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iNerdGirl

PostPosted: Tue Jan 12, 2010 1:27 pm


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This is a piece I drew to experiment some with the comic book style art. It's my first time drawing in a style like this, I'm usually much more manga/anime style, and I just wanted to see what everyone thought.
PostPosted: Tue Jan 12, 2010 2:32 pm


I like it a lot, great job! Keep up the good work!
I just have to say, her legs/feet throw me off from the body a little. But other than that, I love the design, and have nothing else to report. <3

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PostPosted: Tue Jan 12, 2010 2:42 pm


Thank you very much. The legs/feet are a bit strange looking, my unfortunate shading is the cause of it. She's supposed to be standing with one leg behind the other if it's a bit hard to tell.
PostPosted: Tue Jan 12, 2010 3:13 pm



Glad to help! I hope to see you improve. ;3

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PostPosted: Wed Jan 13, 2010 5:29 pm


Wow <3

You're gurd smile


I'm trying different styles with mine!
PostPosted: Thu Jan 14, 2010 3:05 am


is cool, I love it whee

but do some hightlight on the hair


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Denso

PostPosted: Thu Jan 14, 2010 6:17 am


Wow nice hehehe blaugh .... though it's a bit dark...nah that's just my screen. xd
PostPosted: Thu Jan 14, 2010 8:43 pm


It's really nice.
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iNerdGirl

PostPosted: Sat Jan 16, 2010 8:16 am


Thank you for all the wonderful comments, I really appreciate it.
PostPosted: Sat Jan 16, 2010 4:53 pm


Holly smokes its smexy lool! I think you just need to brighten the picture a little.

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anir_brokenear

PostPosted: Sun Jan 17, 2010 10:19 am


really good ^_^
but i do think you should use less black and more gray- dark grey for those dark zones because you can't really tell how the feet look
PostPosted: Sat Feb 06, 2010 2:55 pm


I think you are really going for something here. Like I can see how good you are with faces you just need a little more work on coloring clothes and posture. Try to imagine a straight line going down the picture to help keep her body straight.

Also for the coloring, I think the pants...er leather would have looked a lot nicer if the coloring was smoother and the whites were brighter. It would really show off what kind of material you are going for.

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xMinorux

PostPosted: Mon Feb 08, 2010 7:23 am


It strains my eyes to try and look at it. I love the shading and lineart though, good job. If you were using photoshop for coloring, then, Layers>Adjustments>Curves.
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