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 Posted: Sun Dec 27, 2009 4:18 am
http://keigankun.deviantart.com/art/Christmas-time-147476513
Link to my deviantart. 83 I want honest critiques on how to develop my drawing. Thanks! wink
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Posted: Sun Dec 27, 2009 11:54 am
It's a very good picture. Her left eye (our right) could MAYBE be looking towards the snow globe a little more, but I'm not even really sure about that.
This is just nitpicking, but the globe doesn't seem to be a perfect circle. The flat part under it seems like it might be on a slightly wrong angle. I guess the fingers on her right hand (our left) seem a little bit thick compared to the other hand. Actually, maybe that entire hand just looks a bit too big. The tip of that pinky looks like there was a little mess there. Her right eyebrow (our left) could MAYBE be curved inwards more on the nose side? Like, more like how her right eye's angle is.
These are all pretty minor things, though, and I'm not sure if they're all even valid critique.
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Posted: Sun Dec 27, 2009 7:07 pm
The colouring is nice. The pupil in her right eye needs to to our left, like Zantetsken said. The only thing is the hands. The way she is holding the globe is a bit weird. It makes me think that it's going to drop any moment. The size of the hands does not match perspective. Her right hand needs to be smaller than her left. Its a nice picture though and has a lot of feeling.
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Posted: Mon Dec 28, 2009 11:10 pm
Thanks you for your comments! >w<
Zantetsken: I thought there was something wrong with her eye. Oh and that angle in the snowglope, you are right! Wow, now it looks really disturbing when I look at it and I see that wrong angle. XD Thanks for your comment! Really helpful to see all those little mistakes. ^w^
WanderingWhisper: Yep, I had much problems with the hands. XD It really looks like it's going to drop, haha. wink And that size thing, yep. Thanks for your helpful comments allso! >w<
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