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 Posted: Thu Dec 31, 2009 9:24 pm
  I want to just check if there's any anatomy problem. If there's other problem, point it out please. I accept harsh critique 8D random: pen is hard to use =v=;;;;; one mistake and it's game over~
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Posted: Thu Dec 31, 2009 9:52 pm
lol, i know how you feel!
The only problem I see is the guys right hand, it looks too small even at a perspective angle.
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Posted: Thu Dec 31, 2009 9:54 pm
Mortis Angelus lol, i know how you feel! The only problem I see is the guys right hand, it looks too small even at a perspective angle. Ah, I can totally see, thanks! I can totally fix that (use liquidfied) <3
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Posted: Fri Jan 01, 2010 12:39 pm
even though there are just a few mistakes the linearts r rly good
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Posted: Fri Jan 01, 2010 2:57 pm
Top character:
Where are his knee's? I have a hard time telling where his calfs connect to this thighs. You need to ad some wrinkles or lines to indicate where this is. Also his feet are very small for his height and a bit to far apart for that stance. You need to pull back his right leg a bit and push in his left. Otherwise it's a very well done job. Good work.
A little tip:
A normal humans foot it the same length from the wrist to the elbow of the arm.
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Posted: Fri Jan 01, 2010 9:26 pm
broken_bleeding_angel Top character:Where are his knee's? I have a hard time telling where his calfs connect to this thighs. You need to ad some wrinkles or lines to indicate where this is. Also his feet are very small for his height and a bit to far apart for that stance. You need to pull back his right leg a bit and push in his left. Otherwise it's a very well done job. Good work. A little tip:A normal humans foot it the same length from the wrist to the elbow of the arm. Ah, thanks for the tips <3 I'll definately change it!!! as for the pant, I kinda want it baggy, not tight, so I didn't draw the wrinkle on the knee area
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Posted: Fri Jan 01, 2010 9:37 pm
Man-Sae broken_bleeding_angel Top character:Where are his knee's? I have a hard time telling where his calfs connect to this thighs. You need to ad some wrinkles or lines to indicate where this is. Also his feet are very small for his height and a bit to far apart for that stance. You need to pull back his right leg a bit and push in his left. Otherwise it's a very well done job. Good work. A little tip:A normal humans foot it the same length from the wrist to the elbow of the arm. Ah, thanks for the tips <3 I'll definately change it!!! as for the pant, I kinda want it baggy, not tight, so I didn't draw the wrinkle on the knee area Even though they are baggy you can still indicate where they are by just a few lines.
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Posted: Sat Jan 02, 2010 3:04 pm
broken_bleeding_angel Man-Sae broken_bleeding_angel Top character:Where are his knee's? I have a hard time telling where his calfs connect to this thighs. You need to ad some wrinkles or lines to indicate where this is. Also his feet are very small for his height and a bit to far apart for that stance. You need to pull back his right leg a bit and push in his left. Otherwise it's a very well done job. Good work. A little tip:A normal humans foot it the same length from the wrist to the elbow of the arm. Ah, thanks for the tips <3 I'll definately change it!!! as for the pant, I kinda want it baggy, not tight, so I didn't draw the wrinkle on the knee area Even though they are baggy you can still indicate where they are by just a few lines. mmkay, I'll just cg is and show some wrinkle on the knee area then. That should do the job ^_^
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