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White Water Lilly
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PostPosted: Sun Jan 03, 2010 7:04 pm


Haruko entered the classroom and hopped onto the edge of the teacher's desk. Placing both hands on the desk, she leaned back on them while swinging both feet idlely as she awaited for her partner and today's students to arrive. 'Its been awhile since Kenji-san and I taught a double class, hope all goes well.' Haruko thought as she stared up at the ceiling of the classroom.

{Post here to let us know you found the place okay.}
PostPosted: Sun Jan 03, 2010 7:13 pm


Goran and Komari opened the door and walked into the class room. Goran bows to the teacher " Hello, my name is Goran Akuto. I'm excited to learn from your class" he announced as his brother bowed after "And my name is Komari Akuto. I'm also looking forward to learning here today." They both stood straight again and waited for the teacher to introduce herself with a smile.

Goran Akuto


White Water Lilly
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PostPosted: Sun Jan 03, 2010 7:27 pm


Hearing footsteps approach the classroom, Haruko stopped swinging her feet and sat up. She watched as two boys around her age stepped though the door and took turns bowing and introducing themselves to her. Haruko smiled and nodded at the boys before introducing herself. "Good morning Goran-san, Komari-san. I'm Haruko Tsubame and I'll be one of your instuctors for the remainder of this course, pleasure to meet you two. Now then, before you two get too comfortable here, I'll be assigning your first task. You two are to go and familiarize yourself with the village if you haven't already done so and report back to me a list of all the different important landmarks (sub-fourms) as well as a brief discription of each. Good luck boys." She gave them a sweet smile and waited for them to begin their first task.

{Pretty much give me a list of all the different sub-fourms including a brief discription of what each sub-fourm is for.}
PostPosted: Sun Jan 03, 2010 7:37 pm


"We will be back as soon as possible Miss Haruko." They both said as they bowed again and left through the door to explore the village and report what they have learned about it.

(sorry thats was all i could muster at the moment XD. and i kinda figured that, lol. be back when im done)

Goran Akuto


White Water Lilly
Crew

PostPosted: Sun Jan 03, 2010 7:42 pm


Haruko smiled at the two boys and nodded in understanding, "Have fun guys." she pushed herself off the desk and made her way over to the windows. She leaned on one of the windows with her arms crossed and stared out at the busy village street below. 'I wonder if Kenji-san will show up today. He totally missed out on one of the lessons the other day.'

{No problem, and just a little heads up, I might be signing out soon. School starts again tomorrow so yeah, have to go to bed early.}
PostPosted: Sun Jan 03, 2010 7:47 pm


(fair enough ^_^ I'll make my report when im done looking around so if i dont get done soon enough i bid you "goodnight")

Goran Akuto


White Water Lilly
Crew

PostPosted: Sun Jan 03, 2010 7:52 pm


{Thanks, and goodnight to you too I guess.}
PostPosted: Mon Jan 04, 2010 4:16 pm


Goran and Komari come back and knocked on the door before entering "We're back" they said as they walked in. Komari walked up to Haruko's desk and handed her the list of places they went to see in the village "Here is our report about where we have been and what we learned about the village."

The list:
Main Office- A place where the captain and crew make updates, events,suggestions and everything about the village. Citizens are allowed to give ideas, ask any questions, make petitions or create a rumor.

Center of Town- A place in the village with stores and businesses. This place is where people can walk freely to go shopping or work.

Shinobi Records- This place holds records of all citizens and shinobi in the village.

Wilderness- The outside of the wall of the village where you can see the forest, lakes and rivers, mountains and wild animals.

Village Academy- Where kids learn to become ninja which is also like a job and earn money when a mission is complete. Teachers (sensei) are to give lessens to students about the basics of jutsu and chakra control.

Housing District- The buildings called houses or homes where people reside in. Chuunin and higher are able to build their own homes while Genin and students must live in common rooms.

Command Center- Where all orders come from. This is the place where ninja come to get assigned a mission if the village leader hasn't called for them already.

Village Archives- where past dead or unused threads are stored. A great place to see what has happened in the village before time.

Cells HQ- Where people come to form squads, a 3 man group plus 1 captain. Squads makes missions and events done more quickly and easier than it would for a solo mission.

Miscellaneous Missions- When a mission is made or assigned and people dont know what to do, people come here since these missions can take place anywhere such as out side, in town or another town.

(I tried to make it in rp form XD sorry if it was a little corny, lol)

Goran Akuto


White Water Lilly
Crew

PostPosted: Mon Jan 04, 2010 8:21 pm


Having heard the boys knocking on the door, Haruko redirected her attention from the street below to the door. When she saw the two of them enter the room with a piece of paper in Komari's hand, Haruko walked over to her desk and waited for Komari to bring it over for inspection. Taking the piece of paper from him, she muttered a small 'thank you' before beginning her inspection of the information the two had gathered.

Looking up from the piece of paper, she smiled at both her students before walking up to Komari and handing the piece of paper to him. "Good work you two, except you seem to have forgotten two important places in our village. The anbu headquarters and the training grounds. Care to orally explain what's important about them or would you two like to go for another run around the village?"

{Don't worry about it. Making it in rp format is exactly what we wanted. Several people before you just gave out a list and well, it's kinda hard for the readers to follow along if a list of stuff just suddenly appeared in an rp. So don't worry you did a good job except for the fact that you accidently missed two sub-fourms but anyways good job smile }
PostPosted: Mon Jan 04, 2010 8:34 pm


(okay training grounds i forgot but the anbu i wasn't able to get inside of XP)

Komari turned to his brother "you forgot to write that down didn't you?" "My bad heheh, I'll take it from here" Goran answered as he walked up "The training grounds are a place where ninja can hone their skills and where students can be taught practical lessons for the outside world. As for Anbu, all we can guess is that they are some special organization for emergency purposes when danger arrives" After that said the boys waited for Haruko's answer if she approves or not of their report.

Goran Akuto


White Water Lilly
Crew

PostPosted: Mon Jan 04, 2010 8:48 pm


Haruko gave the boys a nod of approval before walking over to the blackboard and picking up a piece of chalk. She then began to write something on the board. "Alright Komari-san, Goran-san, while I finish writing whatever it is that I'm writing at the moment, I want you two to bring out a copy of your profile and place them on the desk so that I can look over them." Haruko continued to write not bothering to turn around and check to see if the boys were doing as instucted. 'They seem like good kids, so I don't think I'll need to constantly keep an eye on them to see if they're listening.'

{Yeah, only crew and above are allowed to go in but we just kinda expect you to mention what you think happens in there. Which is a place where Anbu members hang out and stuff.}
PostPosted: Mon Jan 04, 2010 9:07 pm


Goran and Komari both set their profiles down on the desk as it reads:

Username: Goran Akuto

Character Name: Goran Akuto

Rank:

Age: 15

Appearance: Dark hair, purple eyes, usually wears red attire, a red bandanna, and wears his clan insignia on the back of his shirt.

Picture: User Image

Personality: Goran has a good sense of humor and a good head over his shoulders. He has a warriors spirit and compassion for the living and brother. When needed He and Komari are going to help protect those they care about. Goran and Komari both know that life isn't just about fun and games though and they don't always act that way.

Bio: Goran was born in a relatively large village. He is royalty by birth of his mothers side of the family yet he carries the bloodline from his father of which lies in the eyes until one day he disappeared, and never heard from again. The only thing that was left to him was a large sword handle called "Saga Blade. Not too long after his home village was overrun and was forced to live the life of a nomad until his mother left him and his brother in the care of the Nameless Village. the only thing Goran and Komari have left of his parents is a picture of their mom and dad. And now 7 years later they live healthy, and safe lives in this Village.

Weapon:
Saga Blade
User Image
A sword which the blade is made of pure energy which can only be used by the Akuto clan's ability to control the weapon. This weapon can't break because of of it being made of pure energy. The full length of it becomes 66 inches (5ft"6 inch.) when matered (Chuunin level)

Kekkei Genkai: (Father's side)
Koun no Gan (fortune telling eye)
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A clan of people which only few have gotten the ability of their blood-line trait that can only be obtained from a near death experience. Unlike other people that see their past before their about to die, the Akuto clan see's images of what would happen after they die when they are about to be killed by someone. This ability allows the user to see images of the future before it happens. It lets him/her see any minute, day, or year of the future they want for a short period at a time and can (not instantly) look again without their ability fading away for the moment.
Legend says that when the controller of the eyes that see the future, feels like he/she had been revived and recovered completely when first obtained. By using this in an extending periods of time will also use up some of their chakra.

Character Name: Komari Akuto

Rank:

Age: 15

Appearance: Red hair, green eyes, wears light colored attire and usually a black shirt underneath, white bandanna, and also wears the family insignia on the back of his shirt.

Picture: User Image

Personality: He has a kind heart much like his brother, Goran. Komari shares a very similar sense of humor with him as well. He cares about everything just about as much as he cares about nature and the life of it. Goran and Komari go everywhere together and protect each other from any kind of trouble that come their way.

Bio: Komari was born royalty as Goran's brother almost a year after he was born. Unlike Goran however, his bloodline comes from their mother who controls all the elements of nature, including Earth, Water, Fire, Air, and Lightning. At a young age his mother started teaching him the basics of all the elements after showing signs of this ability. After he learned these elements and how to use them it wasn't long until he and his brother were left in the Nameless Village. Before that, his mother left him his father's weapon, the "Saga Pole". Goran and Komari are the only ones left to carry on royal family family name.

Weapon:
Saga Pole
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This staff has the power to give the user to use the power of nature or enhance the nature users abilities by almost triple. Physically in combat it is the most durable staff in the world.

Clan Symbol: User Image
In the center of the amulet figure has picture of a dragon.

Goran Akuto


White Water Lilly
Crew

PostPosted: Mon Jan 04, 2010 9:19 pm


Finished with her writing, Haruko placed down the chalk and stepped back. Walking over to the desk, Haruko sat on the edge of it as she reached for the papers. "Alright boys, usually for this next task, I would have each person respond individually but just this once I'll make an exception for the both of you." Pointing towards the board, Haruko directed their attection to the writing on the board.

On the board was the following:

'Komari and Goran had just finished a day training out in the wondering plains and were heading back to the village for some rest. On the way back to the village though, they both felt an unfamiliar presense looking at them from the shadows and both were about to check it out when suddenly a ninja clad in black jumped out at the both of them. He first threw three carefully aimed kunai at Komari before trying to slash Goran across the chest with his katana.'

"For your next task, the both of you are to come up with a proper rp response to the following situation which I've set up for you. Please keep in mind that this is a semi-literate to literate guild so don't forget about your basic grammer, puncuation, spelling, capitalization, etc. Good luck you two." Turning away from the board, Haruko picked up the papers and began to look over them.
PostPosted: Mon Jan 04, 2010 9:48 pm


The boys went up to the board and read what had been written "Well this test looks fun." Goran said as he looked to Komari. "Yes but write what we would do at the moments notice if we were in that situation." His brother replied back. Goran nodded his head as they both took the chalk and wrote on the board.

'Komari looked over to the ninja stunned and surprised, while Goran looked over at his brother, to the ninja and back again and called out his name loudly to snap him out. When he did, Komari dropped and slapped his hands on the ground and used his powers to make a wall made of Earth to block the kunai and another wall to cover the front of Goran's body. Goran knowingly that the wall wasn't strong enough because his brother still wasn't experienced yet, he took out some kunai and quickly lied his back on the ground ready to throw kunai at the ninja to try and take him by surprise. It was the only thing he could try, if he failed both he and his brother would die.'

The boys turned around back to Haruko finished writing on the board "We're finished Miss Haruko." They said as they stepped to the side of the board for her.

Goran Akuto


White Water Lilly
Crew

PostPosted: Tue Jan 05, 2010 1:19 pm


Hearing Komari and Goran both address her, Haruko looked up from reading Goran's profile and scanned over the writing on the board. Placing the papers back on the desk, Haruko hopped off the desk and walked over to the board. Picking up a different color chalk, Haruko began to mark several things on the boys' response. Placing the chalk back down, Haruko stepped back to allow the boys a chance to look over her corrections.
Quote:

'Komari looked over to the ninja stunned and surprised, while Goran looked over at his brother, to the ninja and back again and before calleding out his Komari's name loudly to snap him out of it. When he did, Komari dropped and slapped his hands on the ground and used his powers to make a wall made of Earth to block the kunai and another wall to cover the front of Goran's body. Goran knowingly that the wall wasn't strong enough because his brother still wasn't experienced yet was still inexperienced, he quickly took out some kunai and lied his back on the ground ready to throw kunai at the ninja to try and take him by surprise. It was the only thing he could try, if he failed both he and his brother would die.'


"Okay, so at the first part, you were already used 'and' so to use it again right after made the sentence sound a bit off, which is why I replaced the and with 'before'. Then cause I replaced 'and' with 'before' I
changed 'called' to 'calling' to make sure the sentence still made sense. Next I crossed out his and placed Komari's name in its place because you're current writing out Goran's action and to use 'his', which is a possessive pronoun would make readers believe he's calling out his own name which doesn't make sense. Next, I've highlighted the 'made' because the sentence would sound fine even if that word wasn't there and when you mention that you 'made a wall of earth', people get the idea that it's already made up of earth so that's why that word wasn't nessary. Lastly the wording there was a bit strange there so I've change it a bit. So do you guys understand why I did what I did now or would you like me to explain further?"
Haruko turned to face the two boys and waited for their reply.
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