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 Posted: Sat Dec 26, 2009 10:49 pm
OKAY:]
I'm an aspiring artist and i need ome criticism....
im getting a little tired of constantly hearing from my peers that eveything i do is good,or great,or whatever....
the positive feedback is nice but i dont want to get too comfortable and not acheive my full potential....
so if you guys wouldnt mind,would you look at my my most recent works and tell me how they look....
if they're good,bad,crappy....
i dont care...
i need the criticism and it would be VERY apprechiated:]
**i've added 2paintings,1 pastel, and 5 more drawings. then one with the stars next to themare the newer ones smile **
With Much Love And Respect,
-PlasticSurgery13
p.s. for anybodywondering,no i did NOT go to any type of art school...
the ONLY type of art class i had was in elementary school and it was basically an outlet of expression,no specific way of drawing things.
(if there's any questions about any of these feel free to ask any questions biggrin )
here are the links:
http://i769.photobucket.com/albums/xx336/sweetangelmanda/1-1.jpg
the phantom of the opera
http://i769.photobucket.com/albums/xx336/sweetangelmanda/2-1.jpg
a rose
http://i769.photobucket.com/albums/xx336/sweetangelmanda/3-1.jpg
a fallen angel
http://i769.photobucket.com/albums/xx336/sweetangelmanda/4-1.jpg
a self portrait
http://i769.photobucket.com/albums/xx336/sweetangelmanda/1.jpg
a fairy
http://i769.photobucket.com/albums/xx336/sweetangelmanda/2.jpg
captain jack sparrow(aka johnny depp)
http://i769.photobucket.com/albums/xx336/sweetangelmanda/3.jpg
another angel
http://i769.photobucket.com/albums/xx336/sweetangelmanda/4.jpg
cover for the 5th story in gerard way's apocolipse suite for the comic "The Umbrella Academy"
http://i769.photobucket.com/albums/xx336/sweetangelmanda/5.jpg
a girl with a saying next to it meaning: "the truth is baby you mean the world to me"
http://i769.photobucket.com/albums/xx336/sweetangelmanda/6.jpg
a random girl i saw in a magizine add
http://i769.photobucket.com/albums/xx336/sweetangelmanda/7.jpg
avril lavgne
http://i769.photobucket.com/albums/xx336/sweetangelmanda/8.jpg
amysterious bride that poped into my head one day
http://i769.photobucket.com/albums/xx336/sweetangelmanda/9.jpg
random crying girl from my head
http://i769.photobucket.com/albums/xx336/sweetangelmanda/untitled-1.jpg
from the Escape The Fate album cover "This Was Is Ours"
http://i769.photobucket.com/albums/xx336/sweetangelmanda/untitled.jpg
random design i saw in a caligraphy book the words are from the chorus "Brick By Broing Brick" by the band Paramore they read: "So go get your shovel and we'll dig a deep hole to bury the castle"
http://i769.photobucket.com/albums/xx336/sweetangelmanda/l_ac1a00a85fe22836b859b2536db3ef6d.jpg
a picture from the graphic novel Ophen...i cant remeber which issue it was...
http://i769.photobucket.com/albums/xx336/sweetangelmanda/l_26d23722b65c233aa964ab76e003172d.jpg
part of the inside over for the cd "The Black Parade" by My Chemical Romance
http://i769.photobucket.com/albums/xx336/sweetangelmanda/l_29709e7072786f224e621a2309c5bac8.jpg
a random thing that poped in my head one night of the character Mother War from "The Black Parade" album
http://i769.photobucket.com/albums/xx336/sweetangelmanda/l_6ade39cf3d4e78015ff96d261ce69f28.jpg
SpongeBob SquarePants....self expalnitory
http://i769.photobucket.com/albums/xx336/sweetangelmanda/l_906e0bcd9bcdf3f9d04bcc8596f4dec6.jpg
another image from the Ophen graphic novel,its from the same issue as the other picture i have.
**http://i423.photobucket.com/albums/pp317/helenaxmcrmy/1.jpg
its SUPPOSED to be hayley williams of Paramore
**http://i423.photobucket.com/albums/pp317/helenaxmcrmy/2.jpg
Mudkip from Pokemon xp
**http://i423.photobucket.com/albums/pp317/helenaxmcrmy/3.jpg
a scene from Tim Burton's "The Nightmare Before Christmas"
**http://i423.photobucket.com/albums/pp317/helenaxmcrmy/4.jpg
a pair of eyes
http://i423.photobucket.com/albums/pp317/helenaxmcrmy/5.jpg
two urm...things(?) with underwear on their heads...i wrote Best Friends on the side but it got cut off... sweatdrop
**http://i423.photobucket.com/albums/pp317/helenaxmcrmy/6.jpg
a guy holding a girl,the main picture i recieved in a text but i thought of the hearts surrounding it,the text above it and the color.
**http://i423.photobucket.com/albums/pp317/helenaxmcrmy/7.jpg
i got REALLY bored one day and i thought of Paramore's "RIOT!" album cover and i made my own verson of it...this took TWO DAYS to compleate.
**http://i423.photobucket.com/albums/pp317/helenaxmcrmy/8.jpg
sorry that this one is blurry...this is inside Paramore's "RIOT!" cd...i did not have enough space for the guy after Josh on the page...
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Posted: Sun Dec 27, 2009 10:09 am
Your artwork is pretty good. However, sometimes it looks like as if you are not actually trying to focus on centering the drawing that you do. Sometimes the lips look too big or the eyes are out of place or the jaw is too big. The Jack Sparrow one was good, though. That is one I liked the best.
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Posted: Sun Dec 27, 2009 9:28 pm
Your works not bad. I would strongly suggest shading to you though. From what i saw, most of your works had monimal to no shading. I really feel that it would help take your work to the next level. Keep it up. =)
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Posted: Tue Dec 29, 2009 9:55 am
Ok so im back to comment on your new stuff this time. =D
My biggest suggestion is that you don't do your drawings on lined paper, since this realy detracts from the drawing itself. Art quality paper is the best but computer printer paper is also a good option (and cheaper).
My other observation is on the piece you colored in markers of the guy and girl with the hearts in the back ground. Clean up your coloring a little. It looks a tad messy. Remember presentation is importajnt too.
Keep working at it. =)
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