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Physical Description

Eyes: Narrow glass-green eyes.

Hair: He has arse-length, straight black hair that has dozens of small braids woven into it, all lengths and sizes. He has an uneven fringe of shaggy long bangs that touch the tops of his eyes, and it's usually pulled into a loose ponytail, or half braided, half down.

Face: Oval-shaped face, slender and angular. Has silver studs in his ears the shape of skulls.

Clothes: He's tall, slender, and wiry. He's not very muscular, but he's pretty lithe. And you better not tease him about his slightly feminine figure, otherwise he'll reduce you to nothing but a pile of blah. He's also always cold, so he wears layers, fur, and scarves a lot, but he dresses in business casual to formal wear most of the time. He doesn't believe in wearing jeans or teeshirts or anything "sloppy" as he sees it. Streamlined and crisp looking, that's his philosophy. He also has a thing for knee-high boots.


Hobbies

People watching - So he likes to sit and stare at people. Creepy much? Fiyero sits in cafes or restaraunts and drinks coffee while "examining" the people that walk by. He likes to evaluate and observe the way that humans interact with each other...though sometimes it freaks people out a bit...okay, a lot. When people notice him staring, he usually leaves before they have a chance to call the police or anything drastic like that. The simple reason for Fiyero doing this is that people just fascinate him. He likes to observe their behaviors.

Crot...cheting..? - Fiyero has this obsession with creating things, and one of his little hobbies is crocheting. Yes, that's right, with yarn and needles and the whole shebang. He makes all sorts of things, from socks to hats to scarves. He's pretty darn good at it too, if he does say so himself. But don't you dare tease him about it; he's likely to stab you through the heart with one of his crotchet needles, and damn, can those things hurt.

Bartending...sort of - Fiyero loves alcohol, but rather than go to bars and drink, he buys cases of all sorts of alcohol himself; rum, gin, vodka, anything he can, and then he mixes them together to make himself a perfect drink. This is all done with careful consideration, of course. He doesn't just pick and choose at random; each drink is given a lot of thought and the more harmful it can be to his system, the more he likes it.


Virtues

Panic? What's that mean? - Despite being a Negaverse agent, he's very...very calm and collected most of the time. When it comes down to the wire and it's intense and dangerous, Fiyero stays cool and collected, and he keeps his rational mindset. However, the only exception to this is when he fights. He loves the thrill of battle, and he gets extremely excited when fighting.

Dedicated and determined - Fiyero will stop at nothing until he completes the goal he's set out to do...as long as it benefits him in the end. If he's fighting a Senshi, he'll keep on battling until he either defeats them, or he's so injured he can't move. If given a mission by his superiors, Fiyero will weigh the pros and cons of completing the mission (basically what will he gain from it), and if the pros outweigh the cons (which is most of the time) he'll stop at nothing to complete the mission. However, if the cons outweigh the pros, he'll do absolutely nothing, and go back to his own place and do something he finds enjoyable.

Voltaire's got nothing on me - Despite his rather apathetic nature, Fiyero IS quite strong, but most of that strength lies in his wicked intelligence and quick thinking. Physically, he's still rather strong, but his nearly unshakable logic and razor sharp tongue can stop someone in their tracks. He uses mostly psychological wit, drawing from his knowledge of how a person acts and reacts to certain situations (stemming from his people-watching habit), and uses leaps of intuition to discover their fears and weaknesses, which he then uses to his advantage. Often, if working with a partner, he'll stand on the sidelines and observe the fight, analyzing every little detail, every move and then relate everything to his partner to gain them the upper hand.


Flaws

Extraordinarily narrow minded - He sees the world in black and white; it's either one way, or it's not. He is extremely rational, to the point of overanalzying everything to death. When he finds something to do that's enjoyable or interesting to himself (such as blood and gore and fighting) it sometimes confuses him when he finds out that others do not enjoy the same things as he does.

When I do something, I'll do it until it's done - What Fiyero does, Fieryo does for himself. When he's in the middle of doing something, Fiyero will not stop until it's done. While this may seem like a good thing, it most of the time isn't when it comes to him. He becomes obsessed, and won't do anything else except what he already started. This is true for when he creates his own drinks, or crochets, or reads, or observes people. He won't stop until he gets what he needs, no matter what the situation.

You can't be better than me. It's not possible - Fiyero believes he's better than everyone. This isn't arrogance on his part, (though it is to everyone else); it's simply his "rational" deduction that his intellect and intelligence are far superior to everyone else's. Therefore he doesn't understand it when someone comes up with a better plan than he did; it makes him confused and angry, which he channels into his fighting or his other work.

Panic- what does that mean? --- While this is a "cool" trait that works for characters, roleplay-wise it'll be very difficult to roleplay with him if he doesn't react to anything. It leaves very little to react and reply to in roleplays! I reaaalllly consider revising this virtue <3 Or perhaps change it to that he doesnt panic in desperate or very pressured situations? Or perhaps, he doesn't act on rash emotions or he doesn't let emotion overtake him?

The whole channeling thing, I'm thinking you have to run by Rose or natsu, and even then, it might not be allowed. Students aren't usually allowed to have "extra powers" except those that pertain to their weapon/sphere~

This is what I have in mind...and it's right -- You should probably rephrase it. It's better to describe your flaw and virtue (even if they're the same) in two different ways instead of copy and paste + some additions.

His virtue is also a flaw. He sees the world in black and white; it's either one way, or it's not. He is extremely rational, to the point of overanalzying everything to death. He only knows what he finds enjoyable, and sometimes it confuses him when he finds out that others do not enjoy the same things as he does.

This doesnt make sense in your virtue/flaw? This title implies arrogance and belief that HE is right but seems to have little to do with the description. He sees the world as black/white so he seems like he has a very narrow view in the world. But how does this tie into his rationality? Is it biased rational thinking that lists the world into two separate parts? And if so, what sort of rationality leads him to that?

Secondly, what does enjoying things have to do with this? It seems like it should tie in but something was missing in between sentences? Perhaps you should rephrase it to "narrow-mindedness" instead of your current title? From the way he puts the world into a certain category and doesn't understand why people dont like the same things HE does, it seems like a very narrow-minded part of his personality?

Not so much a crit perhaps but...

Despite his rather apathetic nature, Fiyero IS quite strong, but most of that strength lies in his wicked intelligence and quick thinking. Physically, he's not all that great, but his nearly unshakable logic and razor sharp tongue can stop someone in their tracks.


I'd love to see examples of that. Any time you state your character can do something to -another- character I normally think your best bet is to sight an example. After all you never know when someone will or won't catch on, or how someone will react and you can't dictate it. BUT, you can convince people he's capable of being cutting by setting up a situation that we can all see and go 'Wowww... he -is- good"

sorry <3 liking much of what you have, I just always hunger for lots of detail and little examples biggrin