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 Posted: Thu Dec 03, 2009 7:47 pm
drawing one of my old avi below  drawing 2 another old avi drawing
please tell me what u think and what i should approve one i have been on for a while and dont know if some people still do the line thing over the pic thing but please leave some comments and pleaase do be honest i want to get better
thanks justine
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Posted: Thu Dec 03, 2009 10:21 pm
1st picture: I think the head should appear a bit more hunched over... Moving the head down so the chin connects with the scarf thing would probably solve it, I think. The arms seem kinda weird, but I can't really put my finger on it... The one on the left is noticeably thinner than the one on the right, though.
Also, at the bottom center of the black stripe at the eyes, I think the peak of it should be more to the left... like, along where the center of the nose would be. Actually, I'd even give it a kinda sharp line at the point where it starts to climb over the nose. Kinda like this:
__A__
You could either remove that horizontal line in the letter A or cut off the / at the top of the A (this would make the bridge of the nose appear wider).
I like the body/legs and hand. The other lines could generally be a bit less shaky.
2nd picture: The neck seems a bit too detached from the head... I don't know enough about the head/neck connection to give decent advice on that... I'd either have the neck slant like or I'd move the head more to the right.
Something seems weird around the elbow, and the forearm is perhaps a bit too wide.
I generally like the rest of this picture. Maybe the pose is a bit awkward, though. If your waist and breasts are turned away, I think it would be pretty tricky to have your belly button turned in the other direction. Or perhaps the breasts just need to be turned more towards our right... yeah, I think that would make the most sense with the belly button's position and the angle of the shoulders. Perhaps a slight bit of cleavage could help show the angle.
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Posted: Fri Dec 04, 2009 5:19 pm
1st- the arms are too long for the torso. especially the one hidden behind. when drawing arms try to remember that the fingertips should hit just below the crotch. (tis true! look in the mirror!) also experiment with shrugging the shoulders, shoulders are well capable of moving up and down and may help with the wonky arm issue (?-above post)
her mouth would be better if it was a darker shade of the skin tone, i know its avi art and all but maybe not such a harsh black.
very well colored though! its very cute!
2nd- i like this one, the shoulders are ok try working with those a little more. the main thing that sticks out to me is her chest, you've lined up her body at 3/4ths view with her face and belly button, and therefore you should have a slight view of her other breast and leg that matter. wonderful shading and i love the position! i really like it!
your art is very good! keep practicing and drawing cause i like it.
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Posted: Fri Dec 04, 2009 7:25 pm
yes thank u guys for the comments i have drawn for the longest time and i just been working but when i got my internet back and got inspired i feel i kinda lost some of my talent of drawing like i feel it looks aweful but it didnt quick came out so aweful as i thought but i do see what yall are saying on the arms i was not really good with arms and hands in particular but like i was saying i am trying
it just been so long but thank u for everything this makes me happy ^^
to llapasllaly->>>
well thank u so much about the comment of my coloring i love to color i guess im still new with photoshop but trying to learn more of it and thank u for liking of my style im going to try to post some more drawings soon and to get more help
zantetsken->>>
thank u also for commenting i see the breast is very weird =.= looks like she has one tit lol>.< poor thing and thanks again for everything
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Posted: Fri Dec 04, 2009 9:08 pm
there are ALOT of photoshop tutorials on Deviantart thats where i learned most of mine. if you want to look at them that is, alot of things on photoshop have to be learned first hand XD
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Posted: Sun Dec 06, 2009 10:45 pm
yes and i forgot to mention on the photoshop picture i didnt have a mouse to color it i had to use the sensor pad thingy which was not fun!!!!!
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