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shibrogane

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PostPosted: Thu Dec 17, 2009 2:13 am


Callisto
Callisto is the third-largest moon in the solar system, and second-largest of the Galilean moons of Jupiter, after Ganymede. It has 99% of Mercury's size but only a third of its mass; it also is not affected by the orbital resonance of the other three Galilean moons. Because of this it does not experience significant tidal heating. It rotates synchronously with its orbital period, which means the same side of Callisto always faces Jupiter, much like our moon. It is equal parts rock and ice, but has no sign of plate tectonics or any other subsurface processes. The surface is heavily cratered and extremely old, and there may be an ocean beneath it. Callisto is considered the most probable location for a human base during the exploration of the Jovian system.

Mythologically, Callisto is a nymph of Artemis who was pursued by Zeus. She refused his advances, and was raped by Zeus in a disguise which made him look like Artemis; she became pregnant and, when Artemis discovered this, was expelled from her following. Callisto bore Arcas and Hera discovered Zeus's infidelity; she punished Callisto by turning her into a bear. Callisto spent sixteen years alone until Arcas returned and almost killed her. Zeus averted the tragedy by placing them among the stars as Ursa Major and Ursa Minor.

Solitude


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PostPosted: Thu Dec 17, 2009 2:13 am


Name: Erika Adalsteinn

Nicknames: She doesn't really have one.

Age: 14

Birthday: 31 January

Sign: Aquarius

Blood Type: B-

Favorite Food: Fried rice, tuna subs with lettuce and tomato, pepper and onion burritos! Also, Oreos, but these are a rare, rare indulgence.

Hated Food: Erika will eat what's put in front of her. But she really doesn't like chicken or red meat--at school, she tries to be pescatarian, and doesn't like messy food. Her clothes are very not-pretty as they are, and she has to take good care of them.

School: St. Magdalena's Seminary-- During her last year at Knightside, big changes came to Erika's life. Her mother died, her father went to prison, her brother was sent to Hillworth, and with no other relatives and an absence record that was certainly not very… exemplary, Erika was sent to St. Magdalena's as a ward of the state, and has been attending ever since. Currently, she is her brother's legal ward--as he is nineteen and able to provide for her--but she still attends St. Mag's.

Hobbies:
Library-Dwelling Lit Fangirl-- Erika has a deep, abiding love of books. And not young-adult novels, like the Hunger Games or Twilight. No. Erika adores literature. Popular books, like The Phantom of the Opera, Les Miserables, and Jane Eyre populate her shelves--they're more like stacks in boxes but she calls them shelves--alongside lesser-known novels like Peachblossom Pavilion and Consider Phlebas. Her taste runs the gamut from historical dramas to satire to legal thrillers. She will read just about anything; most of her books come from rummage sales or the racks outside Borders for fifty cents a piece. While she has been tempted to steal a book, she has never actually done it and would rather scrimp and save to buy it herself.

Musical Lover, Closet Phan-- Erika has a CD player (secondhand, the batteries held in by tape) and three very treasured CDs--musicals, mostly. Out of all of them, her favorite is the Phantom of the Opera--not in the least because it's one of her favorite books. Erika feels a deep, abiding kinship with the Phantom that she doesn't really get from any other musical. She despises Christine and wants to beat up Raoul and run away with the Phantom to make his life better. This hobby is rather secretive because she doesn't want Shep to feel guilty about how beat up the CD player is--she purchased it with her allowance at a garage sale for four dollars and seventy-five cents. However, if approached by a peer or an Authority Figure, she will talk at length about how much she loves musicals. For this reason, she has generally been encouraged to participate in community service at the local theater, but she has never actually done it.

Crouching Recluse, Hidden Erika-- Most girls like to socialize and make friends. Erika would rather hide in a storage closet and read a book. When not supposed to be somewhere, she can generally be found in strange places like under desks or beds, or in a closet or alcove. This is her standard response to stress--she tries to make herself small and unnoticeable, by slumping down in her desk or pulling her covers over her head. In a familiar place, she knows all of the little nooks and crannies; in unfamiliar places she tries to chart out all the escape routes before she needs them.

Gemstone: Garnet

Virtues:
Genius of Hard Work-- Given the proper encouragement, Erika reveals a wickedly sharp mind and a drive to succeed. Her reading comprehension is "off the charts," as stated by a seventh-grade English teacher; she has a mind like a sponge for mathematical formulas. She handles concrete concepts that can be proven a lot better than abstract concepts--it's hard for her to explain why she thinks an action was good, morally, but much easier for her to elucidate on why there are seasons. She's great at multiple-choice tests, but somewhat terrible at essay writing. Her intelligence, though, is very academic. She knows very little about how to interact with other people, and probably couldn't guess your favorite color if you wore it everyday.

Self-reliant-- There is one person in this whole world that Erika knows she can lean on, and that's her older brother Shepherd. Most people aren't Shep, so she doesn't trust them, and because of that she's gotten really, really good at independent work and note-taking. Often, she'll work harder than she has to in order to ensure that if someone else fails her, she'll be able to cover up their mistakes. She displays an almost obsessive need to take care of herself, because she doesn't like charity or being pitied. She will volunteer to help with the school's laundry, in the cafeteria--not only does it net her attention from authority figures, it also means she knows everything is being done right. Erika doesn't ask for help when she needs to buy school supplies or new socks, either, even though Shepherd will do it anyway. She would rather save her allowance and work a summer job to get them herself. When she can't provide for herself, she feels horribly guilty and embarrassed for whatever she cost the other person.

Compliant-- One thing Erika learned very, very fast was that you had to follow the Rules. If you followed the Rules, everything would be okay and nobody would get hurt. It's really rare for her to disobey a rule, especially if she's told it's for her protection, and she almost never disobeys an authority figure's direct order--not because she trusts them, but because she's afraid of the consequences if she doesn't. She is the kind of child that teachers hold up to others as an example to be followed.

Flaws:
Childish-- Superficially, Erika is childish in that she dearly wants to play board games and tag and have sleepovers and be as loud as she wants whenever she wants. Realistically, Erika wants attention, good or bad; she doesn't know how to go about getting it, except by acting out in small ways like refusing to make her bed, or leaving a small mess of old homework on her desk. It's not in her nature to get up on a table and declare everything sucks and she hates the world, and nor will she pull another girl's hair or take her things--but she will wait outside a door for a teacher to notice her or sell out another girl who's broken the rules to just to get a pat on the head. Erika takes any kind of attention, but she thrives off approval, and will do almost anything to get it.

Hypersensitive-- Erika takes criticism very poorly. Very, very poorly: She doesn't know how to interact with people and always feels like the slightest comment about her appearance or her possessions or her homework is a deep, abiding personal insult. Even off-handed comments like "You look nice today" will be obsessively dissected. Does that mean she doesn't look nice every day? Does it mean she looks nicer than usual? What are they comparing her to? Because she's so sensitive as to how others view her, she rarely talks about her home life or her family or herself at all; she'd rather listen to you talk, because if she doesn't say anything you can't judge her.

Pessimistic-- Nothing ever goes right for Erika. There's no point in hoping for anything or looking for the future because things can always get worse. Mother is dead, Father's in prison, the only person she has in the whole entire world is Shep, and she barely ever gets to see him. And he works all the time to keep them in a nice apartment and always buys her new socks even when she doesn't need them, and he always seems sad! Why can't something go right for them just once! Everything sucks! Nothing she does matters anyway!

Her worldview is so polluted by the way she was raised--stay out of everyone's way, stay quiet, don't draw attention to you no matter what you do--that she can't look past the bad parts of her life to see the possibility of a good future or even the good parts of the present. She can't see the light at the end of the tunnel because she won't look--and even if she did, Erika probably wouldn't believe what she saw was True.

Physical Description:
Hair-- Erika used to keep her dark chestnut in a cute bob, but it was recently cut to a messy pixy cut. It doesn't look horrible... but you can tell that it's certainly not a professional work. If you know what I mean.
Eyes-- She has very round gray eyes with lashes that are darker than her hair and very thick.
Face-- Somewhat round, with a straight nose and cupid's-bow lips. Her eyebrows are fairly straight.
Fashion-- When not at school, Erika wears hand-me-downs that are very obviously hand-me-downs. She harbors a secret admiration for the way hipsters dress, but ends up looking more like a lost little waif or a ragamuffin--her prized possession is a canvas messenger bag that she got on sale.

shibrogane

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shibrogane

Stellar Lightbringer

PostPosted: Thu Dec 17, 2009 2:16 am


Senshi: Sailor Callisto, Senshi of Solitude

Challenge: You're born alone... and you'll die the same way.

Fuku Colour:
Main Color: Teal
Secondary Color: Gunmetal gray

Fuku: i have refs for this in the worrrks

All of Callisto's attacks begin when she gets both hands on you--she prefers to grab her opponent's hands or clothing, but anything will do in a pinch and it doesn't affect the overall effectiveness of her attack. She incants the attack's name and then says goodbye to her opponent, and then probably flees the fight. All attacks can be avoided as long as you don't let her close enough to grab you.

Sailor Scout Attack: Callisto's Healing Solitude!
Often, after a period of self-inflicted solitude, the solitary person will return to their everyday life feeling refreshed and prepared to face the day.
Type: Augmentative
Target: One senshi or knight excluding herself
One targeted senshi or knight is, for fifteen seconds, deprived of their visual and auditory awareness of the people around them. At the end of the fifteen seconds, a senshi will regain a use of her first-stage attack; a knight will come out feeling refreshed, as if he's caught his second wind.

Super Sailor Scout Attack: Callisto's Complete Solitude!
Though solitude can be healing, sometimes its infliction is more of a punishment than a reward. And when alone unwillingly, things get very strange...
Type: Offensive/Augmentative
Target: One senshi, knight, or Negaverser, excluding herself
Callisto chooses her target, and for fifteen seconds the target is deprived of their visual and auditory awareness of the people around them. If the target is a senshi, that senshi will regain one use of her first or second-stage attack. If the target is a knight (...or Laocoon) that knight (or Laocoon) will come out feeling like he's caught a second wind. If the target is a Negaverser or corrupted senshi, that Negaverser or corrupted senshi will be afflicted with feelings of paranoia, anxiety, and a severe irrational belief that he is completely alone upon the end of the solitude; the effects will last for one minute.

Eternal Sailor Attack: Callisto's Nothingness
Sometimes solitude is inflicted unwillingly upon those needing protection. While this is a solid defense against those who mean you harm, it can get rather... unnerving...
Type: Defensive/Augmentative
Targets: One senshi, knight, or Negaverser, including herself
For one minute, one targeted player's awareness of the people around them is completely obliterated--the area around them remains the same, and shows the effects of battle. They are protected from all damage for this time, but cannot see or hear their enemies or allies, nor any bystanders. Furthermore, the target cannot even remember they were there. They are overcome with an intense wave of loneliness, and the thought that they are the only one of their kind left on this world. This attack can be blocked simply by not letting Callisto get her hands on you; but once in effect, it cannot be fully broken. You can become aware of the existence of your allies or enemies if one touches you without intent to harm, since that sense is not fully blocked like sight or hearing. That will assuage the feelings of loneliness and 'solitary confinement' but you won't be able to see or hear them for the full minute once the attack has begun.
PostPosted: Thu Dec 17, 2009 2:20 am


Famiry

Astrid, mother, deceased
Heath, father, imprisoned
Shepherd, brother/legal guardian.

shibrogane

Stellar Lightbringer


shibrogane

Stellar Lightbringer

PostPosted: Thu Dec 17, 2009 2:26 am


Reservation!
PostPosted: Wed Mar 09, 2011 3:46 pm


OKAY ready for crit. AT LONG LAST.

shibrogane

Stellar Lightbringer


kalindara

PostPosted: Thu Mar 10, 2011 4:05 pm


I crit a Roma!

I love the personality. Her virtues and flaws match so perfectly to her life so far. They strike me as incredibly realistic - drawing into herself and books, willing to sell out other girls to win approval, I love it!

I do wonder that Shep went into foster care, but Erika went into a state-run Catholic school? (Is it also a boarding school, like Hillowrth is for boys? Idk.) Is there a reason Erika didn't go into foster care? I know they prefer to keep siblings together, and while it doesn't always happen, is there a reason Erika would not be fostered? Later on you also mention Shep is working fulltime to keep them both in an apartment together. I'm guessing one of the histories is 'old' and a reference or two didn't get removed?

Attacks are really great. I'm not too sure about the Super attack having the very different effects on senshi and Negas. Most people have had to choose one or the other, help an ally or attack/imprison a foe, offense or support. I could be wrong, though, so I leave that to GMly types.

All in all, I like Erika and would love to RP with her. So, success? XD
PostPosted: Sat Mar 12, 2011 9:19 pm


Fixed it. Erika had disciplinary problems (a lot of absences, evidence of trouble at home) and Shep was seventeen--why put him in a foster home when they could have him finish out at Hillworth (sort of like Parker??)--and then she could go to visit him on the weekends. It's precisely because they don't want to split the siblings up that Erika's in the state-run Catholic school u __ u <3~

Well, I figured... Erika's Super attack is the same, except for it now affects Negaversers, and the effects are different. 8|a If there is a problem with it, then I'll fix it cool

Thankyou, Kali!

shibrogane

Stellar Lightbringer


Akina Tokuwa

PostPosted: Mon Apr 18, 2011 1:21 pm


I really enjoy her civilian profile, and the idea that you have going for her attacks is great.

I am a little confused about her super attack though. She can target a Nega or Senshi for 15 seconds of solitude, and at the end of that... the Nega or Senshi regains one use of their attack? Or she can use it on a Nega to give a Senshi their attack back? Your use of pronouns makes that one difficult for me to follow. It seems like it is exactly the same as her regular attack, except that she could use it on a Nega now -- but it would benefit them? Or are you saying that if she uses it on a Nega, it would only hurt the corrupted senshi in their midst and have no effect on the Nega (except making them vulnerable to attack) if she did that? And when you say "senshi and allies," do you mean that using it on a single senshi would renew one attack for ALL of their allies? That would be a touch overpowered. BASICALLY -- I didn't follow what you were trying to say for this attack.

For eternal, I like the spirit of the attack. She can protect you for one minute, but it's gonna suuuuuck. Just for the sake of balance, how could someone avoid/break free from this attack? Otherwise, I think this one is great!

If you just clear up what you mean in her super attack, this quest would be ready for a stamp.
PostPosted: Mon Apr 18, 2011 2:57 pm


I want to say I have something for you but I really don't. I love her POTO enjoyment and she seems well thought out and well rounded.

I'd love to see her life story!

ZaiaFantasy

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Akina Tokuwa

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