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Critism please [Open]

FlyTheDarkestSkys

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Posted: Wed Dec 30, 2009 6:06 pm

umm.. hi... yeah i am looking for some critism on 2 of my drawings sweatdrop so please tell me what u think, i can take it so please critique thank you.

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If you have no critism eek on these then could you please check out my other topic on my stuff, please i really want these critiqued sweatdrop thank you.

http://www.gaiaonline.com/forum/picture-post/critisim/t.57479325/

Thanks agian.

Posted: Tue Feb 16, 2010 6:26 pm

Personally, I think they're cute. ^_^
I'm not good at criticism because I can't take it myself. :/

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Cardie

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Posted: Tue Mar 30, 2010 8:21 am

Haha they are SO cute! I really like them.
But, in regards to critisms, what do you mean? Anything specific?
'Cause it's not like there's anything wrong with anatomy (since they're chibi's XD )
so I'm not sure what to critic on. ^^' Sorry.

Posted: Thu Jan 13, 2011 4:22 pm

I think they are adorable! but I don't draw anime sweatdrop but I think they are very good smile mrgreen

Princessinblue301

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Stupid Tonberries

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Posted: Thu Jan 13, 2011 8:33 pm

I think they are really cute, and I like the coloring. You also have good line variation and I like that you used thicker lines than I see a lot. It's refreshing and it looks nice. The little cat is especially cute. I can't really see anything bad about them, except maybe that the skin on the second one seems a little streaky. It is really good though, and you have to look really carefully at it.

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