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Fatality Ninja

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Posted: Thu Jan 07, 2010 8:07 pm

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It was only a quick sketch, but I would like some opinions on it. If I had my tablet pen then I would have CGed it (I was going to do something with her arm CGed that would make it not seem as random). I colorized it in photoshop to make it a little bit more interesting. Critiquing is encouraged. 3nodding

Posted: Fri Jan 08, 2010 9:27 am

Nice ^^ I love those eyes biggrin

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broken_bleeding_angel

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Posted: Fri Jan 08, 2010 12:41 pm

Her arms are super long. Elbow should be at the same level of her waist. Her eyes are off a little bit. The pose is a bit stiff too. her hips should be more tilted on the right side since it seems her left leg is the weight baring one. =3= She also has a very long neck

Background character's nose seems a bit off to me too. Hmmm, maybe it's because I can only see one nostril and not two.

But over all you did a great job on the detail. ^w^

Posted: Fri Jan 08, 2010 2:22 pm

Seems all alright to me. :3 though arms seem a bit too long.

Ritsmi

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Jaru the Artist

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Posted: Sat Jan 09, 2010 10:52 pm

um...wow. Its a style in itself but all in all its awesome. The mouth on the larger background girl seems turned counter clock wise a little bit. If you get around to CGing it can you send it to me please. sweatdrop
Here is my email if you want to send it to me: rodandcustom45@gmail.com

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