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Posted: Fri Dec 18, 2009 9:40 pm

http://www.gaiaonline.com/arena/writing/poetry-and-lyrics/vote/?entry_id=101898007#title

Posted: Fri Dec 18, 2009 11:03 pm

I left you a comment there but thought I'd follow up here.

Wish I could hear you recite this! Because odds are my "tiny changes" would be void if I heard this spoken aloud.
The way I hear it in my head may not be at all how you hear it in yours and the rhythm could be aces. Sad thing about only reading someone's work
rather than hearing it. I can only hear it as I read it.

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Posted: Sat Jan 09, 2010 1:41 pm

Wicked Lilith Thing

I left you a comment there but thought I'd follow up here.

Wish I could hear you recite this! Because odds are my "tiny changes" would be void if I heard this spoken aloud.
The way I hear it in my head may not be at all how you hear it in yours and the rhythm could be aces. Sad thing about only reading someone's work
rather than hearing it. I can only hear it as I read it.

thats an interesting view point! biggrin ty!

Posted: Sun May 08, 2011 3:46 pm

Uhm....wow, so good yet I don't quite get it. Lemme figure it out!

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Urk. Okay, it's not about a relationship....
The ending confuses me the most. "It is a life I never knew." I'm trying to figure out who's life s/he never knew....the girl s/he said s/he never blamed? >3< Your poem is full of mysteries. I love the way it rhymes though.

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