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[WIP] "Manny the Ukatae"

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Crystal_Gazer94

PostPosted: Tue Dec 15, 2009 4:11 pm


So I read this fanfiction by Windseeker2305 on ff.net and in it she came up with a race of dark elves called Ukatae (pronounced "Yoo-ka-tae"). I so thoroughly enjoyed the story that I couldn't help but envision my OC Manny as one of them. They're classified as (usually) tall, elegant, graceful and blood-thirsty.

Comments/critiques/tips wanted on anatomy, coloring, costume and making a jungle background.

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EDIT: Spellcheck'd
PostPosted: Tue Dec 15, 2009 9:00 pm


The further back leg could use some adjusting before you get too far into it. But overall it looks amazing so far. The costume looks plain (is that what you're going for?).

Don't know what else to comment on about it.

dawn111


Crystal_Gazer94

PostPosted: Wed Dec 16, 2009 6:39 pm


dawn111
The further back leg could use some adjusting before you get too far into it. But overall it looks amazing so far. The costume looks plain (is that what you're going for?).

Don't know what else to comment on about it.


Adjusting how?

And the costume is meant to somewhat blend in to a forest/jungle landscape while still allowing her to move. Would it look better if I added stuff to it? If so, what type of stuff?
PostPosted: Sun Dec 20, 2009 5:54 pm


Personally, I find thats there's something a little weird with the torso.. I just can't put my finger on it... Maybe its the breasts, possibly to low?

deeds_13


Crystal_Gazer94

PostPosted: Mon Dec 28, 2009 8:30 pm


deeds_13
Personally, I find thats there's something a little weird with the torso.. I just can't put my finger on it... Maybe its the breasts, possibly to low?


Should I just raise the topline, or move the entirety of the breasts up?
PostPosted: Mon Dec 28, 2009 8:37 pm


*wails* why am I the suckest drawer in the guild??!!


that looks awesome!


Gielwich


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