to smile, but then they hear the heavy footsteps of Dietrich coming down the stairs.
"Ah, Lucien."

Lucian stands. "Mr. Echardt, sir."

"So, you've come to a decision. Margarete, go to your room. There is man's business to be dealt with here."

Lucian looks to Maragaret who begins to get up, then to Dietrich who is at the base of the stairs. "This concerns her. Should she not be here too?"

Dietrich laughs. "She is a woman. She has no say."

Lucian watches lamentably as Margarete pushes past her father and goes upstairs. Dietrich walks over and he and Lucian sit down.
"I did not come here to accept your offer, but to say that I would marry your daughter."

"Ha! You think I would seriously let her marry a middle class mortician like you?" Dietrich laughs. "Come now. You can't be serious."

"She doesn't even want the surgery."

"And you think she'd want to live with you in a dead house?!" Dietrich laughs again. Lucien looks somewhat ashamed, and angry.

"To use your own words, sir; she's a woman. She has no say." His voice is steady, but detached, not believing the words.

"Touche."

Silence.

"I accept."

Dietrich looks a little surprised, but then that characteristic grin appears.
"Good. I knew you would."
Scene ends.


Scene 7
Back at the funeral home with Virgil and Lucian sitting in front of a fire, drinking tea.

Music starts
"I should have said no." Lucian says with trouble in his eyes.

"What?"

"I should have said no."

"Why?"

"I should have said no, I won't, I wont destroy the perfection, the beauty-"

"Lucian don't be crazy! You're helping the girl."

"I should have said noooooooooo~ She had no choice. Her father, a damnable man, a bigot, a villain, gave her no choooooooooooiiiiiiceeeee! Gave meeee nooo choiiiiiiiceeee~!"

"That's not your concern."

"It's too late to say no now, I've accepted SAAATAN's money in my hands - now I must dooo his deeeed."

"Watch your tongue! Lucian!" Virgil says, growing angry and slamming his teacup down on the table.

Lucian stands and steps away from the table.

"Don't you care!? Or have you been liiiiiving with the dead so long you caaan nooot seeeee~"

"Lucian, of course I dooo but you must uuuundeeeerstaaaand - all my HOPES and dreams rest in youuuuuuu~!"

The music dies down.

"I should have never accepted Dietrich's offer. It goes against every moral thing you ever taught me. How will I sleep at night? How can you be okay with it?"

Virgil walks over to Lucian and puts a hand on his shoulder.
"I know, my boy. I know." Scene blacks out.


Scene 8
The scene opens as Lucian is midway through school. He is sitting in a classroom with a guy, his new best friend, Gabriel. Gabriel has green eyes, fair skin, and blonde hair, though fairer and better kept that Lucian's own.
The two are chatting about something in their textbooks.

Lucian: "I can tell you for a fact that the author of this book knows nothing about formaldehyde."

Gabriel chuckles. "You most certainly would know. You smelt like the stuff for weeks when we first met!"

"Try living in it all your life."

"I feel sorry for whatever woman you marry."

The teacher clears his throat and the class is dismissed.

"I have somewhere to be tonight. Would you like to join me?"

"You spend to much time 'out.' You should be studying, Gabriel!"

"So I guess that means you are going to stay at home and study."

"I'm here on someone else's money."

"All the more reason to have some fun!"

"I can't"

"Suit yourself old friend!"

The scene darkens and is transformed into their dorm.
As evidenced by the window in the scene, time has passed, and it is night. Gabriel stumbles in through the door. He's obviously been out having a wild night. Lucian looks up from his book, shocked at his friend's state.

"Gabriel!"

Gabriel passes out in Lucian's arms,

Fade out



Scene 9
Lights come back on, and Lucian is studying by Gabriel's bedside when he finally wakes up.

Lucian holds up a thing of opium "So, this is why your grades have dropped. Why, Gabriel?" Lucian displays a timid, hurt, affection.

Gabriel looks away, ashamed.

Lucian gets up and walks away, leaving the dorm.
Later the next morning he returns, and Gabriel is cooking breakfast. He sees Lucian enters, and sets the small square table.

Lucian sits down and comments "I hope yu didn't add any 'extra' ingredients. I have better things to do than lose my future to the opium fad."

The comment makes Gabriel slam his fist down on the table and get up, knocking his chair over. He goes over to the window, brushing his hand through his hair.

Cue music.
"I can't take it anymore! This like is HARD and I need release!"

Lucian stands and walks over to him.
"What Iiiii not enough?"

"If I ever had a brother, I'd hoped he'd beeee just like you~"

"What do you mean?"

"I've arranged the carriage, I've told the professors, now I'm telling youuuu - I'm leaving here. Goodbye"
Gabriel brushes past Lucian and heads out the door, leaving Lucian with a sad, distressed look on his face.

Scene fades out.


Scene 10:
Back in the classroom, Lucian is without Gabriel. Someone comes in and whispers something to the professor. The guy leaves and the professor calls for Lucian. They exit into the hall.

"Lucian. I know how close you and Gabriel are-"

"Can this not wait till after the lecture?" Lucian interrupts, not wanting to hear about his friend leaving.

The elderly professor takes in a breath, and states calmly to the irate Lucian;
"Gabriel is dead. They found a letter with him, addressed to you."

Lucian's face looks expressionless as he uses the same reserve he has always used as a mortician, but takes the letter that the guy handed the teacher with a shaky hand.
The teacher returns to the classroom, and Lucian runs off stage.

Scene 11
Lucian is on the steps of the university, reading the letter.

"Dearest Lucian. If you are reading this letter, than I am, indeed, dead.
I regret my addiction, and my decision to leave. You have been like a brother to me ever since we met. I'm sorry I cannot write more, but I fear that I have miscalculated my body's abilities. My vision and strength are fading, my muscles spasming. I just want to say, before I go - I'm sorry."

Lucian closes his eyes with tears pouring over his cheecks, and balls his hands into fists, crinkling the paper together.

He opens his eyes an looks up at the sky.

"Gabriel, I'm soo sooorry, I can never say those words to youuuu~"
Cue music.
He rises from the steps, "You loved life so much, I neeever suspected, I never thought you'd DIEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE.
Gabriel, my brother, come back to me. Without you here I don't think I'll make it throuuuughhh. You kept me from waisting my life away in the books. You showed me that there is beauty in liiiife.
Gabriel! I'm soo sooorry, I ever said those words to youuuu~
You gave me so much, I neeever returned, I never gave gack to YOUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU.
Gabriel, my lament is here broadcast for you. Let it fly on angel wiiiiings to heaven for youuuuuuu. You sheltered me from their sneers of contempt for the maaan whooo plays with the dead. You brought me out to the liiiiight!
Gabriel!
My lament, Gabriel!
Don't leave me, Gabriel...."
Lucian collapses back to the steps.
"Gabriel...."

Scene fades out.



Scene 12:

The lights come back on to reveal the end of the funeral. Gabriel has been put in the ground, and everyone is leaving...except Lucian, who gently tosses a rose on the grave.

Scene 13:

Back in his dorm, Lucian is packing.
"Two years of this. Two years..." He shakes his head. "I'm finally coming home...Margarete....I'm sorry.

The lights shift as Recks walks out the dorm door, and he's walking in the door of the Funeral Home. Cue Music as he heads to the basement.

"These hands once touched the dead and created angels. Now they touch the living and creates demons of (singing begins)vanityyyy~
Society's sin.
Tell meee gooood, what purgatory does one go for deeefaaaaacing yoooouuur creatiooons? Will the devil hold me a special throne, for spreading his disease?
DAMNED by society's sin. I'll see this WORLD to HELL!
Lucifer's faaall, now Lucian caaaalls knocking on your castle door. With devil's money I have learned the devil's art.
DEITRICH, society's sin, I'll see your SOUL to HELL.
Dear Maaargareeeete, If there was some way to save you, saaaaveee youuur face and my souuuul, I would! Reject the poison fruit, and sheild you from being
HOSTAGE to society's sin, I'll save you from HELL.
...I'm going to hell."

Lights go off.

INTERMISSION


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PostPosted: Sat Feb 06, 2010 12:06 am


ACT II



Scene 1:
The scene opens just outside of the Echardt home. Lucian stares at the large home with contempt. He knocks. Once again, it is Margarete who answers the door. She looks sad to see him.

"Lucian...."

"You don't look all that happy to see me. I'm sorry"

"Come in."

They go in to the house like they did in the previous act and sit done.

"I'll have someone go fetch my fa-"

"Wait! I want to talk to you first."

Margarete sits back down. Lucian begins to speak in a hushed tone.

"I tried, Margarete, to stop this." Lucian looks down at the floor.

"Thank you, but, I don't quite understand. Why are you..?"

"I believe as you believe - God made us this way for a reason. When your father fist spoke to me about University, and I asked why, he asked me if...if I would marry someone with a face such as yours -" he then reached out and touched his fingers to her round baby cheek- "When I came here the following day, thinking it would save you, I said yes."

Margarete displayed a plethora of emotions on her face - confusion, hurt, surprise, and sadness. "But he said no."

"Obviously."...silence..."You're beautiful, Margarete."

"You'd have been called a *****. Everyone in the city thinks I'm nine years old, you know."

"I've been called worse." he shrugged.

"What's worse than being called a ***** hypocrite."

"You said you would marry me, but what do you really know about me, Lucian?"

"...absolutely nothing. I had hoped, if I had been permitted, we would have learned to love one another." Lucian subconsciously reached for Margarete's hand.

Margarete looked at Lucian's hand, so much larger than her own.
"You are an honorable man, Lucian."

"Hm," he smiled. "I believe depraved would be the correct word."

Footsteps sound as Dietrich comes down the stairs.
"Lucian! AHR! Why didn't anyone tell me!?"

Lucian rises. "It's no one's fault. I asked for a few minutes to talk to Margarete."

"Margarete," Dietrich says sternly, "Go to your room!"

Margarete, fearfully, gets up and flees to her room. For the first time Lucian catches a glimpse of a bruise on her back.

Dietrich and Lucian are alone. Dietrich sits where Margarete was previously. Lucian sits as well.

"Mr. Echardt, sir. Before anymore is said or done, I want to once more ask for your daughter's hand in marriage-"

"Never. Lucian, boy, after you have performed your services on my girl I want you to forget about her existence." Dietrich says sternly.

"Mr. Echardt, I have to warn you that this surgery is very risky, and could leave her permanently deformed. She could lose her sight, her ability to breathe or eat right. Do you really want to do this to your daughter? If getting her married off was all that was concerning you, you'd have accepted my offer. What are your true intentions?"

"Obstinate as ever." he shakes his head. "I have confidence in you, Lucian, that you will not mess this up. I am going to give you a week to get things together. Seven days from now, you WILL perform surgery."

Lucian grit his teeth; "Yessir."
Scene fades out


Scene 2:
Scene takes place outside the Echardt home, as Lucian is leaving.

Cue music
"How does one peeerfeeeeect perfect? She's beautiful, radiant, intelligent. I saw the bruise. Something's wrong here. He's a devil of a man with an angel daughter."
He sings, looking back at the house, and up at her bedroom window where she's sitting, looking down at him.

The other half of the stage, which still shows the inside of the house, we hear her start to sing in a beautiful mezzo;
"How does one perfeeeeect perrrrfeeect? He's kind, gentle, and wonderful. Did he see the bruise?" She rises and heads to her mirror, looking at her back where the bruise was. "Father's getting restless. I wonder if this was what mother went through? Day after day of merciless ordeerrrs. Day after day of perfeeeeeeect or pain?

Lucian pics up; "He's the reason for the bruises on Mrs. Beatrice, I know it! What did she go through? Day after day of merciless siiiiin? Day after day of perfeeeeeeect or pain?"

Lucian and Margarete overlapping-
Lucian: "Save her from this hell and guide her into my arrrmsss! I'll take her to heaven where only god can peeerfeeeeect perfect~"
Margarete: "Save me from this hell and guide me into his aarmss! Lead me to heaven where only god can perfeeeeect perrrrfeeect~"

Lucian: "He's hurting her, I know it! I fear the wooorssst for heeeeer~" He finally turns from the house, and heads on home. "Seven days. I've seven dys to plot and plan....how to peeerfeeeeect perfect...."

Scene ends.



Scene 3:
We're in Lucian's lab for this scene. It's cleaner, and has more of a hospital quality. On a bed is Margarete, knocked out with ether. There Lucian stands, looking down at her. He reaches for her cheek, and cups it.
All resignation falls. Lucien closes his eyes tightly till tears fall.
"I won't do it!" He shouts over her form, head hung. "I can't. I love her,." He says, opening his eyes and looking at her affectionately. His hand now runs through her hair.
"Oh, Margarete."

He takes this opportunity to explore the bruises on her blanket-covered body. First he sees the ones on her upper arms, then collar bone. Timidly he moves the blanket down and finds her breasts bruised. Quickly he covers her back up - his worst fears confirmed. He slams his fist down on the nearby counter.

"DAMN that man!" Pain and tears fill his eyes.

Cue music.
"Now I know why. Now I knoooooooooow the reasons why. The beating, the rape. My dear angel defiled by Satan himself. My dear, no moooooooooooore, noooo moooooore. Aweaken, my love, let us run. Renegaaaades in to the night! He'll not have you. No moooooooooooore, noooo moooooore. Still my scalpel - how could one perfect a face so perfect? Now I know why. Now I knoooooooooow the reasons why. A new face for his new bride. What happened to the daughter? Dead in the name of science. No moooooooooooore, noooo moooooore. Come, Margarete-" He lifts her off the table and carries her 'bridal-style' over to the part of the lab that is much more homely, and serves as his 'bedroom'. "We'll escape to a world where noooo oooone knooooowwwws ouuuuuur sinnnnnssss~" He is sitting by her, hand on her cheek, resting his forehead on hers.
Scene ends.


Scene 4:
Lucian is almost asleep hours later when Margarete finally stirs. This is enough to wake him back up. She blinks the bleary sleep from her eyes, and stares up at Lucian.

"L-Lucian. It's over? I-I feel no pain?"

"I didn't do it, Margarete."

"What!? Why?"

"I know what your father's been doing to you now. He plans to change your appearance, then take you as his new bride, doesn't he? Your appearance would be changed, and no one would ever know it was you. That's his plan, isn't it?"

"How did you figure it out?"

"Margarete, how could you not tell someone?"

"Father will kill us both for sure now! Please Lucian!"

"No Margarete, I can't." He touches her cheek, and his nose is almost touching her. He is looking into her eyes. "If we leave now, he can run. He'll never find us..."

"You'd give up your livelyhood...?"

"It's that or my life, as you said..."

"Lucian,.." Margarete is moved to tears.

"I love you, Margarete,"

They kiss. When they separate, Lucian stands, and goes to a closet. The closet has many clothes. It was meant to hold close for the dead. He produces a dress for Margarete. "I believe you can fit this. Please, dress hurriedly. It's five hours till dawn."

Margarete nods, and stands with the blanket draped around her. She takes the dress, and heads off stage.



Scene 5:
The scene opens To Dietrich staring out the window of his office. Cue music.

"My little giiiirl. My plans unfuuuuurl what does heee suppose? What doooeees heeee suspect. The deeds I've done, the seeds I've sewn. Heee caaaan not have her, cause daddy knoooooooows best. My wife or dead. Heeee'll noooooot have her." He walks over to his closet and takes out a capt and a hat, and heads down stairs.

"Heee caaaannot have her. Daddy knows. Daddy knoooooooow the traiterous bastards will flee, rather than doooooooo the deeeeeeed. Daddy knows."

He exists out the door where the rain is pooring and thunder is hear, lightening is seen. He stands outside the door 'getting drenched.'

"My wife or dead. Heeee'll noooooot have her. Daddy knows.

The scene abruptly goes black.


Scene 6:
The scene opens to a forest. In the background we see the town. It's still dark, and there is the occasional flash if lightening and rumble of thunder.

Lucian and Margarete run on stage and stop in the center, breathing hard, drenched, and holding each other.

"Where will we go, Lucian?" Margarete asks, looking up at him.

"To Rome. He can find safety in the holy city, I'm sure of it."

"That's so far.. we'll never make it on foot!"

"Have faith, Margarete! h-" there is a rustling of leaves. "Come, let's continue!"

The two go off stage, opposite from where they came on.

Not long after, lantern in hand, Dietrich stomp onto the scene.

"They were here. I feel it."

We see Lucian and Margarete are now hiding towards the back of the set. One of them causes a bush to rustle.

Dietrich looks around, holding his lantern high in the air.

"Lucian! Traitorous cur, come out here! Return my daughter to me!--and I might let you live. We see not only a saber at Dietrich's side, but a pistol as well.

The scene now focuses in on Lucian and Margarete;
Lucian: "Margarete, listen to me - Run! Run as far as you can towards Rome! I will catch up to you and we will find each other again, trust me!"

Margarete tears up. "Lucian~"

"Go!" He quietly urges.

She shakes her head, tears streaming. "He'll kill you, Lucian~"

"Margarete, even if he does, I'll find you again. In the next life. Up in heaven. I'll recognize you, even when your old and gray." As he says this the two are close, and he moves her hear out of her face. He gives her a kiss.

"Lucian~" She sighs.

"Go!"

This time, Margarete runs.

A moment goes by, and Lucian steps out in to Dietrich's path.


Scene 7:
In the background the sky has changed to dawn. The sun is just about to peek into the sky. The rain and clouds are gone.
It's a stare-down between the two.

"My daughter - where is she."

"You'll never find her." cue music, "She's beyoooond youuuur graaasp"

"Fool!" Dietrich is now circling Lucian.

"Whaats wroong?"

"Theif!"

"Molester"

"***** oooone tooo taaaaalk. Why'd you do it?"

"Do what?"

"Why'd you huuuuuuuuuuuuurt your little girl?"

"For pleasure, for the thriiiiiiiiiiill of sin!"

"Devil! Pitiful pawn oooooof Luuuuciiiifeeeeeeeeeeeeeer! Love heals - let me love her, save her, repair theee broookeeeen aaangeeel's wings. Cleans her souuul from sin. Your touch, like poison let these hands do what they do best."

"For all your words you can not move me! For all your pleading I deny! She's mine, mark my woooords or let the bullets flyyyyyyyy~! Love kills" Dietrich draws his gun.

"You've bestowed upon me the art of sin. With devils money payed hell's tuition! I'll welcome the gates to hell if it meeeeeeeaaaaans seeing you,..." He pulls out his own pistol that he must have grabbed before they left the lab, and points it at Dietich, "Dieeeeeeee" With the word, Lucian pulls the trigger. Dietrich staggers back, holding his chest. he looks at the wound, then back at Lucian with a devilish grin, before pulling his own trigger. As the lights go down we see Lucian fall, and together they sing;
"Love, kiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiills"



Scene 8:
The set is dark, the curtain has been drawn. The sounds of rain and thunder are like they were before. We hear heavy breathing.

We hear the priest's voice; "You are forgiven. Pray with me, my son;"

Lucian and the priest now talk together;
"Almighty and most merciful Father, we have erred and strayed from Your ways like lost sheep. We have followed too much the devices and desires of our own hearts. We have offended against Your holy laws. We have left undone those things which we ought to have done; and we have done those things which we ought not to have done; and there is nothing good in us. O Lord, have mercy upon us, miserable offenders. Spare those, O God, who confess their faults. Restore those who are penitent; according to Your promises declared unto men in Christ Jesus our Lord. Grant that we may hereafter live a godly, righteous, and sober life; to the glory of His name. Amen"


There is silence, and then we hear in the distance the echo of Dietrich's evil laughter.


The end.
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