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spidermanisthebest

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Posted: Sun Dec 27, 2009 12:50 pm

so today i tried to edit a drawing on my computer for the first time! i have not got a tablet cos im poor crying lol i dont have photoshop either so i had to edit this on adobe fireworks and its really hard to use!!! my mouse is really bad as well but i should probably stop
making excuses lol

i know i need to work at this but i want to know what people think it is for my first try on a rubbish computer lol

by the way in no way do i own this picture i know it is not mines but i like it XD

http://loki-hoshi.deviantart.com/art/cherries-148201815

there it is!! what do you think then.... is it really bad lol

Posted: Sun Dec 27, 2009 1:07 pm

pretty good for computer art.

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spidermanisthebest

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Posted: Sun Dec 27, 2009 1:16 pm

thank ye! took ages sweatdrop

Posted: Sun Dec 27, 2009 1:31 pm

What do you mean you don't own it? lol
As for the picture, you should maybe try to make the colours less blurry if possible. Also, the cherry on the left has different eye sizes and the face isn't on the same angle that the cherry itself is on.

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spidermanisthebest

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Posted: Sun Dec 27, 2009 1:37 pm

Zantetsken

What do you mean you don't own it? lol
As for the picture, you should maybe try to make the colours less blurry if possible. Also, the cherry on the left has different eye sizes and the face isn't on the same angle that the cherry itself is on.

thank you this actually helps a lot! when i looked at this after you said it i immediatly (ahhh cant spell!) saw what you were talking about! now im gonna go back and fix this thank ye!!

Posted: Tue Jan 05, 2010 6:55 pm

Pretty cute I love their expretion!
(too bad I'm not a critictism)

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