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 Posted: Sun Dec 11, 2005 8:44 pm
There is an angel made of stone, beautiful is she, but she locks herself in a tower of ice, in the highest floor. Lonely is she but no one has been able to give what she needs, and brake the stone that holds her, Strong is she, no one sees her cry, but stone will crumble in time. Many of men have tried to save this stone angel from her tower, but all in vain, no one seemed to know what she wants, but she sits and waits never giving up hope. And if the fates favor you, you will see something so rare, rarer then a man looking up and the sky and see a star burn out. You will see her shed a tear, a single tear. Not for herself but for all others, who suffer, and for the one man the will suffer because of her selfishness, and never beable to know love like the love only she can give. Now all she can do is wait and pray that he finds her in time. So if you are traveling along and see a tower made of ice and hear an angels voice singing, do not follow in hopes of adventure, no follow because the song ensneared your heart, and stole your soul, and you might have a chance.
Elywen heart
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Posted: Sun Dec 11, 2005 9:50 pm
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Posted: Sun Dec 18, 2005 6:51 am
WOWEE!! I know a pic that would suit this poem, well kinda, any ways, here it is.  I loved it when I first saw it and now I'm going to write a romance story about it. I just need to brainstorm abit. I'll do that in my thread, pointless poetry.
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Posted: Sun Dec 18, 2005 10:11 am
I like Stone Angel... it's different... it tells a tale in a single motion while talking to an absent person who might or might not be the one... almost as if and old once-beautiful woman told her grandsons about her young days... and how she found love in him who rescued her... it makes you wonder... is there more?
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Posted: Mon Dec 19, 2005 6:59 pm
Mr.Tooshie I like Stone Angel... it's different... it tells a tale in a single motion while talking to an absent person who might or might not be the one... almost as if and old once-beautiful woman told her grandsons about her young days... and how she found love in him who rescued her... it makes you wonder... is there more? When I first wrote this it was first part of an into to a story I was working on, but I decided not to write the story(it wasn't working out in my mind) so I keep that part as a stand alone poem Elywen heart
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Posted: Tue Dec 20, 2005 6:14 am
um, this would be perfect as a prologue to a story I'm writing, on the net. may I use it? I'll give you credit for writing the poem.
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Posted: Tue Dec 20, 2005 1:07 pm
Finalfantasyfiend um, this would be perfect as a prologue to a story I'm writing, on the net. may I use it? I'll give you credit for writing the poem. Sure go ahead
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Posted: Wed Dec 21, 2005 8:43 am
thankyou!! the web address is fwww.freewebs.com/hikkie
enjoy!! I've only written the first chapter, and even then, that's dead short. the main charecters are Eimin and Shuurajou.
thier naes mean eternally and bloodshead in Japanese.
also, should I write that the credit goes to Elywen or what?
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Posted: Wed Dec 21, 2005 5:32 pm
Finalfantasyfiend thankyou!! the web address is fwww.freewebs.com/hikkie enjoy!! I've only written the first chapter, and even then, that's dead short. the main charecters are Eimin and Shuurajou. thier naes mean eternally and bloodshead in Japanese. also, should I write that the credit goes to Elywen or what? No Melissa Rebhahn whee
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Posted: Wed Dec 21, 2005 5:33 pm
Finalfantasyfiend thankyou!! the web address is fwww.freewebs.com/hikkie enjoy!! I've only written the first chapter, and even then, that's dead short. the main charecters are Eimin and Shuurajou. thier naes mean eternally and bloodshead in Japanese. also, should I write that the credit goes to Elywen or what? No Melissa Rebhahn whee
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Posted: Thu Dec 22, 2005 6:21 am
ok, to view it,go to www.freewebs.com/hikkie
enjoy.
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Posted: Sat Dec 24, 2005 5:34 pm
Wow nice and thank you
Elywen
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Posted: Mon Dec 26, 2005 12:14 pm
No, thank you were it not for your poem, I would never have made that webbie!! also, I'd love to hear the story that poem was part of, even if it is unfinished. 3nodding
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Posted: Mon Dec 26, 2005 5:59 pm
Finalfantasyfiend No, thank you were it not for your poem, I would never have made that webbie!! also, I'd love to hear the story that poem was part of, even if it is unfinished. 3nodding Sure no problem just have to find it sweatdrop I have another story on here that starts off with a poem I wrote, funny how that works with me, I get a storyline from a poem stressed Elywen heart
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Posted: Tue Dec 27, 2005 7:17 am
yeah....8light bulb appears above head* I GOT AN IDEA!! why don't you and me team up, as in, you write a poem and I write a story to go with it....we could create a whole new thread!! someone writes a poem and asks other guild members to write a story that goes with it, using the poem as a prologue!! What do you think, Elywen?
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