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 Posted: Fri Jan 01, 2010 9:18 am
Haruko entered the empty classroom and walked over to stand by the windows. Leaning against the glass, Haruko watched as the townspeople moved about in their daily morning routines while waiting for her partner and student to arrive.
{post here to let us know you found the place okay.}
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Posted: Fri Jan 01, 2010 9:21 am
Renshi Walked inside of the Classrom his strapbag on his back along with his family heirlume the HoshiKen on his back as well.
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Posted: Fri Jan 01, 2010 9:32 am
Haruko heard someone enter the classroom and turned her attention from the townfolks below to the newcomer. Haruko spotted an unfamiliar person and assumed that he must be the new student. Walking over to him, Haruko gave him a small smile before introducing herself, "Good morning, you must be the new student. My name's Haruko Tsubame and I'll be one of your sensei for the duration of this course. It's a pleasure to meet you."
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Posted: Fri Jan 01, 2010 9:44 am
Renshi got up and bowed. "My name is Renshi Uzumaki I am honored to learn in your presence." he said as he sat down.
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Posted: Fri Jan 01, 2010 9:51 am
Haruko smiled and gave Renshi a small smile before walking over to lean on the desk. Turning to face her student, she explained the first lesson, "Okay, so for your first lesson Renshi-san, I want you to head out and explore the village. Once you come back, I want you to give me a list of all the subfourms as well as a breif discription of each."
{So pretty much just list out all the different subfourms along with a breif discription of each.}
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Posted: Sat Jan 02, 2010 3:00 pm
Renshi walked out and after a few hours came back in "well there are many places here and I will try to name them all, The main office is where everything is updated by the crew and captains ideas and suggestions may be made there as well, and then theres anbu hideout which is self explanatory, after theres the center of town where all the activity is buzzing and people can be active, Shinobi records is a big book of all the shinobi in the village, Training grounds is a place where you can spar and train and if near death unlike the wilderness you have a chance of getting to the hospital before you die, speaking of wilderness that is just outside the village where fights and missions are held, and before that is the academy where new upcoming shinobi come to advance in the ninja world, the village archives are where all old things from the village can be found, cells hq is where you are allowed to sign up to join a three man cell of shinobi in the village, and miscellanious missions is also one of those self explanatory things." Renshi said sitting down.
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Posted: Sat Jan 02, 2010 3:11 pm
Haruko gave Renshi a nod of approval from her position by the teachers desk before speaking, "That was a good explaination Renshi-san but it appears that you've forgotten to mention the 'command center', 'housing district' and the 'center of town'. Can you remember their importance or do you need to go check them out?"
{Just thought I let you know, you've called yourself Hatsake instead of Renshi at the end of your last post.}
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Posted: Sat Jan 02, 2010 3:35 pm
{I got center of town and thanks}Renshi looked u[p for a second trying to remember command center and housing district. "the command center is where all orders are taken from and housing district is where all shinobi of chuunin rank and higher may create a house or any shinobi may live in a house." Renshi said.
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Posted: Sat Jan 02, 2010 3:40 pm
{Opps, sorry I missed it when I read over your post earlier and no problem.}
Haruko gave Renshi a nod to signal to him that he remembered correctly before walking over to the chalkboard to write something. "Good work Renshi-san. Now then, while I finish writing something on the board, why don't you take out a copy of your profile and place it on the desk for me to look over?" Haruko continued to write on the board not looking back at Renshi for a response.
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Posted: Sat Jan 02, 2010 3:46 pm
"Os, Sensie." he said as he reache dinto his bag and pulled out a copy of his profile.
Username: X_SMEXII_kOOkie_mOnster_X
Character Name: Renshi Uzumaki
Rank: Acadmey Student
Age: 15
Appearance:
Picture:
Personality: Headstrong and strong hearted, Renshi is a very strong shinobi with a will of iron
Bio:
Renshi was born to 2 clans the Hoshino and the Uzumaki so he holds the Hoshino clans kekkie genkai the HoshiMe so he was brought up by the clan efore both clans died out, Renshi grew up knowing no fear and being a strong beleiver in beleiving in yourself, as the years went by he got stronger being branded the star of the Hoshino and granted the fabled sword the HoshiKen. Renshi is now trainig to become the strongest Shinobi in history.
"here you go." he said placing it on the table.
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Posted: Sat Jan 02, 2010 4:27 pm
Haruko finished with whatever she was writing on the board and placed down her chalk. Walking away from the board, Haruko motioned for Renshi to join her by the blackboards. "Okay Renshi-san, for the next part of your lesson, you're required to write a proper rp response to the following situation which I've written out for you on the board." She pointed to the writing on the board and on the board was the following:
Renshi was taking a walk around the town when he suddenly spotted a bunch of kids walk playing ninja. Stopping to watch them for awhile, Renshi watched as one of the kids was accidently pushed another kid too hard and now the kid headed backwards into a deep ditch.'
"Please write up a proper follow up response. Remember that this is a semi-literate to fully literate guild, therefore watch out for grammer, puncuation, capitalization, etc. Good luck." Haruko moved over to sit on the edge of the teacher's desk before picking up the copy of Renshi's profile, "And while you're writing up your response, I'll be looking over your profile."
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Posted: Sat Jan 02, 2010 5:21 pm
Renshi picked up the chalk as he began writing. Renshi had gone wide eyed as he watched the kid begin to stumble he ran as fast as his feet would allow hoping to reach the kid before he fell down the ditch as he jumped to catch the kid but missed by an inch he looked in horror as the child was going to fall into the ditch then grabbed him by his shirt and pulled him up onto safe ground next to his friends. "Now becareful children, you play too rough and someone may get hurt." Renshi said. "and it isn't safe to be playing by a ditch now run along." he said as he patted the kid on the head and walked away into the sunset like a mysterious stranger. "finished renshi said after a few minutes.
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Posted: Sat Jan 02, 2010 6:12 pm
Haruko looked up from Renshi's profile when she heard that he was finished with his response and nodded. "Good work Renshi-san, I'll look over it in a minute. First, lets discuss your profile. So far you've followed the skeleton correctly but you're missing the discription, even though you have a picture, you're still required to write out a discription of yourself. I also recommend that you include a list of all your abilities for future references." Standing up, Haruko handed the paper back to Renshi before looking over what was written on the board, picking up a piece of chalk, Haruko began to edit several errors that she spotted in his response. Quote: Renshi had gone wide eyed as he watched the kid begin to stumble he ran as fast as his feet would allow hoping to reach the kid before he fell down the ditch . As he jumped to catch the kid but he missed by an inch . He looked in horror as the child was going to fall into the ditch then but snapped out of it and quickly grabbed him by his shirt and pulled him up onto safe ground next to his friends. "Now becareful children, you play too rough and someone may get hurt." Renshi said. " And it isn't safe to be playing by a ditch now run along." he said as he patted the kid on the head and walked away into the sunset like a mysterious stranger. Stepping back, Haruko motioned for Renshi to join her back at the board, "I've marked my corrections in red, try and compare it to your previous answer and tell me where you went wrong. And don't worry mistakes happen so just remember to learn from it and not feel bad okay?"
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Posted: Sat Jan 02, 2010 6:23 pm
Renshi looked at the board and immediately spotted his errors. "Punctutation" he said in his monotone voice.
"and I'll try to correct my profile." he said placing it back into his bag.
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Posted: Sat Jan 02, 2010 6:50 pm
Haruko nodded, "Good for you notice. Don't stress about it, just remember to watch for out for them next time. Now then, how about telling me a bit about yourself as well as your fighting style?" Haruko walked over to sit back on the edge of the teacher's desk while waiting for her student's reply.
{Okay, the next part will be conducted in OCC. For your Explain to me what God-modding is and why people are so against it. Also explain the term 'Metagaming', and provide an example.}
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