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ArcNeoMasato

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PostPosted: Wed Dec 30, 2009 8:15 pm


http://g-man777.deviantart.com/art/Buttons-148641737

Well, there it is. I've named her Buttons.
PostPosted: Thu Dec 31, 2009 3:29 am


Aww, isn't that cute. >w<

Umm, I don't really know how to draw animals so I'm not maybe able to give helpful critisism. I try. XD

The collar looks bit like paper. It looks like it's glued to the kitten since it follows the outline of the fur. To get rid of that effect, what you need to do is to make the collars one side straight and then make the fur to come under it, umm if you got what I'm trying to say. Sorry about my bad english. =w='

The pose seems nice and allso I like it and how you drew the paws but you could have colored it more "fur like" than those lines. And I like those big eyes. So cute. 83

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PostPosted: Thu Dec 31, 2009 2:03 pm


The eyes are different sizes, and you made the farther one larger, too...

I'm no good with animals, but this picture doesn't have a distinct "kitten" appearance in my eyes. I've seen puppies before that looked a lot like that... I dunno what to do or say about it, though.
PostPosted: Thu Dec 31, 2009 6:02 pm


Zantetsken
The eyes are different sizes, and you made the farther one larger, too...

I'm no good with animals, but this picture doesn't have a distinct "kitten" appearance in my eyes. I've seen puppies before that looked a lot like that... I dunno what to do or say about it, though.

A lot of that is the fact I still suck with my tablet. I've not really seen that kittens or puppies are all that different in the eyes unless you get a cat when it's eyes go sliver.

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PostPosted: Tue Jan 12, 2010 2:00 pm


Buttons is cute! Aside from the collar being like how Keigan said and the eyes being like how Zantetsken said, the main thing that looks off to me is how I can't tell if the whites in the eyes are meant to be pupils or highlights.
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PostPosted: Tue Jan 12, 2010 2:39 pm


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Buttons is cute! Aside from the collar being like how Keigan said and the eyes being like how Zantetsken said, the main thing that looks off to me is how I can't tell if the whites in the eyes are meant to be pupils or highlights.

Highlights. It's easier to tell in the color version I'm working on.
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