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PostPosted: Thu Jan 28, 2010 9:06 pm


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My Own Cage
I dreamed I was
In my mind,

I sat there dieing
Never being free.
PostPosted: Mon Feb 08, 2010 6:59 pm


Short but has impact thats for sure. But are you using any poetic tools? Like.. uhm, syllables or, onomatopoeia etc. I learnt this in english recently but forgot it all d:

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PostPosted: Thu Mar 18, 2010 10:14 am


I would really examine your punctuation and spelling.
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