hiniko nara
My girls name will be ayani and she had simply come in for a drink after a particularly long night. She knew
he was supposed to be in town but her hope that he wouldn't come here made her foolish. She was tence and sitting confidently in a stool only a couple of paces away from him. Her whiteish blond hair was long and draped around her pale face. She was petite for a vampire and her skin seemed almost translucent compared to the others. She glared at him her green eyes full of hatred.
"Long time indeed but I am not toy nogi you should know by now" She sounded confident but inside she was terrified...and curious.
**Moderately good description of the girl. I can really see her skin with the words you picked
**spelling: Ayani (proper nouns are capitalized), tense (spelled with an s rather than a c), white/blond or whitish (it can be written with a slash or just remove the e ridding the word of the double vowel), Noji (with a j not a g)
**possibly describe what she is thinking about him a bit more, what strikes her the most about the man
"Now now, you don't have to be so mean..." he hissed rising from his stool and pacing over in her general direction. He set his glass down next to her all while smirking, "Ayani my love...". The rest of the group stared at him as he pushed bits of her hair behind her ear, "didn't you miss me? I see your system hasn't had a full recovery..." He pressed his nail into her skin ever so slightly causing a small cut. His eyes tinted red at the smell, "you still smell absolutely delicious!"
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