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 Posted: Sat Dec 10, 2005 9:25 pm
You can share your ideas on adding structure or length to sentences here to make literate RPing even more worth while.
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Posted: Sat Dec 10, 2005 9:56 pm
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Posted: Sat Dec 10, 2005 9:56 pm
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Posted: Sun Dec 11, 2005 9:26 am
Here is an idea I have risen with...Please concur or disagree. TITLE: For the Land we Kill. : TITLE Within the medieval age, kingdoms were within many places of the world. But this is the story of one main area's kingdom's. This area was known as Strewnakia. Strewnakia was also known as the "Black Land". Within this area there were several kingdoms rather then just one. A count of exactly 5 kingdoms, each runned by a either a male or female higher up. Each kingdom, except one of them, were striving to get the whole area of Strewnakia under their control, but threw years, none of them prevailed. Each one always ending up tying within wars and battles.
The first kingdom more twards the East was called, "Kingdom Shred". This was the darkest of them all, within this kingdom darker beings roamed, vampires and undead roamed the night AND day. If you were not one of them then you would be killed on the spot. They were the most fiercest and strongest of the kingdoms but sadly the least smart of the bunch. Most of the people within this kingdom have extreme warrior abilities and are great with swords and larger weapons like axes. Most are not to intelligent except their ruler, a male figure named Klain who has a high intelligence and is a charming young man, or seemingly atleast. Klain recently had become the leader of Kingdom Shred, but he already had fallen in love with the Mistress leader of Kingdom Asteria. So his wars have been limited as he remained in love, his side by informers tried to make him rethink his love, but so far, he remains still head over heals for the Asteria Kingdom mistress.
The second kingdom, at the center of Strewnakia was "Kingdom Asteria". This kingdom was a more light/sky based kingdom with dragons and flying creaters circling it. This kingdom had many light beings in it aswell. And followers of paladins, bishops, priests, healers, and light magicians. This kingdom was the one kingdom not in battle for the land of Strewnakia, but this kingdom remained there in order to try and keep peace with the land, but to no prevail aswell. This kingdom is ruled by a mistress named Avier. She is a highly intelligent female with abilities of light and of wind. A kind being and mostly helps all who ask, very shy though so hardly ever ends up acting out large battles.
Third kingdom is called, "Kingdom Kahki". This kingdom was an elven based kingdom. But it included many users of earth powers and rebel based warriors. This kingdom had the highest in defense and is located to the West in the large forest called, "Midest". This kingdom is ruled by a male figure with the name of, Taku. He is a highly advanced being with enhanced mental abilities such as telekenesis and is an extremely well trained warrior and ranger. He is a more free spirit, wanting more land for the forest creaters but also hiding a darker secret. (player of Taku may make up his own secret which must be a slight weakness, or making his personality altered.)
The fourth kingdom was located within the South near a large ocean called "Salvnak". The kingdom near this vast sea is called, "Kingdom Waster". Kingdom Waster is a water based kingdom. Half of the kingdom is located actually under water where under-sea creaters inhabit it. Many merpeople also swim around the area of Kingdom Waster. The ones within this kingdom have main abilities of merpeople, water abilities, ice abilities, and powers over weather, (NOT LIGHTNING THOUGH). Water beings in this kingdom also have highly advanced healing abilities, though like everyone else, can not be revived unless helped by another being. A lot of the the Kingdom Waster people also have ninjitsu abilties and most are highly trained ninjas. The ruler of this kingdom is a female being that goes by the anme of Namu. She is a more in-your-face person with a high temper and wild personality. She has low healing abilties but has extreme underwater fighting skills and extreme high speed on land and great abilities with small weapons like whips, spears, and shurikens. She also has some high quality water abilties.
And lastly, the "Kingdom of Smoke". This kingdom is a fire and sky based kingdom with members of it that also have electricity skills. This kigdom is to the North of Strewnakia within a mountains area that is extremely foggy and has many active volcanos. This kingdom has a large population of fire dragons, large birds, wolves, and mammal based demons. Most of it's people have high abilities in offensive attacks and fire based moves aswell as fighting techniques but are unable to heal or set up extremely good defenses. The leader of this kingdom is a male name Fieror. Fieror rules with an iron fist and mostly wants land in order to control more people in order to gain power. He is a strong minded man but with a soft inner being that hardly ever shows. He has never had a family member in his whole life or even a friend of lover. He is a hardened man with only thoughts of power. His abilities include a high strength rate with a normal intelligence level. He is extremely talented with a great sword and war hammer aswell as thinner based swords. He can go threw almost any harsh terrian. His sorcery abilities include a lot of fire usage and fire breathing aswell as strong power attacks and power up abilties.--------------------- Rules arrow You must keep to the rules and obey Vouloir's warnings.
arrow Please do not pick a character and then never return after only roleplaying here once. You must make sure you will return other days in order to roleplay more and continue in this roleplay.
arrow No GMing..or..autohitting and any of that s**t.
arrow Romance is allowed, but keep it pg-13. No cybering!
arrow Please try not to use asterisks and no one liners! --------------------- CharactersThese are the premade characters. Each premade charcater is the head of one kingdom, if you truelly wish to know everything about your chosen character you must read the story line above.
Please state a character you would like to be.Name: Klain Atoe
Played By:
Age: 23
Sex: Male
Race: Vampire
Ruler of: Kingdom Shred
Appearance:
Weapon(s) of choice: Black energy b*****d sword and dark energy.
Powers/Abilities: Able to manipulate shadow elements and dark energy to his own will. High abilities in sword usage of a b*****d and greatsword. Able to run at deep speeds aswell as fly and also can breath under water. Also is able to transform into a large black raven.
Can shift threw shadows, teleport, and has high vision, especially at night.
Weakness: Deeply in love with Avier.
Name: Avier Voa
Played By: Vouloir
Age: 19
Sex: Female
Race: Elf/Fallen Angel
Ruler of: Kingdom Asteria
Appearance:
Weapon(s) of choice: Light Great sword, wind and light powers.
Powers/Abilities: Able to turn into a small white fox, able to manipulate wind, high healing abilities, and also uses light based energy to create blasts. Creates holy light which can harm creaters of the night and purify beings of shadow. High sword abilities and healing abilities aswell as high speed. Able to fly, take to animals and has a high charisma, dexterity(hand-eye coordination), and knowledge level. Can with stand high temperatures and is able to use telekenetics.
Weakness: Low strength and may be too loving at times.
Name: Taku Hashanu
Played By:
Age: 21
Race: Elf/Human
Sex: Male
Ruler of: Kingdom Kahki
Appearance:
Weapon(s) of choice: long sword/katana relation, long bow, the usage of earth based attacks.
Powers/Abilities: High speed and accuracy, uses the usage of rocks, stones, vines, plants, and all other bases of earth in attacks and powers. Able to speak and manipulate animals. Can hide within trees and make himself stop breathing for a long time in order to make complete silences. Able to make an arrow go an extremely long distance threw large and thick objects even and also is able to jump extremely high. Also has telekenetic abilities.
Weakness: Layed back and trusts people too much.
Name: Namu Bier
Played By:
Age: 24
Race: SeaWolf / Human
Sex: Female
Ruler of: Kingdom Waster
Appearance:
 ((Has legs in her land walking form.))
Weapon(s) of choice: Long Spear, shuriken (throwing stars), kunai knives, smoke bombs, and water abilities.
Powers/Abilities: Able to breath under water, fight extremely well under water, swim quickly, can manipulate water to her will and create ice or mists from water. Quick abilities with light weapons (her spear mainly). She also has extreme stealth and is able to hide almost everywhere with ease and accuracy. Able to dodge and put up strong barriers. She also can take in energy to help heal herself depending on how much water is located around her. She can lastly, transform into an aquatic being, like a mermaid.
Weakness: Clumsy and too quick to act.
Name: Fieror Iota
Played By:
Age: 27
Race: Pest Demon / Human
Sex: Male
Ruler of: Kingdom of Smoke
Appearance:
Weapon(s) of choice: Great sword and fire based war hammer.
Powers/Abilities: Able to with-stand harsh environments, high endurance, extremely strong, able to create fire and manipulate it to his will. Able to weild large weapons, can breath poisons. He can also teleport, and can control small rodents and reptiles to his will, (not including dragons, except fire dragons, he can control fire dragons.)
Weakness: Not too intelligent, hot temper.-- Custom Made CharactersHere are the profiles that are of people who have merely joined sides or are wanderers in the world, unknown to a place of home. Please follow this information when you make a custom player.[b]Name:[/b]
[b]Age:[/b]
[b]Sex:[/b]
[b]Race:[/b]
[b]Kingdom:[/b]
[b]Appearance:[/b]
[b]Weapon(s) of Choice:[/b]
[b]Power/Abilities:[/b]
[b]Weakness:[/b] --
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Posted: Sun Dec 11, 2005 10:11 am
Sounds cool to me. The only thing that I would add is something that would turn the tides, causing conflict. Like one of the kingdoms who fight, have a slight weakening cause the powers to be unequal. And we all know what happens when things are unequal.Oh yeah, and Id personally like to play as Klain.
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Posted: Sun Dec 11, 2005 10:21 am
Well what would you have in mind? Something that could...cause more conflict. So far, every one of them have the desire, well eccept Avier, to war over land, yet they just have different means of it.
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Posted: Sun Dec 11, 2005 10:31 am
More conflict ...sure. Right now there just fighting and nothing is happening no one is winning, and they have been in an battle that wont end. With the sides tilted a bit, than somthing should progressivly happen.It could end up being less conflict.
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Posted: Sun Dec 11, 2005 10:38 am
Like..add onto the storyline and say something like,
'Though this battle seemed neverending. I had been lasting forever and went threw many generations. Oddly enough, it was found that the Mountain based Kingdom of Smoke was beginning to win. Yet the Earth kingdom began to send in spies to all kingdoms, including ones to Avier's in order to try and get her to side with them.'
-shrugs-
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Posted: Sun Dec 11, 2005 11:44 am
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