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Corvosier

PostPosted: Tue Jan 19, 2010 1:53 pm


Name: Alain Callion
Age: 25
Gender: Male
Creature ID: 35270
Marital Status: Single, wife is deceased.
Family: None
Personality: Alain appears to most people to be sincere, honest, and genuinely nice as well as exuding a general charismatic presence as a result of his abilities. In truth though Alain is very disturbed having to fight to keep his sanity all the time and having to deal with some of the things hes seen or done. He is always conflicted.
History: Alain used to live the perfect life. He used to be a graduated student from university, he used to be top university athlete, he used to have a beautiful loving highschool sweetheart turned wife, he even came from a noble and rich family. His life couldn't have been any better but one day it all changed. It woke up from deep inside of him. It happened on his 23rd birthday, he had been enjoying a wonderful dinner with his wife, his dad, both brothers, and sister. The whole day he had noticed that he didn't quite feel well and it had only intensified as he started to make his way through supper. He felt very faint and about to pass out when his wife let out a scream seeing the odd bumps moving around under his skin. Almost as if on some unknown cue the vines had burst forth from his skin ripping through his flesh at numerous points on his left arm. The vines lunged directly for his wife piercing her skin as his and began to seemingly drain the blood from her body. This was repeated with the vines ripping from different areas of his flesh and attacking his other family members as he screamed, watching but unable to do anything. Once the vines were done their dirty business they retracted back into his body growing down to almost nothing once again, to the core of the plant deep down in Alain's body. That night Alain's mind cracked, the crack has slowly been widening as he is forced day to day to cope with the demands of his power
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Powers/Abilities: Alain was born with the ability to manifest a powerful plant growth from his body that he can control to a large degree and use in defensive and offensive ways the drawback is that the plant needs blood as sustenance to continue living and growing and if Alain does not feed it Alain could go into a frenzy and attack everyone around him or even drain Alain's blood in a last effort to survive. The plant also emits a pheromone that subtly effects those around him making them more agreeable in there interactions with him causing him to appear very charismatic. Alain also has skill with the katana and wakizashi as a result of his university Kenjutsu and Iaijutsu teams.
Other: None that I can think of.
PostPosted: Tue Jan 19, 2010 2:06 pm


An interesting character, You have my approval, however I'll let 5thmarauder have the final say. Hope to see you around the world of Hunted.

Daerdroth
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5thmarauder
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PostPosted: Tue Jan 19, 2010 6:26 pm


Hmm I'm having a hard time deciding on this one.

Now first off he is well thought out character and I like him. The problem I'm having is that his power isn't really "his". You said that its an alien plant of some sort. My problem with this is that, though it is very creative and unique, it would bring another element into the to that wouldn't quite fit. I'd like creatures powers to be natural and something they are born with if that's possible. Could you maybe look it over and try and make the plants possibly a part of him that he was born with, not subjected to?
PostPosted: Tue Jan 19, 2010 6:50 pm


I think it's a nifty power, and it would give my character a good fight if that ever happened blaugh but I also agree with Marauder. Perhaps have it just be a dormant Creature power that manifested violently.

Xxenotron
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Corvosier

PostPosted: Tue Jan 19, 2010 7:24 pm


Edit: Changed =]
PostPosted: Tue Jan 19, 2010 7:33 pm


well edited, it should be good now biggrin

Creature ID: 35270

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Daerdroth
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