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 Posted: Sun Jan 10, 2010 2:36 pm
 Welcome. Here, you are allowed to run practice simulations using a variety of scenarios, taking the role of whomever you may please. Anyone may jump into the designated scenario at any point in time.
I will start these simulations, and I will end them. I may even decide to take part in them, as well.
In these scenarios, your abilities will be observed, your skills assessed, and your potential defined. The Crew, along with myself, will analyze your movements and point out your errors in hopes that you will make an effort to improve.
If you wish to improve, you've come to the right place. If, however, you cannot handle critique, I implore you to leave. This training is not for the lighthearted. I will correct each mistake that I see, regardless of your status in this guild. And if I make a mistake, I can only hope that you will give me the same treatment.
This will help you improve, so long as you take each piece of critique, each mistake, and use it as a lesson, a block to build off of to fulfill your potential.
If you still wish to proceed... come right in.
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Posted: Mon Jan 11, 2010 1:10 pm
The rules of this generator are simple enough. Even Demyx could use this without hassle... after the first few times, anyway. The scenario starts when I deem it ready, and it will end when I deem it ready.
When you enter the scenario, begin the post with an out-of-character proclamation of the character you will be portraying.
Usually, I will only need your name, but if I am unacquainted with your character {if there is no profile for your character posted anywhere}, then you will also need to give me the more important details, such as the most significant personality trait, weapons and, if the case comes up, summons.
If I see any errors in your posts, I will edit the post to include a commentary pointing out each error I spot. As such, remember to check all of your previous posts.
My word is law. If I say that you can or cannot do something in the scenario, then there is to be no debate.
If I feel that you are over-powering the character of your choice, I will call you out on it. GMing is just as much a mistake as a grammatical error. Don't push it.
You may only play one character per scenario.
If I feel the need to add another rule to this list, I will do so. Keep up.
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Posted: Thu Jan 14, 2010 5:22 pm
Current Scenario: Universe: Heartfelt Adventure Location: Forest Pathway Weather: Cloudy and Chilly with a light breeze Time of Day: Mid-Afternoon (Approx. 4 P.M.), Sun behind the trees. Description: The dirt path is surrounded by thick woods on either side. With the clouds blanketing the sky, and the sun already behind the trees, it's almost dark enough to be considered evening. The breeze blowing through the trees makes it hard to tell if there's any movement besides your own because you can't hear even the snapping of twigs.
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Posted: Thu Jan 14, 2010 6:41 pm
[Dani :: Forest Pathway]
Dani had been walking on this pathway for what seemed like days to her. Each time that it seemed to be the end it continued on with no end in sight. As she realized she was going to be here for another night she started to zip up her black hoodie and put the hood to cover her face in order to store warmth inside of her body. Her clothing at the moment was the black hoodie with some tight black jeans that had a huge white triangle right at the end of the leg. She was clearly not very good with the cold.
"Looks like it will be awhile before I actually find any kind of village or even a person and I will have to soon make camp. I might as well use my weapons for something at the momment." she spoke to herself to pass the time.
She went to the right side of the road and up to the nearest tree she could find. As soon as she did however, she slashed some of the bark of the tree since her weapon was not made for strength but for multiple movements.
She then reached into her special messenger bag and found a simple match. She struck it eagerly and lit the wood in order to start the flame. "And they said I couldn't make a fire!" she smiled at her work and sat near the fire to keep warm.
[[EDIT:
Attack Strength: 4
Attack Speed: 7
Magic Strength: 4
Magic Defense: 6
Guard Strength: 4
Evasive Reflexes: 6
Outright Speed: 5
Constitutional Endurance: 4
Energy: 5 ]]
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Posted: Sat Jan 16, 2010 6:54 pm
[Jenny :: Forest Pathway]
"Dani!" Jenny's voice rang out, only to be snatched away by the wind and trees. The time mage trudged through the forest, her eyes scanning upwards at trees rising into the sky like pillars, save it seemed to just go on, endlessly. She shivered, not just from the chill but from the atmosphere. It was dark, shadows casting across her way even though she knew the sun was still out. Last thing she wanted to do was to get caught in the forest at night. For a split second, she contemplated stopping time to find Dani but it would only drain her energy and the forest was large... what if she couldn't find the chakram wielder? What made her run off anyways?
The flutist closed her eyes, trying to pinpoint Dani's exact location, someplace up ahead... a bit distant sounding but at least it was still in range. As long as nothing tries to bite my head off... I'm still good. You're okay, Jen... you're ooooo-kay. She tried to reassure herself with Siren chuckling in the back of her mind like her summoner had lost her wits.
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Posted: Sat Jan 16, 2010 7:52 pm
[Dani :: Forest Pathway]
Dani turned her head to the side at the sound of the wind and shivered. "Today is just not my day is it?" she sighed and curled up her body in order to keep warm. She leaned closer to her tiny fire as well because it kept 'her hope of surviving alive'.
She thought she had heard someone before, but it must've been the wind. The only way anyone could find her was to follow the path that was carved out or see the fire that she had made. Dani then started to make bubbles in her hands in order to pass the time. "I hope it doesn't rain," she said to herself in order to keep company or to fill a void.
[[Corrections: 'abit' is not a word; 'her hope alive of surviving' does not make grammatical sense, it should be 'her hope of surviving alive'; when dialog would end with a period, and yet more of the paragraph goes on after, you end it with a comma instead. Just as an example:
"I hope it doesn't rain," she said to herself etc.
Also, please do not delete these 'Correction' add-ons. It helps me to keep track of your previous errors so that I may see what you're having the most problems with.]]
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Posted: Mon Jan 18, 2010 5:30 pm
[Ajora : Forest Path - Upper Canopy]
The Avatar of the Bloody Angel watched silently from dozens of meters above, keeping an eye on the young girl beside the fire as well as sensing the presence of Jenny dashing in the first girl's direction. There were likely a few others nearby from what he heard.
.:They whisper...:.
Ajora remained motionless, looming over his prey and using the darkness to mask his presence... both literally and metaphysically, as the Darkness enveloped his aura and made him undetectable, even to the time mage.
What do they think they're doing...?
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Posted: Mon Jan 18, 2010 9:55 pm
[Nick{Chaos::Mortuary Sword}::Forest Pathway]
The blonde boy sighed as he walked along the path, his cloak covering up his arms and body, descending to about his shins. His eyes peered around almost with a sense of paranoia, and his mask covered up his frown. Nick wasn't one to be on his own, especially in the Kingdom Hearts Universe. He knew that the Heartless just pop up every time you think you've won a break, so he muttered a few words under his breath.
"Chaos, dear god, if you don't help me when an enemy comes, I swear..."
Be quiet, child. I will aid you. You are my host, and as much as I'd love to watch you squirm before dying, I need you alive.
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Posted: Mon Jan 18, 2010 10:51 pm
[Jenny :: Forest Pathway]
A shiver curled up Jenny's spine as the mage quickened her pace. She didn't like the feeling of the forest and it wasn't just because of the stereotype that forests were dark, drafty and scary. Even if this particular forest covered all three of those attributes. It just felt like... she was being watched, though it could have easily been her paranoia kicking in. The time mage sighed and trudged forward before breaking into a run, hoping she'd find Dani soon.
Instead she collided headfirst with someone... someone whose heartsong she did not know. Her butt hit the forest floor rather hard, even taking into consideration the fallen leaves that littered the ground. Fudge dangits! She mentally cursed at herself for being unobservant... this was exactly how people's heads ended up getting lopped off. "Ah... sorry about that." Jenny mumbled while rubbing her sore head.
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Posted: Tue Jan 19, 2010 12:56 am
[Nick{Chaos::Mortuary Sword}::Forest Pathway]
Nick paused for a moment, then took a step backwards. A girl had basically just plowed into him. "...Well, fancy meeting you here. My name is God, and you, child, are one of my creations. Do you like this world that I have made for you?" He said in all seriousness, but one glance into his eyes would prove he was lying through his teeth.
He kneeled down, offering a gloved hand from underneath his cloak. "Would you like a hand up, miss, or shall I let you roll around some more in the dirt?"
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Posted: Tue Jan 19, 2010 2:26 am
[Jenny :: Forest Pathway]
"Rolling is actually pretty fun." Jenny retorted quietly as she raised her head, before accepting his hand. Something tugged on her mind about it being dangerous but she acted before she thought it through... of course. She searched him for his heartsong, trying to commit it to memory. A cloak, that was oddly suspicious... plus there was the fact that his heartsong was new to her. Her brown eyes were questioning, but she said nothing as he helped her to her feet.
"Thanks." The mage replied with a smile, before voicing her question. "What are you doing wandering this place? In a suspicious cloak?" Jenny had to remind herself not to be too trusting before this guy did end up lopping off her head.
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Posted: Tue Jan 19, 2010 2:32 am
[Nick{Chaos::Mortuary Sword}::Forest Pathway]
Nick chuckled, patting the girl's head with his gloved hand. "Simple, dear girl. I'm here because I choose to be, as did Fate. It's a powerful thing, you know. I mean, in one instant, the world I once knew came crashing down all around me and left me here with only this cloak, these clothes, a weapon, and a second voice in my head."
The swordsman sighed, bringing up the past, even if it was only five days ago, still hurt a lot. All of his friends, his family, everything he knew and loved was gone. But he'd have to trudge on, it seemed. Maybe this girl could help in some way? If not, he could always let Chaos posess him and obliterate her. But, that wouldn't be very gentlemanlike, now would it?
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Posted: Tue Jan 19, 2010 3:03 am
[Jenny :: Forest Pathway]
Jenny raised an eyebrow at what he said, her paranoia not letting go for one instant. Is this how a insane killer talks? The way he spoke sounded pretty darn fishy but maybe he was just bitter. Maybe she should invite him to join their group? They were always open for more people.
"Be careful..." Siren warned. She sounded unsettled, the fabrics of her ethereal wardrobe shifting in the non-existent winds of her hair.
I know... Jenny murmured back in her head. She smiled easily, still wanting to trust him... oddly enough. "What's your name?" The mage asked casually, all the while keeping an eye out on the rest of the forest. She strained her ears, determined to not let the same mistake happen twice.
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Posted: Tue Jan 19, 2010 3:08 am
[Nick{Chaos::Mortuary Sword}::Forest Pathway]
"My name? Ah, yes. My name is Nicholas, please call me Nick, though. I would certainly prefer you didn't call me by my full name. It's overly long and a waste of letters. What about you? Do you have a name? Or are you just a figment of my imagination just like everything else in this god forsaken world!? It's been what seems like five days, and I still haven't woken up from this eternal nightmare!"
Nick rubbed his temples, trying his best to not totally spazz out like an escaped convict from the loony bin, which wasn't really working out so well. "Yes, well...I believe I have calmed down a bit."
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Posted: Tue Jan 19, 2010 2:26 pm
[Dani :: Forest Pathway]
Dani had been sitting near her fire for what seemed to her like an eternity. It seemed like the cold was getting to her. Although she was a Goth and loved the dark forest as much as the next person, she could possibly die out here.
As she thought of this she heard a few people talking what seemed to be near. "Dear god help me," she muttered quietly, "It better not be an enemy.” She quietly got up and summoned her chakrams just in case there was a fight along the way.
She then hid behind one of the trees and said "Ok who is there?! It better be someone friendly." She then mentally slapped herself for saying that out loud and pulled her hoodie strings tightly in order to hide her face from the people that she had heard before.
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