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PostPosted: Mon Feb 01, 2010 8:55 pm


"A real man drinks his coffee like the sky", a deep voice crooned, tipped in only the most sophisticated twists, like a piece of music in human form, "Pitch black, and full of wishes."

The usual bustle of the maritime military's headquarters was apparent, reaching all through the base, and its surrounding area. As always, there was quite a bit of crime to deal with, and not enough people to get it done. Of course, the people that could get it done were weighted down by the one currently inside their cafe, the loafer in a suit vest and topped with wavy black hair. A true italian man if there was one, from the Olive Islands to the south.

The server eyed his somewhat skeptically, just putting down what he could understand from the Captain's completely off-key way of talking. He just set down the "pitch black" part of the coffee in front of him, explaining, "Sorry, I didn't get all that. Tell me if you need anything else." The captain just smiled, taking a sip from coffee so bitter most men couldn't stand it, "It's alright. A man can live with what he gets, or else I won't forgive him."
PostPosted: Thu Feb 04, 2010 3:57 pm


Eddie Cartman was a marine in training.His father assigned Vice Admiral Raven to train him.Eddie was a skilled inventor he loved adventure. Ever since he met Lake he has been excited about being a marine. He walked up to raven and had a nervous look on his face."Uhh,Raven-senpai could you please train me"Eddie was nervous,he was talking to a famous powerful marine. User Image

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PostPosted: Thu Feb 04, 2010 4:03 pm


"Who are you?" Raven harshly replied to the weak kid. He had no time for some weakling that someone lower than him assigned. After all all the higher ups didn't have any children and no one in the vice admiral rank also.
PostPosted: Thu Feb 04, 2010 4:06 pm


"Uhh...my father Captain Cartman talked to Sengoku Coby and Segoku sama told me you would train me"Eddies was afraid Raven would yell at him.User Image

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PostPosted: Thu Feb 04, 2010 4:22 pm


"Coby? You mean that dumb marine who got fired last year? He use to be the fleet admiral but that was all in the past. And Sengoku, I mean that guy is so old that he can't even remember the difference between good and bad." Raven harshly explained as he drank another cup of tea. He was hard on this marine kids, but he saw something else on this boy. Depending on the kids answer, he was going to train him.
PostPosted: Thu Feb 04, 2010 5:19 pm


'I would still like to be a subordinate for someone as strong as you"Eddie admired Raven's skills and abilities. He wished to be Ravens right hand man. User Image

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PostPosted: Thu Feb 04, 2010 5:24 pm


"Sorry but kiss ups aren't going to train under my name. Now leave."Raven replied, all the hope he had put in this kid was gone. He had expected the kid to answer valiantly not power hungry."and kid, you can still be a marine but you can never go any farther."He said harshly as he returned to his drink. He was expecting more but the kid gave him less.
PostPosted: Thu Feb 04, 2010 5:26 pm


Eddie was a strong willed kid he never gave up...just like a marine. "Sorry for the disrespect Raven sama but no i won't leave until I'm your subordinate. i don't give up! I will be a strong marine!"Eddie proved to Raven that he had what it takes to be a marine. This made Raven seem interested in Eddie. User Image

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PostPosted: Thu Feb 04, 2010 6:11 pm


"Nope your just a wannabe seeking for power so leave and never com back."He never did like those kinds. Thats probably why he never got along with Luke much.
PostPosted: Thu Feb 04, 2010 6:28 pm


"Sorry but i won't give up on my dream,I'll be a marine no matter what. I'll even sacrifice my arms to be a marine!"Eddie said with passion. User Image

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PostPosted: Thu Feb 04, 2010 6:35 pm


"You kid would never survive with me in one day of training. I don't think you can even survive a minute. So leave with your tail between your two legs and go home."He didn't even have to glance sideways to show that he meant it.
PostPosted: Thu Feb 04, 2010 6:37 pm


"at least test me to see if I'm worthy"Eddie said while trying to convince raven.He had heard rumors from the lower ranking marines that raven worked every apprentice he had to death. User Image

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PostPosted: Thu Feb 04, 2010 6:48 pm


"Alright then..give me your best shot."Raven remained seated for this as he didn't need to stand up against a weakling.He had enough control of his muscle to balance out his force. Depending of how this kid elaborated on his attack, Raven is going to make his final decision.
PostPosted: Thu Feb 04, 2010 6:54 pm


"Yes!."Eddie said while smiling.he would get a chance to try out his new invention. He called it the Black Chalk Bazooka. eddie took out a big black bazooka that had two holes in it. Eddie took 2 cannon balls he had saved. One of the canon balls were white and the other was red. Eddie loaded in the white one first. Eddie struggled to lift the big bazooka. He aimed at raven's head and fired the white cannon ball at 45 miles per hour.Before the canon ball would hit its target it exploded a large amount of white smoke in ravens face. This would blind Raven and leave an opening. Eddie fired the 2nd canon ball. the canon ball would explode on impact. This was the power of the Black Chalk Bazooka. User Image

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PostPosted: Thu Feb 04, 2010 7:02 pm


"This has got to be a joke."Raven still remained seated as the smoke cleared out. He was still wearing the same kind of expression he was earlier before the fire blew out."this is your best?"
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