So I did these drawings in paint and would like some Advice and Critique on them so here thet are.
Posted: Mon Jan 18, 2010 6:03 pm
1st picture: -Neck is too thick -The knees should be higher, I think -The hand is too small -The gun lacks depth -Head/face is sorta round/lacks distinct shape -Nice colouring overall, but the shading on the thighs could be a bit more round and the face could use some shading
2nd picture: -Neck and head/face shape again -Shoulder to right is maybe sticking out too much... depends where that arm is going -Great job on the bows -Line under breast to left seems out of place
3rd picture: -Neck and head/face shape again -Collar bone probably shouldn't show like that unless she's starving to death -Hat seems like a cardboard cutout that's falling towards us -Breasts seem twisted too far to the left -Hair does not entirely cover the head shape
Pretty decent overall, but use the pencil and/or curved line tool for the heads.
i think it looks pretty good in paint,, all i can draw is stick figures in paint
Posted: Sun Jan 31, 2010 1:24 am
I've being meaning to install photoshop but you know how it is.
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Posted: Sun Jan 31, 2010 9:54 am
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my advice: stop using paint lol
Now, now, there isn't anything wrong with using Paint. I think it's quite amazing how the OP does in Paint. Much better than other Paint artists I have seen.
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