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yugi the flame alchemist

PostPosted: Tue Jan 05, 2010 3:38 am


Chapter one the orphanage of despair

In a dark patch of land where dark clouds hovered and sun rarely was seen there was a horrid place know as the rested orphan orphanage the name fooled most in believing that it was a friendly loving place but if they made it there alive they would discover it was a place of evil just the grounds seemed horrid enough with pitch black rooms scattered around the grounds old oak trees with nooses on the branches was enough to make one suspect it to be a execution ground but if one looked around they would notice lumps in the ground and a almost red tint to the dirt feet every so often coming out of the dirt and if you weren’t careful you might fall into a spike pit hidden from site or a bear trap covered in dirt laced with rattle snake venom to make escape almost impossible without help or loss of a limb but that was the least of your worries for if one was foolish enough to enter one of the many dark seemly abandoned rooms they would find that the door would close and lock them in as a gas slowly leaked in and they died a slow painful death and if it wasn’t a gas it would be a room of complete horrors maybe enchanted to reveal the intruders darkest fears and bring them to life until they die of fear or they committed suicide should they be smart they wont stray from the stone path and avoid trying to help the poor souls of those screaming in the dark rooms and rest assured that there was many a human who would try and would join the poor soul in the afterlife by trying to interfere in the death of the ones in the rooms should you make it past the rooms you had to open a gate that was almost impossible to trust should you not know the pass code for the damn thing for if you did you would swear you saw hell itself because your eyes would be possessed by a enchantment that revealed a death of the one you care for the most but most humans had the honor of knowing the code for the lock that kept the gate shut and the other creatures that came had some way over the gate without touching the evil thing but there was one last thing every living being had to go through they had to make a walk through the official graveyard where should the body of the deceased be able to be recovered and not be unrecognizable they would be lucky to have there body buried and a tombstone of wood placed above their lifeless corpse but the souls of even these lucky few had been to known to attack passers and sometimes even drag the frightened soul into the grave with them what scares the humans the most when they find body’s what’s missing on the body’s the owner of this so called fine establishment had a odd habit of collecting the heads of the body’s and hanging them on wires in her bedroom letting the blood drip the owner also had a room she favored above all others the punishment room was armed with bared wire chains to hold children from the ceiling the chains were laced with rattle snake venom and she would come in twice a day to give them injections of black widow venom and with 3 movements the poor child would be crushed in spiked walls they were also force to wear a collar that every 5 minutes would show a image of the poor child’s real parents death and they feel this parents death and its in this place we start the story with a evil women known as diriko a very old women with grey hair and white skin and dark blue eyes she was yelling at a odd young man dressed in rags looking fairly angry his black eyes glinting in the candle light his black hair messy and he glared at her as she kept going on about s**t he didn’t care or remember about after she shut up he just smirked “you done blabbing you old b***h?” enishi said leaning against the wall not noticing the wall he was leaning against was icing over diriko saw this and grabbed him by his neck dragging him away him getting angrier by the second and her hand was freezing faster by the second diriko started to get numb in her hand so she threw him in the room freezer enishi looked around “this isn’t the punishment room its much to um…cold?” Enishi said looking around “food!!!” he said starting to run towards diriko’s ice cream scooping it up with his hands eating as much as possible. Diriko was in the office heating up her hand unknown to the orphanage a vampire was watching in the forest he had a weird feeling about the old women in the window he tapped his amulet summoning a magic bow and aiming a sleeping arrow at the women diriko lifted her head up slightly Ruka fired the arrow hitting diriko In between the eyes sending her flying across the room and the broken glass sliced open left eye leaving a trail of blood to a sleeping body Ruka laughed “bulls eye!” he said making light orange wings appear and rockets towards the grounds of the orphanage he landed on a oddly colored dirt then he fell and was struck by spikes his eyes turned almost a empty white he slowly reached up and pulled himself out of the spike pit leaving a puddle of blood he laughed at his carelessness then he started to run towards the building and tripped over a leg on the ground and fell head first Into another spike pit his head getting impaled through the skull he moaned in pain and pulled his head out slowly “Duncan’s not hearing this story” he said annoyed then jumped out of the pit making pink wings appear he tried to fly towards the building but due to the spikes he had holes in his wings and started to spiral down into the same hole he got impaled and yelled “damn it I hate this place!!!” Ruka got out of the pit and walked towards a room with a green door “listen…” he said storming in the door shut behind him and locked “if this another spike trap im going to be pissed” Ruka said sniffing the air “poison? And very weak stuff at that. Cant they afford some good s**t.” Ruka laughed and started to unlock the door posting an address of a poison factory and walks out “now where’s the owner of this god damned place?” Ruka said storming towards the graveyard “if there’s even one more trap im going to destroy this hellhole!” he yelled
PostPosted: Tue Jan 05, 2010 3:46 am


thats very interesting koi whee


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yugi the flame alchemist

PostPosted: Tue Jan 05, 2010 3:50 am


lol once i get my horror mind back im going to work on it more
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