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The Line we all dare not cross.

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PostPosted: Thu Jan 28, 2010 8:39 pm



Rating pg.18
any comments welcome.

The line we all dare not cross.
We all sit by as the world dies,
no one cares the blood washed sand.
We all weep, we all cry
we all watch as we see the people die.
Lonely times cry for all
pain and suffering lay at our feet.

Old men beg, as new men die.
Families divide no sheds a tear.
“who are we to change the world?
How can one person even try?”
Does it even matter if we smile?
Does the path ever fade

into the night sky we drift.
We all have our heads shaking
just as all our hearts are breaking.
“Forget the masses, I need help.”
People yell at each other
just as we start to kill our brothers.

Tears fall, as people smile
we all stand tall as our souls break.
Waking sores, open wounds,
the day breaks as we lay still.
Not caring of the nights cold take,
hold fast young sons,

as we live and die.
Our time is now don’t ever stand still.
Down trotted young girl,
forgiven us of our past sins.
Even those we keep making,
over and over again.

Do we see what has happened?
All alone on earth, the people
crying of the devils hold.
Broken smiles still holding fast,
how long are we able to let the time pass?
Forever more, forever more.

“How dare you call me out?
What did I do?” The guilty plea,
“how is this fair? Its not my fault.”
Seeing only what we wish,
is our unholy crime. The mass of
darkness forever falls.


PostPosted: Thu Jan 28, 2010 8:57 pm


I know nothing about poetry, but damn... eek
I loved the part about the old men and the young men

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PostPosted: Thu Jan 28, 2010 9:02 pm


Thanks I enjoy writing them.
PostPosted: Fri Jan 29, 2010 2:24 am


Amazing.
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PostPosted: Fri Jan 29, 2010 1:31 pm


Aww thanks
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