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Bramfatura

 
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PostPosted: Wed Jan 20, 2010 11:53 am


Go through 'em and let me know what I can do differently. I feel like I'm lacking structural foundation. Like I've just been tweakin' s**t til it looks about right.

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PostPosted: Mon Feb 01, 2010 4:34 am


is cool, I love it

but, too mesy to me, sory sweatdrop


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Dokutoru

 
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PostPosted: Mon Feb 01, 2010 5:40 pm


woah its awesome. I can never draw muscles like that. I think the only thing you need to do is to smooth out your lines so it doesn't look so sketchy. BUT OVERALL ITS COOL xD I like the Goku picture xD
PostPosted: Sun Feb 07, 2010 11:16 am


I'm afraid I have to disagree with you both. I like the sketchy. It also reveals little trails of how my hand works when I draw and apply more to the picture than just the picture itself. however, there are certain ones I could stand to clean up more, just so its not so much scribble scrabble

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xMinorux

 
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PostPosted: Mon Feb 08, 2010 7:20 am


A lot of your work seems choppy, and others, like theres no effort done to it. Spend a while with every piece, trust me, its better.
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