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Qu3l 3sT lAm0uR

 
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PostPosted: Thu Dec 17, 2009 6:19 pm


:] I'd like a bit of help with my proportions. Help please?

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PostPosted: Mon Dec 28, 2009 11:45 pm


the faces are fantastic but the shoulders a smidge too square and for the arms,i suggest looking at your arms or other peoples arms for a sor of shape instead of a rail'like form.
the material of the shirts look great but the pants seem a little dead-like and plain...
just add a little texture and wrinkles in them and they'll be looking great biggrin

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