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Lucky Lucifer Vice Captain
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 Posted: Sat Dec 12, 2009 6:55 am
6 Bars. You can choose who goes first. No feeding, biting or recycling.
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Posted: Sat Dec 12, 2009 10:45 am
You first. Soon as you drop yours I'll write mine.
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Lucky Lucifer Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Dec 12, 2009 12:31 pm
Shins got no game. He won't beat me so don't tell him he can
Play boy could never hit bunnies like Yosemety sam
Editing his pics all self-loathing, tell me What's Up Doc?
He's only happy with his a** when it's stuffed up c**k
Never been brave, don't believe a thing this whimp says
Probably lying about his skin, age - man, is it Shin, or Sinead?
I shat a bit of praise and this f*****t grinned for days
Moving maneure everytime you push you're amateur shitty tapes
I bring the (e)n(d). I'm 17 and this kid is showin 'em
6'3 with tan skin? I'll make him the logo for Nickelodeon
Your old Florida a** needs to find the fontain of youth
Arthritic down to you're shoes. Complaining about the sound in the booth.
Just for jokes =)
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Posted: Sat Dec 12, 2009 12:55 pm
I spit a verse, you get flash backs of father beating you...
You spit, and I think about slappin' ya father for seeding you...
Irrelavent to relatives, mother regret not bein' celebate...
She cookin' me steak as I chase to erase and correct the s**t...
Played a bit with the kid then I threw a grenade in the crib...
"Don't take out the 'pen' against me b***h if you trying to live..."
I "china wok" all over ya verses, "Dim Sum City Bars"...
Lucy got some splainin' to do, buyin' d***o's on Ricky's card...
Tried to dish me a diss but couldn't even dish me a plate...
Stupid b***h, get back in that kitchen and fix me a plate...
God told me to fix his work, Lucifer frail and he cautious...
Grabbed a work tool 'n put it to his throat, "Nail in the Coughin'"....
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Lucky Lucifer Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Dec 13, 2009 4:51 am
Nice. Thanks for the fast reply. Hopefully the votes will be that fast.
Vote!
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Posted: Sun Dec 13, 2009 7:27 am
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Posted: Sun Dec 13, 2009 8:01 pm
Reason? =P Vote: Lucky. Lucky's disses hit harder because they seem more relevant and personal. Though, Lucky's flow seems choppy and one verse was contradictory. Shin was more creative but just seemed like he's partly insulting his mom instead of him and didn't seem personal.
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Posted: Mon Dec 14, 2009 2:01 am
I don't even know, man. None of you people can spell.
I have to give it to Lucy too.
If it was an episode of 'Yo Mama' Shin would had smoked just about anyone, but in this battle, it felt like all the rounds were going over Lucy's shoulder. Shin was pretty creative, though. I wouldn't ******** with him for nothin', for sure.
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Lucky Lucifer Vice Captain
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Posted: Mon Dec 14, 2009 11:29 am
Thanks for the votes people. 2-0 but 2-1 if MVPxChRiS gives a reason for his vote.
Vote!
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Posted: Mon Dec 14, 2009 1:54 pm
Shin used more vivid words, while Lucky used basic words
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Posted: Mon Dec 14, 2009 2:37 pm
Am I really seeing this? Yo momma jokes? Are you guys even comprehending what you're reading? Not am I ALSO dissing his mom, I'm sayin' he's a mistake, and that nobody in his family likes him.
I "china wok" all over ya verses, "Dim Sum City Bars"
I china walk all over ya verses, them some shity bars"
Think of a chinese accent when sayin' the lines, and also, what do you do with s**t? Walk over it. Not to mention most chinese places are called something generic.... like China Wok or Dim Sum...
God/correct his mistake/Lucifer = Lucifer was outcast from Heaven by God, hence the diss.
Work tool/put to his throat/the last nail in his coughin'/coffin
I was way more creative, had better vocab, wordplay, multies, disses, all that. There were personals everywhere. No disrespect to LL or his skills, but ya'll niggas votin' are out of ya'lls minds, or lack there of.
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Posted: Mon Dec 14, 2009 2:40 pm
OH, lets not forget feeding means using somethin' someone has written against them.
Isn't it funny how he dissed me feeding off the lines in my signature?
Nobody even noticed huh? Ain't that wierd. I don't give a ******** about the win or loss, because I like to write music more than battle, but I highly doubt half of you even know what the ******** hip-hop and battlin' is about, let alone how to judge a battle verse.
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Posted: Mon Dec 14, 2009 5:43 pm
Well. We have a whiner here, folks. So, let's see what I have on my mind. Shin Maikaru I spit a verse, you get flash backs of father beating you... I don't see what's insulting about this at all.You spit, and I think about slappin' ya father for seeding you... Irrelavent to relatives, mother regret not bein' celebate... Okay, here's the regret verse.She cookin' me steak as I chase to erase and correct the s**t... So what? You clearly were no good at it, because he's still here.Played a bit with the kid then I threw a grenade in the crib... I think that makes him pretty resilient, or you suck at using grenades. No plus for you here."Don't take out the 'pen' against me b***h if you trying to live..." I "china wok" all over ya verses, "Dim Sum City Bars"... Lucy got some splainin' to do, buyin' d***o's on Ricky's card... Tried to dish me a diss but couldn't even dish me a plate... Stupid b***h, get back in that kitchen and fix me a plate... God told me to fix his work, Lucifer frail and he cautious... Despite obvious errors in syntax, and poor sentence construction, tense would imply that again, you failed at the whole fixing it thing.Grabbed a work tool 'n put it to his throat, "Nail in the Coughin'".... The whole thing is a little better, now that I took the time to read the whole thing. I've gotta sympathize with that. Even so, it doesn't seem all that new, on second look. The disses feel pretty standard, though well put together. Lucy Shins got no game. He won't beat me so don't tell him he can Play boy could never hit bunnies like Yosemety sam exclaim Creativity 1 (allusion)Editing his pics all self-loathing, tell me What's Up Doc? He's only happy with his a** when it's stuffed up c**k Stuffed with c**k?Never been brave, don't believe a thing this whimp says Probably lying about his skin, age - man, is it Shin, or Sinead? exclaim Creativity 2 (alliteration)I shat a bit of praise and this f*****t grinned for days Moving maneure everytime you push you're amateur shitty tapes question More grammatical mistakes ...I bring the (e)n(d). I'm 17 and this kid is showin 'em 6'3 with tan skin? I'll make him the logo for Nickelodeon exclaim Creativity 3 (implication)
I like this one, the way he makes shin seem immaterial and infantile.Your old Florida a** needs to find the fontain of youth question What?Arthritic down to you're shoes. Complaining about the sound in the booth. I understand this is building off the last verse, but why?I still like Lucy's better. Even if it does go to s**t in the end. I think it's definitely more creative, and that gives it and edge, since both verses have some problems and don't really break any new ground.
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Posted: Tue Dec 15, 2009 10:34 am
MVPxChRiS, you can't just say he had more vivid words to back up your vote, it's not really something to win a battle with. Also I 'fed' of your sig but that's always been allowed. It's been done to me before. The no feeding rule was just so whoever went first didn't have a major disadvantage. And if we're explaining our lyrics. The fountain of youth is supposedly in Florida, wikipedia it. I mentioned that I was 17 and called him old cos he's like 22 or something. I was exagerating, being immature and s**t, that's why I was referencing looney tunes and nickelodeon to emphasies my youth and contrasted it saying he's arthritic and can barely listen to music. Which I thought was pretty creative tbh. In terms of personals I win cos except the first line (which did eventually tie in to a personal) everything was directly related to something on Shin's profile. Everything. But only Shin's 4th and 6th bars were person specific. And the I Love Lucy thing's already been used. The Chinese thing was good and so was the last bar but I don't see anything showing you were 'way more creative' but I'm obviously bias and that's a judgement call. Shin Maikaru People need to stop actin' like just because somebody doesn't like ya s**t it must mean they don't understand it. I understood ya s**t fine, it still didn't appeal to me, and it wasn't anything amazing. As long as people can justify their votes just accept their opinions. Really though, explaining lyrics arguing over votes is retarded. Just vote people neutral
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Lucky Lucifer Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Dec 15, 2009 10:49 am
Lucky Lucifer from england? neutral
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