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WIP.... plz comment.. crits will be nice

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Cartooned DOOM

PostPosted: Sun Jan 17, 2010 4:44 pm


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PostPosted: Sun Jan 17, 2010 4:45 pm


Um, I like all the crazy stuff going on! Definitely. But, I think it deserves some good inking and then a hard eraser over the smudges. *nods*

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Cartooned DOOM

PostPosted: Sun Jan 17, 2010 4:52 pm


i dont think i will ink this one
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Um, I like all the crazy stuff going on! Definitely. But, I think it deserves some good inking and then a hard eraser over the smudges. *nods*
PostPosted: Sun Jan 17, 2010 5:07 pm


Wow eek I love this. Everything in the picture is eye catching... Good Work biggrin

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PostPosted: Sun Jan 17, 2010 5:22 pm


Really nice :] The only thing I can really see that is fixable is the snarling dogs' teeth, they don't quite align with the nose, and the man that is jumping in the center of the picture..his right thumb seems a bit off.

Other than that REALLY good!!
PostPosted: Sun Jan 17, 2010 5:45 pm


crits and compliments, the best thing a pic poster can have
plain insane09
Really nice :] The only thing I can really see that is fixable is the snarling dogs' teeth, they don't quite align with the nose, and the man that is jumping in the center of the picture..his right thumb seems a bit off.

Other than that REALLY good!!

Cartooned DOOM


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PostPosted: Sun Jan 17, 2010 6:31 pm


It's very busy, which is good with this because it works. Though, I have to say the top right corner is a little unbalanced because there is a lot of open space up there and the rest of the picture is full to the brim with things. I would shoot for either balancing it out or making more room somewhere else. Other than that, this looks GREAT! Good job!
PostPosted: Fri Jan 22, 2010 5:12 am


interesting.. ^_^
it's like a boundless art..
spreads the mind to the limit.

cool art!

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