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MeekaMinniee

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Posted: Mon Nov 30, 2009 9:46 pm

If anyone has any other poems plz post here so other ppl can read them too

Here is my random i-dont-want-to-do-my-homework poem...

Did you hear? Did you hear?
The willow trees sighed
As they watched a lonely fisherman walk on by
Did you know? Did you know?
The north wind said
As it blew the hat off the fisherman’s head
Did you see? Did you see?
The mountains pined
As the fisherman threw in a baited line
Did you feel? Did you feel?
The raindrops cried
As the strong brewing winds slowly died
Did you smell? Did you smell?
The grasses moaned
As the fisherman packed up to go back home
Won’t you help? Won’t you help?
The fireflies wailed
As the fisherman tried to anchor but failed
Have you tried? Have you tried?
The stars did ask
As the fisherman despaired, his emotion a mask
Have I known? Have I known?
Mother earthed groaned
As she helped the fisherman sail back home.

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Posted: Mon Nov 30, 2009 11:30 pm

Homework Blues

Staring at a blank screen
The courser is blinking on the screen
Blink
Blink
Blink
Mocking me with every
Blink
Stop blinking!
I slap the key bored
An error pops up
I want to scream and throw my text book at the screen
That mocking blank screen
I type my name and date
Still too blank
Why does homework have to be so boring?
It is nothing I want to learn
It shouldn't be this hard
Now I procrastinate
Gaia how will you help me?
You can't
You wont
That's it
I have failed my class
It's not hard work
A few dates here
A famous dead guy there
I end this now
In hopes that I'll pass
My irritatingly boring
History class

God Gets Writers Block Too

God is writing the story of my life
He writes it clearly and plainly
He gave me a personality
A beauty unique to me
An education
A good life
No love
Maybe it's writers block
But God's not human
He doesn't have such a flaw
Writers block
Who will I fall in love with?
When will I get my happily ever after?
Will I fall in love?
Will I get a happily ever after?
Is this part of the story
or just another filler?
A filler until the writers block subsides perhaps?
My life on hold because of the most human thing ever
Writers block . . .
Writers Block is not too good for God

I Love My Babies!
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Aro, I love you

You are the king of my zoo

You are my first born and you are the only one who hate me too

The Iguana with the attitude

Is the one who swings my mood

You whip, bite, and glare at me day after day

But when you see food that demonic attitude goes away

I love you Aro

My king, my beast

Please, oh, please enjoy this feast

You rush to your food as if you were starved

But you eat everyday like fat tub of lard

Dear Aro sitting there

Stretched out in your ninety degree tank

Baking away like a green cake

Haha

That was funny

A green cake?

Right

Aro, your beautiful

You know that, right?

Of course you do

You pose for pictures

Get jealous of Cream

Just take a nap and have sweet dreams

I love you Aro

My dragon, my beast

The King of this castle

I leave it to thee

Kiki, your not really my cat

I stole you from my mom

'Cause from the moment we brought you home

I feel in love

You hid from the world in my room of all places

You bonded with Aro who couldn't stand your kitty cat face

Your eyes are huge

Your tail is long

I make fun of you all day long

But deep down you know

That I love you so

That is why you broke the lock on my door

Even so, you wont come in

And for that I love you my kitten

You cry like a dying dog

You stare off into space like you're in deep thought

Who knows maybe you are

Cats are known for being sneaky after all

Whatever your plotting you hide it well

For all we know you're as dumb as a bell

I love you Kiki

I hope you love me too

Because someday soon you'll be getting a bath

Maybe two

Cream, oh, Cream

My lovely snake

How I bask in your beauty

Your grace

The silk of your scales on my skin

How I love you my friend

You never strike

You never run

Sometimes I worry

But you stay plump

No one understands why I love you so

Your beauty repulses so many people . . . oh

You're tiny and calm

No one dares take notice

They think because of your diet that you will bring harm

Humans eat cows

All you eat are baby mice

Maybe it's your eyes

Yes

Red eyes always screams demon, devil, monster, beast

But you're not

So long as I know that it doesn't matter

I'll protect you from those cruel people

That demon cat

And that crazy dragon

No one loves you like I do Cream

I wish you had ears so that I could tell you that

Even if you did you probably wouldn't understand

Sigh

Oh, well

Queen, Jack, and Joker

Your names came from a card deck but it suits you, no?

Queen you are cruel and greedy

You fight for your food without mercy

Jack you are no different

You both are bloated and mean

You stick together like glue

The Queen's affair with the Jack

Poor Joker

He must wait for the leftovers

He is bitten and stepped on

Ignored and bothered

He is fearful yet calm

The Joker knows his place

He stays away from his Queen while she feeds

He stays close to her when she sleeps

He ignores the Jack

Fore he knows that it's not worth the fight

My lovely frogs

You are by far the smallest of the family

But you are the most interesting

Everyday there is a story

You are dwarfs

You will never get bigger then one in a half

Maybe two inches

Aro will be no smaller then five feet

Cream three feet

But you my dear frogs are tiny

And shall be forever

I love all of my animals

My children

My responsibility

Nobody cares for them like me

Nobody wants to touch them

Everyone wants to look at them and tell them how ugly they are

but really

Who is the ugly one?

The beautiful creature who has been around for hundreds of centuries longer then we

Or the human who barely evolved from the primates we insult daily not too long ago?

Hm . . .

I love you all

Fin

~Silly Little Kitsune~
Crew

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~Silly Little Kitsune~
Crew

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Posted: Mon Nov 30, 2009 11:32 pm

That was really cute Minnie! I really liked it! Keep up the good work!

Posted: Tue Dec 01, 2009 3:22 pm

Fly Away

Fly away to the safer day
Fly away to the better stay
Slip away, running down
Letting go, letting go
Shifting glass

Fly away, fly away
Bleeding through, broken heart
Laughing till the final moment
Falling fast, slipping through
Shattered pieces falling down on you
Her memory last forever for you

Fly away to a safer day
Fly away, fly away to the better stay
Slip away, running down
Letting go, letting go
Broken wing
Darling dear
So far, too far to grasp

Death holds you now
Too close for comfort
Fly away, fly away
Falling down
Shattered
Fly away
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~Vampire’s promise~
Fangs as sharp as knives
Looks as young as virgin
Tongue as forked as serpent
Only giving the promise of love, life & happiness.
Fangs as sharp as knives
Body tucked away inside
Promises to never trust; only to their lust.
The vampire to say is the razor upon thy skin-
Sharp. Quick. Painful or Painless.
A vampire promise of only immortal demise.
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Love Note

I wrote you a letter, but I forgot to send it.
I wrote your name in the sky, but the wind blew it away.
I started to think of you, I started to cry.
I know you are just fine, but I can't help to think of you.
I know you care, but within our silences there are other things that come before me.
There is little I can say but what I will say is, I love you.
Always and forever, through think and thin, that is how it will always be.
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~Simile: Light and Darkness~

Light is like a butterfly,
Peaceful and graceful.
Then darkness is peaceful as any war,
Dangerous and ferocious.
Light is like a child,
Sweet and true.
Darkness is like a troublemaker,
Untrustworthy and mutinous.

Darkness is like the abyss,
Dark, black and cold.
Light is like the sun,
Bright, warm, and beautiful.
The darkness of any heart is cruel as old man winter,
Harsh, unforgiving, and spiteful.
Light is like Mother Nature,
Benevolent, sincere and placid.

The light shines through every crack;
Like a child wondering where you’re at.
Hidden amongst the trees,
Swaying in the noon breeze.
My eyes long to gaze into the light,
But my heart goes to darkness.

XxSerenity HeartxX

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Posted: Tue Dec 01, 2009 4:03 pm

Yay! good poems ^^ wat do u think i should improve on?

Posted: Wed Dec 02, 2009 1:56 pm

I've got a few. biggrin Here's the opening line for my old guild, Fallow's Castle.

"Welcome, all who enter here and pass these iron doors,
To castle nestled ever deep twixt wood and rolling moor.
I leave this place, my house, to you, so use it as you need,
But to this simple warning, I pray you all take heed.
The stairwells oft change places and the gargoyles have no heads,
the dustbins fancy sleeping 'way the hours on the beds,
the couches like to move themselves about from room to room,
and be careful, one and all, of our tempermental broom.
And if you see things unusual, or out of place at all,
don't worry long about them: they belong in Fallow's Hall."

-Inscription on the door of Fallow's Castle.

And this is the "prophecy" for my animation project:

“The ice and rock will split and fade, the titan's wrath reveals,
what others' hatred helped create, the wound that never heals.
Many falter at it's feet, the greatest of them can't defeat,
what was inside them all along, the fated number bent to wrong.
They must unite, the titan says, or all is bound to fail,
For evil waits 'round every turn, yet one light still prevails.”

-The Prophecy

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Posted: Thu Dec 03, 2009 9:23 am

Here's three of mine i just had on hand.

Who Am I..

Am I the one who is going to be a music star?
Am I the unneeded sound in the auditorium?
Or am I the missing "boom" to the "chick"?
Am I the writer to be world renowned?
Am I the twisted demon child scratching words?
Or am I the inspirational words for the lost soul?
Am I the next President of the U.S.?
Am I the snobby bossy bitchy Editor-In-Chief?
Or am I the leader of the forgetten, giving them hope?
Am I the bodacious friendly person at lunch?
Am I the secluded emo girl in the corner?
Or am I the friend everyone needs but few look for?
Am I dreaming?
Am I degrading?
Or am I determined...?

[UN]Classic Teenager Love Poem

The oil bubbles
Like jellyfish
For your onion rings
Skater shoes
Click impatiently
Sweat sickening
From noon day work
Bicycles ring
Toasters pop
Making onion rings
In the diner
Indie rock humming
On the radio
For you

they call me an artist

They call me an artist
but what do they know...
I bleed my soul onto notebooks
scrape my fingers across frets
slide my heart on canvas
and they still call me an artist
when my poems are nothing but hate
misery and death
when my songs mean nonsense mixed with
pain and suffering
when my paintings and drawing are nothing but
scribbles and slashes
and they still call me an artist
why is what I ask everyday
I cant get in the book
cant get on the stage
cant get the decent score of creativness
and they still...
dare call me an artist...

Posted: Thu Dec 03, 2009 9:42 pm

Oooo very nice! biggrin biggrin I heart your last poem deafeningthesilence smile and interesting poem juniorgenius xd

I take all and come around
Every few lasting days
To change the views of many
In my everlasting ways
You cannot hear or see me
Im like a syndrome disaster
One big wrong move you take
Will make your heart or others shatter
But people want me to invade
To take their mind and soul
And ease the pain of life
To make them completely whole
But don’t they know?
But don’t they see?
I am as elusive as the air around
And as slippery as the sea
I’m as vast as the galaxy
Perhaps maybe even more
And I fill the hearts of many
Who open them like doors
So you might say I’m a drug
But what a drug I am!
I make you feel good inside
With no side effects afterhand
Mortals dream about the day
They meet me and fall
To the depths of this pit
And never come out at all
But sooner or later, I have to disappear
Leaving behind only ruined dreams and fantasies
Because all gifts in the end
Don’t you know that their not free?
But I’ll tell you a secret
That only special people know
That if you really try you're hardest
Your feelings shall really grow
You’ll feel like your floating on a cloud
As soft wings of a dove
And you want to know what it’s called?
It’s called
Love

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Posted: Fri Dec 04, 2009 1:50 pm

MeekaMinniee

Oooo very nice! biggrin biggrin I heart your last poem deafeningthesilence smile and interesting poem juniorgenius xd

I take all and come around
Every few lasting days
To change the views of many
In my everlasting ways
You cannot hear or see me
Im like a syndrome disaster
One big wrong move you take
Will make your heart or others shatter
But people want me to invade
To take their mind and soul
And ease the pain of life
To make them completely whole
But don’t they know?
But don’t they see?
I am as elusive as the air around
And as slippery as the sea
I’m as vast as the galaxy
Perhaps maybe even more
And I fill the hearts of many
Who open them like doors
So you might say I’m a drug
But what a drug I am!
I make you feel good inside
With no side effects afterhand
Mortals dream about the day
They meet me and fall
To the depths of this pit
And never come out at all
But sooner or later, I have to disappear
Leaving behind only ruined dreams and fantasies
Because all gifts in the end
Don’t you know that their not free?
But I’ll tell you a secret
That only special people know
That if you really try you're hardest
Your feelings shall really grow
You’ll feel like your floating on a cloud
As soft wings of a dove
And you want to know what it’s called?
It’s called
Love

I like the way you put your ending together. biggrin

"And you want to know what it’s called?
It’s called
Love"

Putting "love" on a separate line really completed the rthym. Sometimes your beat is off, though- try reading your poem out loud to hear where things aren't consistent.

Posted: Fri Dec 11, 2009 9:24 pm

Yay poetry, it makes me happy and sad all at once

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Posted: Thu Dec 17, 2009 10:46 pm

LOL

Juniorgenius: Oooh, thanks!

Are monsters really monsters?
Or are we, the humankind?
Have we lost are magic?
Or have they turned into divine?
Are we scared of fighting them?
When we fear, fear itself?
Then are they the source and cause?
When we take the weapons off the shelf?

*haha i was supposed to write a peice of creative writing for school...ah well*

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