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 Posted: Tue Jan 26, 2010 11:28 pm
Remembering the sound of your growl,
Sexy and full of lust
Your face searching, demanding,
Begging me to obey
You come over me,
So loving and so strong
You ignite such passion in my soul
Leaving me to tremble and whimper with need.
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Posted: Sat Feb 06, 2010 6:59 am
I personally have never read a lot of this topic in poetry since it's not really my speed. Based on what little I know, I think this one is very good. It clearly displays the need for passion and emotion. My only complaint is that I feel like I am left hanging like there should be just a bit more to it, or a clearer ending. Hope this helps, I would love to read more.
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