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 Posted: Fri Jan 29, 2010 8:20 pm
What do you think is there anything that needs fixing? oh btw, im having some trouble drawing shoulder if anyone knows any links or tips PM or comment. thanks in advance. whee 
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Posted: Fri Jan 29, 2010 10:42 pm
Well, the main thing I see is her left hand (Her left, viewers right) is at a very unnatural position. It seems like the two middle fingers would be together in that pose. Also her collar bone is really offset.
I can redline to better explain if you want.
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Posted: Sat Jan 30, 2010 7:40 pm
Are those peas on top her head?
also, keep in mind that most people tend to have skeletons. smile
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Posted: Sun Jan 31, 2010 6:44 am
The shoulder blades are to low
the hair seems to close to the skin
But it looks awsome
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Posted: Sun Jan 31, 2010 9:52 am
Adding onto what the others have said, either her head is too big or her shoulders are too small. Unless, of course, you are going for the SD form.
Her smile seems to be extremely lopsided. I do like her face shape though and on the topic of her hair, it is possible to have hair like that, IF it is being pulled extremely taut against the scalp.
Also, although I am not a master of it, you should work on your foreshortening. Her right arm (our left) seems like it doesn't have an elbow and also, both of her hands are the same size. If the right (our left) hand is the closest to us, it should be larger than the other hand.
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Posted: Sun Jan 31, 2010 6:17 pm
Gondolion Are those peas on top her head? also, keep in mind that most people tend to have skeletons. smile no, lol. they're not peas. that's kind of hair clip. yeah i know, thanks. smile
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Posted: Sun Jan 31, 2010 6:19 pm
InDarknessForever The shoulder blades are to low the hair seems to close to the skin But it looks awsome thanks, um do u have any tips on fixing that? like should i just draw the hair more away from the scalp. thank you. ^_^
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Posted: Sun Jan 31, 2010 6:29 pm
Bone-Butterfly Adding onto what the others have said, either her head is too big or her shoulders are too small. Unless, of course, you are going for the SD form.
Her smile seems to be extremely lopsided. I do like her face shape though and on the topic of her hair, it is possible to have hair like that, IF it is being pulled extremely taut against the scalp.
Also, although I am not a master of it, you should work on your foreshortening. Her right arm (our left) seems like it doesn't have an elbow and also, both of her hands are the same size. If the right (our left) hand is the closest to us, it should be larger than the other hand. no she's not SD. ^^ okay her head is in more of a leaning position, thanks. oh, okay. yeah thank you, i still have some things to work on. oh sorry i didn't realize lol. xp
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Posted: Sun Jan 31, 2010 7:55 pm
http://g-man777.deviantart.com/art/Gaia-redline-152502176
I tried to incorporate what everyone here had said.
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Posted: Tue Feb 02, 2010 8:27 am
Phydeux77 http://g-man777.deviantart.com/art/Gaia-redline-152502176 I tried to incorporate what everyone here had said. thank you again, i appreciate it. biggrin i'll probably put up more of my drawings on here. whee
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