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AoibhealDragonheart Vice Captain
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 Posted: Mon Feb 01, 2010 5:29 pm
Sorry, this isn't one of my better ones, I'm just too lazy to actually look for a good one right now. Post what you think if you like. Good reviews, bad, doesn't matter to me, I'll take 'em all.
Dance
Dance, a dream in a fog,
Mist is swirling, dreams forgotten float by your wandering eye,
Music lifts on the air,
Balancing the quiet and the noise,
Shaping your inner voice,
Creating balance between your soul, your mind and your body,
Helping you breathe,
Dance, lovely, softly, gracefully,
Make a mountain seem like a hill,
An ocean a small pond,
The sky is naught but a lovely reflection of your inner happiness,
A beautiful inner and outter shell of joyous nothingness,
Yet it is everything,
Such a wonderful power held within such an every day action,
As common as a smile, a laugh, a hug, a kiss,
Who would have thought all of this could come from
A Dance.
Hope someone enjoys it. It was one of my happier sounding, no-so-depressed, ones. Mmm, probably should alter it slightly.
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Posted: Tue Feb 02, 2010 3:22 am
i think it was fairly good words flowwed smoothly seemed natural
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AoibhealDragonheart Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Feb 02, 2010 12:44 pm
Thank you! (:
Absolutely loved the positive feedback (:
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