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 Posted: Tue Dec 13, 2005 4:31 pm
yea, I need an opinion on this short poem I'm going to give to my crush on valentine's.
My blood is red
My tears are blue
I wish I could say
How much I like you
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Posted: Sat Jan 14, 2006 3:01 pm
Personally, I'm starting to think it's unoriginal and cheesy sad
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Posted: Wed Feb 08, 2006 2:42 pm
nikomas Personally, I'm starting to think it's unoriginal and cheesy sad If you dont like it, make another. Its short but sends the message in my opinion.
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Posted: Thu Feb 09, 2006 10:25 am
Yeah, blood is red, but is that in any way romantic? It could send many different messages to him. And, technically, tears are clear, not blue.
The last line is a bit forward. Be a little mysterious, so he wonders whether that is what you meant to say or not. Curiosity killed the cat after all.
All in all, it is a poor attempt at modifying an existing and horribly cliche poem. I'm not trying to be mean, but just giving my honest opinion.
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Posted: Sat Feb 11, 2006 12:45 pm
This may just be the opinion of someone who's love life stinks...but I think it's good. It's straight forward, and gets to the point. If I was your crush, I'd like it....But then again, that's just my opinion. *shrug*
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Posted: Sat Feb 11, 2006 4:25 pm
oddly enough, I forgot to write that on his valentine(I'm not in school 'til march)...either way, it turns out he doesn't care for me...
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Posted: Fri Mar 10, 2006 7:10 pm
nikomas oddly enough, I forgot to write that on his valentine(I'm not in school 'til march)...either way, it turns out he doesn't care for me... awww..... how sad, *gives a big hug*
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