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PostPosted: Sun Dec 27, 2009 8:16 am


How Many Characters Do You Have? 4 - (General Sassolite, Super Sirius, Chibi Egeria and Sailor Thule)

Name: Tabitha

Nicknames: Tabby, kitty, the general cat pet names which she will tolerate

Breed: Siberian

Attached to: Unknown

Alignment: Chaos

Blood Type: AB

Favorite Food: A good fresh mouse

Hated Food: Biscuit food, it's dry and dry... and disgusting

Hobbies:

Climbing is something Tabitha has always enjoyed, after all what cat doesn't? She will climb up trees, people, curtains (always curtains!) and of course the furniture. She will climb over anything and everything as it gives her the freedom of being where she wants and not only that it means she can always have her independence. She use to love climbing even when she had her human form, the ability to climb when you don't have claws to cling on to things just fascinates her. Oh how she loved the adrenaline!

Playing with people! After all when your a gorgeous cat why wouldn't you manipulate humans? They give you food and attention and if need be somewhere to sleep and the best bit is once your done playing with them you hiss and scratch and they leave you alone. Job done!

Hunting started off as a necessity needing food meant having to hunt and a big rat or fresh warm mouse was the best to fill a hungry stomach. However there is some joy that a cat has when they toy with that mouse and whether they live or die. The thrill of pouncing and catching and killing is something Tabitha will give up for no one! If her senshi disapprove... they will just get more presents till they accept it!

A Good Old Mystery because every cat needs something to keep their mind active. She isn't much of a reader as it takes 'too much time' and she hasn't the patience to sit and read and so she makes her own. That couple in the park having a fight - she will watch and put the story together in her head and it wouldn't necessarily be the real story but it would be one to entertain her for a while at least. After all there is drama everywhere and there is always that cat over there staring at you!


Virtues:

Determined / Committed
Due to being a stray for so long her determination and commitment has kept her alive. There were so many pets that would rely on humans and she strongly believed that a cat should not depend on humans. It made no sense to her and so she was determined to prove those pets wrong. It means she tends to pick the harder routes but she won't back down until she has completed what she started and she will push to see determination and commitment in those she works with.

Deep Thinker
Tabitha won't do anything without thinking it through. She likes to make plans and isn't one to suddenly act impulsively. She spends a lot of time to make sure the plan will work, she will train her senshi to make sure that they are the best they can be. She plans everything to perfection so that nothing can fail at least in her head nothing can fail. People aren't unpredictable, you just have to work them out first.

Will give you a chance...
She will be suspicious of you, she probably won't like you but she will give you a chance to prove her wrong. She doesn't judge too much when she meets someone, she is willing to listen and willing to give advice. She won't accept you straight away but she will give you the chance to prove you aren't useless and you have the potential that she is looking for.

Once accepted, always accepted
You have proven yourself? Then you have her loyalty and her loyalty is hard to break. Once you have got past all the suspicion and you have a bond then you have it for life. No matter how independent Tabitha is, she has a strong connection to those she cares about and will stand by them no matter what. She will be there even when they do things that she disapproves of. She will help them out of a hole they have dug, she will help them in anyway she can no matter how much trouble she would get in during the process.

Flaws:

Tough Love
Tabitha is a cat and though there are times when she will be rubbing around your leg, or climbing the curtains and showing you the affection most cats do, she does tend to be harsher then that most of the time. She will happily boss you about and push you until you feel you can't do any more. She wants the best in people and so she will go through periods of showing little to no affection to her senshi just so they can reach their full potential.

Suspicious
Tabitha will question everything and especially everyone, it comes from being a stray and having to watch her back. She won't trust a senshi or cat, not without really taking time to get to know them. She would be suspicious of split loyalties due to her lack of trust in humans, that and she knows the senshi want the negas and vice versa. What with a war of words as well as fists she tends to stay suspicious of anyone new until she can test their loyalty in some way.

Critical
She only does it because she cares but if she sits there watching your fight because it is your fight and not hers. She will be making mental notes on what you should have done, how that kick should have been better aimed, how that punch would be better done over there. When it's not work stuff she will criticise how you dress, "Are you really wearing a skirt that short?" She does care but... she wants you to be perfect!

Never Wrong!
Don't argue with her. She won't back down. She tells you something then it's true, is it actually true? Who knows! She thinks it is and will say it in the most convincing of ways. After all she is a guardian cat and that means that she is never wrong. After all they were and still are the cleverest in the universe!

Challenge: I sharpened my claws for you...

Unpredictable
Tabitha is deep down a cat and being a cat means she tends not to be exactly predictable. Though this can be annoying, its when she is in one of her 'crazy moods' that she is probably the most fun! She will run around like a lunatic and be completely undignified in her actions but she won't care, for those moments she is free and happy, even if she is also slightly crazy but hey every cat needs to get rid of their energy at times! She
PostPosted: Sun Dec 27, 2009 8:21 am


PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION : HUMAN FORM

Eyes: Green coloured eyes

Hair: Is the same colour as her fur so dark grey/silvery colour, very wavy, close to ringlet and frizzy. Always down.

Clothes: Up to the artist but along these lines - link, link 2, The brown outfit. Would like her to have a hood smile


PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION : CAT FORM

Face/Ears: Look at refs below

Body: Adult cat, large and fluffy

Fur: Silver orangey Fluffball. Her stomach is the orange/brown colour.

Eyes: Green

Accessories: Are up to the artist smile

The artist can take as much license as they wish with her smile

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PostPosted: Sun Dec 27, 2009 8:22 am


The plan is that Tabitha will have a corruption RP and then join the negaverse.
PostPosted: Sun Dec 27, 2009 8:23 am


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It's there… Taunting you... Just beyond your reach. You've been searching for it for what seems like forever (maybe it has been, or maybe it's only been like five minutes, the mind does plays tricks sometimes). All the sudden there it is, success! What exactly were you looking for? And now that you've found it, what are you going to do with it?

Tabitha was a cat and lets face it a cat has needs! In fact Tabitha was going to make sure that those needs were satisfied which meant breaking in to a few houses. It really was surprising just how many houses were happy for a cat to just walk in, well they left the window open so Tabitha assumed she was free to enter. It made sense, right?

She had squeezed through the window like an hour ago now and then she had been hunting that damn thing ever since. It wasn’t often she would enter a house and get a feeling that strong. It was essential that she found it. She had been round the house, poking under the sofa and chairs, up on the kitchen worktop. She flicked her tail as she raised her head up, opening her mouth slightly and closing her eyes. She wanted to listen and smell and feel. It wasn’t here and it didn’t make her exactly happy.

She closed her mouth and jumped straight off the worktop and headed towards the stairs as silently as she could. Oh how good it was to be a cat sometimes! She ran up the stairs and laid herself flat on the landing.

What was that?

She opened her mouth slightly as she took in the scents around her. There. She smirked a little, as she knew where it was. It had been a long time coming already.

Crawling forward she smirked a little, one step at a time and she saw it. The mouse was chewing up something that Tabitha knew would be used for nesting material. It was enough to amuse her, stupid thing.

One step.

Two step…

Three steps…

Pounce!

The mouse was under her paws, perfect! She never missed, at least she would never let anyone know that she missed after all she was a cat of perfection. She toyed with it somewhat, which you know was just the cat thing to do. Letting it run a little before pouncing on it again. Oh how much fun she was having.

Then the door went and it was a good thing she had that mouse under her paws or she would have lost it. However what was next was much better then that mouse she had and more to the point she knew that she would be given a reward for this!

She bit the mouse, making sure it was well dead before she took it downstairs and there was what she knew was here. She had felt it, she had known! There was a senshi right there, she knew it! She watched the senshi for a while, the warm mouse in her mouth making her feel hungrier by the second. She left though, through the window with a large smile on her face. She knew where a senshi lived!

Trotting off down the street with the mouse in her mouth knowing that the general queens, and king will be even happier to see her mouse today with the knowledge that was coming with it! If only she had known that the senshi there was as much as a criminal as she was. Apparently senshi could be thieves as well as the ‘good ones’. Ah life would suck… maybe the present wouldn’t be as good as she thought it would be.



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PostPosted: Sun Dec 27, 2009 9:38 am


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You have just done, or are about to do, something really horrible. What is it, and how are you handling it?

How it ended up happening the way it did she really had no idea. She had spent what seemed like all day trying to forget what she had done but the words wouldn’t leave her head. She always knew those white moon senshi were in for them and to think there were things she didn’t know! She had crawled back into one of the houses she spent a lot of time at and curled up under the bed where she could be hidden away.

She had been stupid in the first place; she had got herself caught by that stupid idiot again. He had been trying to catch her for what seemed like weeks and she was sure he only wanted her collar but she had avoided him till today. He had got her and planned to do something, she wasn’t really listening, as she had to find a way to escape. However someone met him and the voice was soft and made Tabitha listen.

“You caught her right? So take her to the shelter! I have seen her around I know she is a stray.”

“She is mine, I don’t know what your on about!”

“Look I will call the police, I have seen that cat enough times to know it lives round here so either take her to the shelter with me or I am calling the police.”

That voice had possibly saved Tabitha’s life. The girl had managed to win the guy round and they had taken her to the shelter. Oh the shelter, as if she didn’t know it well enough by now!

She went through the routine of trying to escape while being looked over and so on and so forth. She let them put her in a cage and then hissed at them as they walked away. She wasn’t getting out today; they knew her too well by now. People came and poked their fingers through the cage she got one. That stupid kid was bleeding and crying to its parent and Tabitha was proud to have caused it.

Once it got dark it all started. A window was broken and an alarm went off but someone came in and grabbed her before rushing off again.

Senshi.

She knew that stink anywhere and so she hissed and clawed and tried to escape but this senshi wasn’t letting her go. Well she wasn’t about to be killed by any senshi either! Then she was thrown in a box.

“LET ME OUT!” She shouted, after all the senshi must have known she was a guardian cat or why break in and get her?

How long she was in a crate and covered over for she had no idea. It didn’t seem to matter how much she cursed or hissed either. It was only when they were at an abandoned church was the towel lifted and the door opened. Tabitha was out in a shot and up on top of some church debris.

“So why did you bring me here?” She tried to fluff up a bit to make herself look larger but it wasn’t working too well.

“Because corrupt or not you are a guardian cat and the way you were acting you wouldn’t last long in that shelter.” The senshi wondered whether it would be worth keeping the cat, she had heard something and purification, did it work on cats? “Look I can help you, I am Super Sailor Sirius and if you will let me I can find someone who will help you.”

“Help? I don’t need help! What do you think I am? Helpless?” Tabitha hissed at the senshi wondering what it was this senshi was actually after.

“You couldn’t have joined them, not really…” She went into a long rant like talk about the negaverse and then about the dark mirror court and there was a lot in it that Tabitha hadn’t heard. Stuff she didn’t know. She found herself making herself more comfortable while trying to listen about the things that had happened before she came about. There were things she just dismissed and things that interested her.

“What difference does this make?” Tabitha still hissed as she spoke, making sure the senshi knew she was on the defensive.

“It means that you don’t belong with them… it means it will only kill you. I didn’t save you to fight I saved you so you could be safe.” Sirius was an animal lover, seeing Chaos taking the cats just caused her more pain.

“I am perfectly happy where I am.” Saying that Tabitha left but what followed was worse. The doubts. It was a problem she had, thinking about things too much it worked perfectly when training the senshi, think ahead, know what is to happen but some of this she didn’t know. Ares and Tanzanite at each other’s necks… two of the most powerful leaders.

The doubt made her feel sick, as if eating her up from inside. She knew that Chaos was right but that senshi had saved her for what?

She had made it back to one of her homes and curled up under a bed, wishing that these doubts would go away. She would do her research, talk to the other cats and the senshi. There was no place in this world for a naïve cat and she was determined to find out the truth.


PostPosted: Mon Jan 16, 2012 6:37 am


~ edited and updated and open for crits smile

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PostPosted: Mon Jan 30, 2012 3:07 am


~ Changed her cat breed (and so her image) due to new found love of Siberians heart
PostPosted: Tue Aug 28, 2012 9:34 am


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Hello there. Dropping in to give you a little crit on this quest. If for some reason you're no longer interested in this character just feel free to ignore my post/not write me back.

First of all - There is no such thing as a DMC cat. Because of the trickyness that is involved with parallel souls we haven't gone down that path and possibly never will. Currently the DMC simply borrows the Nega corrupted cats however when needed. So your girl could definately help out with DMC growths and what not, but she would be a Negaverse cat.

Hobbies: Her hobbies look fine to me, but you might want to change Playing to Socializing or Manipulating. Both are unfortunately.. kind of common cat hobbies (along with hunting) but they fit better with the description. If you mean that she's actually playful and would be the sort to chase toy mice and laser pointers, roll around like a kitten, and legitimately PLAY with people then that is a little more unique and acceptable (though it does seem a little.. against the rest of her tough personality).

Personality:
I would change the name of Determined/Committed to Independent because that's what the description seems to explain. The virtues though are very nice. I think they fit well together and are realistic. I like how deep thinker and suspicious lead into each other.

The flaws also work well together, as critical feeds well into her thinking she's never wrong and being argumentative.

Tough love might need a little tweeking though as the way it is written is a little confusing. Maybe something like this just to be a little more clear?? "Though Tabitha can be affectionate when she wants to be she's a pretty big believer in tough love. She wants the best in people and will go through periods of showing little or no affection if she thinks it will help their senshi reach their full potential. She doesn't believe in coddling and is more direct in her interactions.

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