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 Posted: Sun Jan 10, 2010 11:05 am
Haruko entered the empty classroom and took a seat in the chair behind the teacher's desk before taking out a scroll and reading it. Taking a quick glance at the clock, Haruko softly voiced out her question, "Hm, I wonder when the others will arrive? Its almost time for class to start..." shrugging her shoulders at her own question, Haruko returned her attention back to reading her scroll.
{Okay, post here to let us know that you've found the place okay.}
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Posted: Sun Jan 10, 2010 6:19 pm
Vlad stumbles through the classroom door.
Clumsily he trips on shoelace, lands on face.
exclaims: "I'm OK." in a mumbled tone
Pushes off the ground, falls back down.
Pushes off the ground harder, stands up!
*smiles*
*lazily salutes*
Exclaims louder than needed: "Here teache"
"sorry I'm late, got a wee bit lost..... but I found it!"
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Posted: Sun Jan 10, 2010 6:41 pm
{A few quick pointers before I reply. First off you did your response in phrases. You're response would flow better if you connected them all together like I did in the above response. And watch out for those capitals, you forgot to included them in several places. Other than that, welcome to the classroom, glad you found the place okay.}
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Posted: Sun Jan 10, 2010 9:03 pm
Kaisho enters the classroom behind a fellow student who seemed to be nervously tripping over his own feet, "Glad I made it in time." Kaisho said as he smilled," You alright dude? Kinda seems like your having trouble."
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Posted: Tue Jan 12, 2010 9:28 am
Kaisho walked past his classmate with a smirk on his face, "So what we gonna be learning today Ms.......wait I don't even know my own teachers name!" he said as he sat down at his desk laughing.
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Posted: Tue Jan 12, 2010 1:56 pm
Haruko looked up from the scroll she was currently reading when she heard someone come in and address her. When she saw him fall face first onto the floor, Haruko quickly placed her scroll and rushed over to help him. She had just reached him, when she saw him get up only to fall again a second later. Bending down in an attempt to help him, Haruko watched as he quickly pushed himself off the ground and give her a smile and salute. Standing back up, Haruko brushed off the invisible dust on her clothes and smiled back at her student. Just as she was about to reply, another student entered the room.
Haruko watched as the new student walk over to sit in an empty desk and laugh at his own lack of knowledge on his teacher's name and shook her head in response. Looking at both students, Haruko gave them both a warm smile before speaking. "Good morning guys, my name's Haruko Tsubame and I'll be one of your instructors for the remainder of this course. First off, I would like to get to know you two better so, go ahead, tell me something about yourself. It can be a bit of background story, your favourite food, colour, whatever that interests you." Haruko gave each a small smile before heading back over to sit at her desk.
{Alrighty guys, first up, tell me in OOC your usual routine before posting up a reply. Do you reread over your post before submitting? Do you use the preview button, stuff like that.}
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Posted: Tue Jan 12, 2010 8:17 pm
Kaisho stood up and slightly bowed at his teacher and sarcastically said, "The name's Kaisho Yotsuki, I practice my kenjutsu in hopes to one day become as great a ninja as my ancestor could never be, and my best friend is a puppet." Kaisho sat back down at his desk, still looking towards his teacher, "So Ms. Tsubame what will you be teaching us today?"
{I always preview what i type just to check my mistakes.}
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Posted: Tue Jan 12, 2010 11:14 pm
Amaranth wandered towards the classroom, anxious to see what a lesson was like from a teachers perspective. It would be interesting to see the new students as well. Peering around the doorframe, the large genin was relieved to see Kenji wasn't there yet, if he wasn't there then she was technically still early. Brushing some of her red hair out of her amaranthine eyes, the short ninja walked into the room in time to hear a student ask about what they would be learning. Waiting until the student had finished, Amaranth looked over to Haruko and asked "Umm... Did you want me to do anything, or do I just watch for now?"
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Posted: Wed Jan 13, 2010 1:56 pm
Haruko listened attentively to Kaisho's response and when he mentioned a puppet being his best friend, she was immediatly interested. 'A puppet you say? I wonder if he's going to be our village's first puppet master?' She was about to ask Kaisho another question when she heard someone else enter the room. Spotting that it was Amaranth, Haruko gave her former student and current apprentice a big smile, "Welcome to the classroom Amaranth-san, so glad to have you joining us." Getting up from her seat, Haruko walked over to stand by Amaranth's side before introducing her to them. "Kaisho-san, Vlad-san, this person currently standing beside me is one of my former students and she's going to be your assistant teacher for the remainder of the course. So treat her nicely okay?" Haruko then turned to whisper instructions into Amaranth's ear, "How about giving the rp lesson response a try? And once you've done that, would you like to try a hand at approving profile?"
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Posted: Wed Jan 13, 2010 8:33 pm
Amaranth nodded and quickly hurried over to the board, placing her bag on a desk as she grabbed a piece of chalk. Pausing for a moment to think, the large genin stared at the board and then began to write.
You are walking back towards the village from a small training session within the Ukude Forest and have just reached a small clearing near the river. As you step into the clearing you hear some noises from the bushes opposite the river and then a sudden crunching of wood as a large boar charges out towards you, breathing heavily with a katana buried deep in it's right side. Quickly glancing back in the direction of the village you can see the village walls through the trees, within running distance if you can escape the boar.
Turning back around to face the students, Amaranth brushed some hair out of her eyes and then said, "Umm... Well, this part of the lesson is just to check your knowledge of roleplaying... All you need to do is write up a response on the board and remember to use correct spelling and grammar..." Pausing for a moment, Amaranth tilted her head to the side and then added, "Oh yes... Once you have responded, just show me a copy of your profile... I just need to check over it a bit." And with a slight smile she held out two pieces of chalk.
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Posted: Wed Jan 13, 2010 8:57 pm
Kaisho walked up to the chalk board hoping he would get it right. As the piece of chalk touched the board, Kaisho closed his eyes and began to imagine how he would handle the situation.
Kaisho tired from a long day training slowly walked back towards the village from Ukude Woods. His legs were tired, his chakra was running low, and the river he saw ahead of him looked refreshing. Just then he heard the rustling of leaves and the snapping of branches as a large boar charge passed, Kaisho barely dodging its tusks. The boar was almost twice Kaisho's size with a katana strangely sticking out from its side. Before kaisho had time to think, to boar charged again. Kaisho barley had the reflexes to dodge this second time, but he managed to jump over the beast head but not high enough to land behind the boar. Kaisho landed right on the beast back. He had to think quickly on how he could stop the boar before he ended up another lost student. Kaisho reached for the scroll on his back, bit his thumb and summoned his puppet Gilgan. Gilgan landed right on the boars back, and the weight of the puppet drove the boar to the ground. Kaisho quickly reached for his medicine pack, and as he used Gilgan to keep the boar down he removed the katana and bandaged the wound. The boar then with a sudden burst of strength threw Gilgan and Kaisho aside. Kaisho thought to himself that he was gone for as the boar approached, Kaisho tried desperately to control Gilgan but he had barely enough chakra to move his head. the boar now stood over him, slowly leaning down at Kaisho's face. Then to Kaisho's surprise the boar licked him! The boar then trotted away back into the bushes and Kaisho thought about how no one was gonna believe this story.
Profile
Basic Information
Real Name: Kaisho Yotsuki
Codename: Syn
Nickname: Kai
Gender: Male
Age: 17
Date of Birth: December 11
Dominate Hand: Right
Disabilities: None
Appearance
Height: 6'3"
Weight: 165 lbs.
Body Frame: Thin and muscled, well toned
Skin Tone: Pale
Hair Length: Short with long bangs that cover the left side of his face.
Hair Color: Light Green
Eye Color: yellow
Clothing Description: Dark blue cargo pant with black toeless shoes, black sleeveless undershirt, and a dark green vest covered in pockets.
Personality: Kaisho has a sarcastic laid back personality, that at times gives others the impression that he doen't care about anything. When in fact he holds his friends above all else.
Likes: Training in his special kenjutsu in which he utilizes a puppet called "Gilgan"
Dislikes: People who have no respect for those who are weaker than them.
Talents: Cooking and drawing
Dreams: To become strong enough to protect anyone he think of as family.
Combat Information
Rank: Student
Preferred Combat: Kenjutsu and puppet style
Official Style: Custom
Fighting Technique: Close Range
Preferred Weapon(s): Jian and Gilgan
Power/Element: Forms - Kaisho has no element, instead he has learned to
focus his chakra through his sword to increase its range and effectivness. He can even release the chakra from his sword to perform mid to long range attacks in the form of chakra waves.
Gilgan
Type: Close combat puppet
Design: Resembles an orc like oni.
Weapons: Large armored fists designed for heavy strikes with a stinger cables in each of its palms that can extend for up to 15 feet, to quickly impale its target before that target can react. A flamethrower in it's mouth, and a large shield on its back.
History
TBA
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Posted: Wed Jan 13, 2010 9:49 pm
Amaranth turned to look at the board, quickly reading through Kaisho's response, occasionally correcting the odd mistake before turning to the student, "Well... It's a pretty good response, you just need to remember to capitalize and use apostrophes to indicate possession." she said, indicating the board and pointing out the mistakes. Quote: Kaisho tired from a long day training slowly walked back towards the village from Ukude Woods. His legs were tired, his chakra was running low, and the river he saw ahead of him looked refreshing. Just then he heard the rustling of leaves and the snapping of branches as a large boar charge passed, Kaisho barely dodging its tusks. The boar was almost twice Kaisho's size with a katana strangely sticking out from its side. Before Kaisho had time to think, the boar charged again. Kaisho barley had the reflexes to dodge this second time, but he managed to jump over the beast head but not high enough to land behind the boar. Kaisho landed right on the beast's back. He had to think quickly on how he could stop the boar before he ended up another lost student. Kaisho reached for the scroll on his back, bit his thumb and summoned his puppet Gilgan. Gilgan landed right on the boar's back, and the weight of the puppet drove the boar to the ground. Kaisho quickly reached for his medicine pack, and as he used Gilgan to keep the boar down he removed the katana and bandaged the wound. The boar then with a sudden burst of strength threw Gilgan and Kaisho aside. Kaisho thought to himself that he was gone for as the boar approached, Kaisho tried desperately to control Gilgan but he had barely enough chakra to move his head. The boar now stood over him, slowly leaning down at Kaisho's face. Then to Kaisho's surprise the boar licked him! The boar then trotted away back into the bushes and Kaisho thought about how no one was gonna believe this story.
She stated, facing the tall student once more, occasionally glancing at the profile he had handed her.
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Posted: Wed Jan 13, 2010 10:06 pm
Kaisho felt relieved of the response Amaranth had to his profile and his what if situation. "I'm glad you like it and I'll try harder next time so iI don't make as many mistakes. Oh and I'm working on getting a picture for my profile." Kaisho said as he sighed with relief. "Would you like me to give a demonstration of my skills later?" Kaisho asked Amaranth.
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Posted: Thu Jan 14, 2010 6:53 pm
Amaranth glanced at Kaisho again, slightly surprised by the offer as many people try to keep their strongest skills hidden for as long as possible. Suddenly she paused, if he was revealing this skill then his mastery of puppets would probably be extremely advanced. Then she nodded and smiled slightly before asking, "That would be interesting. So... Umm... What else can your puppet do? I haven't seen anyone use puppets for fighting before." Finishing with a small sigh of annoyance that there were still so many skills she had not yet seen, the large genin quickly looked towards Haruko, hoping that she was doing this right.
((Okay next part, respond to this out of character (Within brackets). Explain what godmodding and metagaming are and give examples.
Also, ZaRoJaCk has said that he has quit the guild. Apparently he doesn't have enough time to roleplay.))
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