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Blue Eyed Melloon

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PostPosted: Mon Dec 28, 2009 6:48 pm


The Civilian aspect of this is already a character. This quest page is for the Senshi half of her.


Senshi: Sailor Grus, Senshi of Feathers

Quote:
Name: Castille [ka-steel] Brenna

Nicknames: She hates nicknames!

Age: 15

Birthday: March 7

Sign: Pisces

Gemstone: Aquamarine

Blood Type: AB-

Fav. Food: Chocolate Chip Cookie Dough Ice Cream, Thai Food (Specifically: Pineapple Chicken), and Pumpkin Pie

Hated Food: Mushrooms, Curry, Plain Milk

School: Meadowview High School

Hobbies:

Photography- Castille loves to take pictures, and pursues a career in photojournalism. Since she has yet to obtain this job, she occupies herself by taking discounted senior pictures for the high school, and has even taken pictures for a wedding or two. Her favorite subjects are not ones that stand and pose for the camera however. She enjoys taking candid shots, moments when a person's true feelings and happiness come through for all to see. Castille also enjoys taking pictures in black and white, using programs to add a splash of color to one object in the picture.

Castille Says: "I love adding one piece of color to an otherwise black and white object. In an otherwise dull, monotonous day ritual, there can always be that one moment, or person that adds a bit of spice to your life.

Finding New Music:- Castille has one addiction, and that’s music. She loves almost any genre, and her IPod library is always filled to the brim with country, rock, metal, techno and much more. She loves to spend a little time on the computer each day, browsing through new artists and downloading songs to create various playlists out of. Her IPod is always with her, and she typically can be seen with one ear bud in, the other dangling down while she has a conversation while simultaneously checking out some new electronic pop band from Wisconsin. Everywhere she goes, that IPod is blaring, and when she can't listen to it, she's humming or singing one of the songs she just listened to. After only a day without her music, she starts to get grumpy and fidgety.

Castille Says: "I'd rather be addicted to music than something that could really harm me!

Summer Camp Counselor - Castille's favorite people are children. For the last two summers she has helped out at the Happy Campers Day Camp, assisting with meals, arts and crafts and taking groups out on nature walks. She loves kids most because they have such big imaginations. She feels like she can relate to children more than kids of her own age.

Castille Says:"They find such wonder in everything around them. Simple things like Trees and birds become magical in their own way through a child's eyes. Teenagers seem to have lost the ability to see all of this magic around them..."

Volleyball:- Castille loves sports, but volleyball is by far her favorite. As a young girl she played for a youth team, and her position of choice was a libero, or digger position. She would spend hours diving to the ground to save a ball that was too low for some of the taller girls to get, and her knees were constantly bruised from hitting the ground. Now she is part of the school team, in the same position that she played as a child.


Castille Says: "Being on the volleyball team is the best! The feeling of being on a team, the whole group striving for something together. And I love when my muscles are sore! I feel like I have actually done something."

Virtues

Open-minded: Castille doesn't like to judge, and welcomes people openly into her conversations. Because of this, she has a vast circle of friends that she keeps close to her, and she hates to leave anyone out of the loop. She believes that everyone has some good in them, it just takes the right person to bring it out. That person being her.

She also likes to try new things, especially if it involves helping someone else out. It may be as simple as trying a new recipe that one of her teachers raves about, or taking salsa dancing lessons because one of her friends was too embarrassed to do it alone. Most of the time she takes it a step farther than the person originally intended, making enough of the recipe to share with the entire class, or dancing with her friend in the school Talent Show.

Castille Says: "Those lessons were fun! And that Basil Chicken recipe turned out to be harder than I thought...."

It's all about the Balance!: Castille has a knack for multitasking. As a student, this means she can do multiple classes' homework at the same time. She can also take notes while finishing up her homework from her next class that’s due in twenty minutes. At home, she is able to cook dinner while chatting with her friends online and watching her younger brother. She can also hold multiple conversations at once, which helps if four friends are talking to her at once. As a senshi, it wouldn't be hard for her to keep up with her normal life as well as saving the town from youma and the Negaverse.

Castille Says: "Who can be bored when you have volleyball practice, cooking lessons, and a sleepover with friends that night?"

Oh yeah? And then what happened?: Because of her friendly and warm nature, people often come to Castille with their problems, and she is always willing to sit with them on the couch, sharing a gallon of ice-cream and listening to them rant about how their boyfriend doesn't appreciate them, or how a sibling is always treated better than them. She is always willing to give them her point of view, but will ask if they want it or not...she doesn't want to rile the person up and cause conflict. In her mind, if the worried person can smile, and maybe laugh a little at the end of it, then she has done her job well.

Castille Says: "I feel bad when someone is having a bad day. Even if it's not my fault! Since I am happy, why can't I share it with others and make them happy too?"

Only 100%? I can give 110%! When Castille finds something that really sparks her interest, she devotes herself completely to it. That’s not to say that she does it with everything however. But for certain things, like volleyball and photography, she will keep working at it for hours until the results come out the way she wants.

Castille Says: "I can't just leave the gym with my sets going too far right! then I'll play like that in the game tomorrow!"

Flaws

Enough Pride for all the Lions in the Zoo: She would rather destroy herself mentally than get advice from someone else. Since her family divorced, she took on the idea at a young age that she can do it all by herself, and this is a hard thing for her to shake, even now. As a student, this means she occasionally falls behind in class because she can't grasp the concept before being forced to move on to the next one. As an athlete, Castille will tire herself out and try a multitude of different things to fix whatever problem she is having, be it a missing serve or a crooked pass, until she finally gets it right. As a new Senshi, Castille will likely get beaten in her first one or two solo battles. She will get frustrated and stress herself out over how to be better. When asked by a comrade if she needs help, even if she is clearly losing, Castille will still say no and, if the other person helps anyway, she will thank them and be polite until she gets home, where she will likely burst into tears and stress even more. Given enough of this, she might decide to quit being a Senshi entirely.

Castille Says: "The person I ask for help from isn't going to be around forever, giving me a hand when I need it. Better to just learn it on my own, then I won't need them at all! Why rely on someone else?"

Jack of all trades, Master of none: Castille has a problem of spreading herself too thin. She likes to have multiple things going on at once, and in a way this is good because she can multitask. On the surface, she looks like she is juggling it all very well, but her friends and family know better. She can't devote herself 100% to anything for too long before getting bored. So her homework remains half finished (sometimes not done at all), her drawings are not colored, and that book she was going to read lays by her bedside gathering dust. While being a Senshi may be exciting at first, the conflict, defeat, and time consuming patrols that come with it would eventually wear her out, causing her to want to quit being a senshi entirely. This multitasking also takes a toll on her health, as she doesn't sleep as much as she should because of all the activities she undertakes. The lack of sleep catches up to her, and her mind slows as well as her reaction time, and humor. However, she is always ready with an excuse to explain the lack of commitment.

Castille Says: "Sometimes I get a little stressed, so I have to skip over some things....But I always come back to them! ....most of the time...."

Tick...tick...tick...BOOM: Castille hates causing conflict, and will avoid an argument almost at any cost. This means all of her nasty thoughts and feelings build inside her, where she goes over them over and over again, analyzing and emphasizing the feelings in her mind until they are so huge to her, that she explodes. This leads to shouting, nasty comments, lots of swearing, and usually tears. She tends to hold grudges, even if she doesn't show it. Castille will continue to be pleasant and friendly to the person, but she will be cursing them in her mind. Her lack of assertiveness when it comes to being stepped on leaves her doubting herself and her abilities a lot of the time, and the whirlwind of emotions spins again.

Castille Says: "I'm fine, I really am! It's not like it hurt my feelings or anything....... *stupid b***h*"

There must be another way.... Castille doesn't like to fight. She can't stand the sight of blood, and she doesn't throw punches, even as a joke. As a regular person, this means people often try to pick on her. She would rather calmly talk out the situation than become physically involved. With the elementary children, she is able to diffuse any of their arguments with a few kind words and suggestions. With the kids of her age, she finds it a little harder to connect with them, though it's not for lack of trying. If her pacifist ways go unnoticed or are not well received, Castille will walk away from the decision depressed, or turn to her childish side. As a senshi, this means if a fight were to break out, she would let others fight first and take care of it.

Castille Says: "Physical violence is never an option! There's always better ways to solve a conflict!"
PostPosted: Mon Dec 28, 2009 6:51 pm


Senshi Outfit
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Here's an idea, done by Merangue! *click for another picture with changes/color*


* Tiara: Id like it to be Red, with a white stone in the middle.
* Collar: The color should be a deeper red, like this
* Bodice: White, sleeves cut to look like feathers. Comes up to create almost a more form fitting turtle neck , also white.
* Skirt: I really like this idea for the skirt, Colored white, maybe fade to red at the bottom?
* Brooch: feather in white
* Front Bow: The bow is black
* Gloves: Gloves start a little higher than this, without the piece attached to the finger. Stops at the wrist. White Feathers around the wrist area..
* Back Bow: Also red, longer tails on the bow that look like feathers
* Footwear: Unsure as of now
* Other: Nothing right now.

This is an off the top of my head idea! If you have any other suggestions, or want to throw this whole idea out, feel free to shoot some plans at me!

Challenge:
Short: I am the feather weight champion!
Long: I am the champion of Grus! Your about to be feather dusted!



Attack #1

NAME: Feather-fall Cloud!
[What it does] Sailor Grus raises her hands, and wind swirls around her, feathers filling up the space until she is unable to be seen. Grus sends the feathers at the enemy, surrounding them and effectively blocking their view, giving others a chance to attack or escape.

[Range] Must be within 10 feet of the enemy

[Lasts] 15 Seconds

[Uses] Twice

[Cons] May by blown away/manipulated by wind attacks. May also serve as a way for the enemy to escape as it hinders the view of everyone.

[Idea?] I could see this being a nice combo with a fire attack...

Attack #1a
NAME: Feather-fall Strike!
[What it does] Upgraded version of the previous attack. The feathers move faster and the edges are sharper, causing minor cuts/damage (think like a paper cut)

[Range] Must be within 10 feet of the enemy

[Lasts] 30 seconds

[Uses] Twice

[Cons] May by blown away/manipulated by wind attacks. May also serve as a way for the enemy to escape as it hinders the view of everyone.

[Idea?] Maybe when combined with a wind-type move, the feathers will cause more damage since they are moving faster? See also possible fire combo above.

Attack #2:
NAME:Feather Barrage!
[What it does] Think Jupiter's "Oak Evolution" with feathers. The feathers now have an energy cover that makes them glow with a red and yellow energy. She spins once, thrusting her hands outward, and a ring of the energy covered feathers flies from her body. If the feathers hit someone, they stick to them and the person feels as if the feather cut it's way through them, and they will receive a feather shaped burn on the entrance and exit "holes" of the wound.

Note: The feather is not actually cutting through them, it just feels as if it has and the burns show up where the holes would be if it did cut through them.

If the feathers stick to anything but flesh, such as clothing, it will burn a hole through it. (Exception being like really thick things, like buildings. They will get a 2-3 inch indentation)


[Range] The ring shoots out 15 feet in a circle before the feathers lose their power and fall to the ground, harmless feathers again.

[Lasts] 10 seconds for the feathers to fly the 15 feet. The burning at the "holes" will last for 10 seconds after the pain, gradually fading to nothing by the time the 10 seconds is up. The burn will stay as a normal injury would remain (meaning it doesn't fade away with the burning sensation. Like a cut, it will take time to fully heal)

[Uses] She can do this attack twice before she is unable to attack anymore, and has only enough power to remain powered up.

[Cons] They fly in a ring, so any senshi/people around are in danger of being hit as well. Taking cover is advised.

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PostPosted: Wed Dec 30, 2009 7:00 pm


You're basing your character attacks off a kung fu style, not cranes. Please base her off cranes.
PostPosted: Tue Dec 07, 2010 7:23 pm


LIIIIIIIVE!

*reviving for possible Castille Upgrade*

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PostPosted: Tue Jan 11, 2011 12:23 pm


*one more bump*
PostPosted: Thu Apr 14, 2011 5:42 pm


Character acquired through Yuna's custom raffle!

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PostPosted: Thu Apr 14, 2011 8:06 pm


Just a bit of clarification:

In the quest approval thread, you refer to her as "Senshi of Cranes," but here, she has feather-based attacks and is the Senshi of Feathers. Which one is it? If it is cranes, you'll need to redo her attacks to be more crane-related. Personally, I like the feathers idea. Her challenge is adorable!

To tweak her powers, go ahead and convert "turns" into an actual time. For example, maybe at her regular-level, she creates a column of sight-obscuring feathers around her enemy that lasts for 30 seconds, and she can do it twice. It would still be "two turns" -- just in a more easily understood way.

For her regular attack, take away the option that she can use the feathers on herself too. Since they only form around her as part of her casting action and the actual attack is when she fires them out toward the enemy, you can't really have them also cover her for escape. That would be two attacks within one, which isn't allowed. So I'd delete this part: "Can be used this way as an escape technique, or..." Just keep the bit about her attacking enemies.

Super sounds good to me once you convert the "turns" into time.

For the eternal, instead of having the feathers be steel, I think it would make more sense if they were magical energy feathers (to keep them from being too weapon-like). Maybe the feathers form like normal and then begin to glow with energy (which hardens/sharpens them) and then this is what she sends shooting off at the enemy. Make sure to add in a range -- how many feet around her with the feathers shoot until they just dissolve, or fall to the ground?

Congratulations on your custom win! 8D Please let me know if you have any questions.
PostPosted: Fri Apr 15, 2011 12:11 am


Woops! Cranes used to be her sphere, but I changed it to feathers... ill fix that sweatdrop

Added Range and tweaked the eternal attack.

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PostPosted: Fri Apr 15, 2011 7:18 am


The edits look good. I enjoy the 'feathers' sphere too. =D

For regular and super, make sure you add in how many times she can do it in a single battle. Like, it lasts 15 seconds for her regular attack -- and she can do it three times? Twice? This is up to you. I'd say no more than three though. Since her super attack has a long duration, maybe she can only do that twice. Make sure you put that info in there.

I actually think her eternal attack can be stronger! Eternal attacks are the BIG CHEESE of the senshi power spectrum. Her feathers can do some real damage here -- not just shallow cuts and a 5-10 second burn. You can say that her energy feathers pass through the bodies of the people who are hit with them, leaving an energy burn on the entry and exit point (ouch), but not actually causing a physical wound. However, it feels like something just tore a hole through them! Does that make sense? So she would attack everyone around her, seriously make them feel like a grevious wound was dealt (if they are hit), but it would only leave a hole in their clothes with a burn from where the energy feathers hit.

You can play with it as you wish. That was just an idea that I had to try and illustrate how to amp it up to more of an eternal-level attack!
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