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I love the hair and the general way you did the clothes.
I'd make Udongein's (the one on the right) thighs thicker... If you follow the lines up as if they were drawn, her hips are very tiny or too low. I think the wrinkle or whatever on the left side of her top seems out of place. If the clothes were more wrinkled on that side, then why would the part on the bottom hang down lower than on the other side (where there's only a small wrinkle to pull it up)? Also, the arm to our right appears to be much thicker than the one to the left.
For the smaller girl, her arms seem like... really straight. I'd give them a bit more shape and show where the elbow oughta be. Her shoulders don't seem to connect to the neck entirely... well, not her shoulders, but like... the skin/muscles that would be inbetween. Her legs also maybe don't seem to connect to where her hips would be... I'd maybe move the leg on our left a bit more to the left. And for her lower hand, I'd put that line on her palm facing the other way. With her hand spread out like that, I don't think you'd really notice those muscles or whatever like you'd see when your hand is closed more, but if you are showing it a bit, then you have to keep in mind the pinky's side of the hand isn't entirely flat either. But I think you can't show both at the same time 'cause that would make it look like the hand is kinda cupped or whatever. Anyhow, with the angle her hand is on, I'd show the bump on the pinky's side instead.


Very nice picture overall. Hopefully I can learn/memorize some things by examining it more.