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Any advice?

Slynst

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Posted: Sun Nov 29, 2009 10:55 pm

All pencil.
I did this last week.

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Pencil crayons and some pencil.
I did this quite a while ago. Six months?

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Pencil and some pastels. (I know the area that I used pastel on is really messy D: )
I did this today.

I've never been to art class, so I'm in need of some advice.
Constructive criticism anyone?

Posted: Mon Nov 30, 2009 1:18 am

Your shading looks pretty good, but you need to check your proportions on the human face. The forehead was too high and wide, and the mouth and chin too small.

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delete_my_existence

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Posted: Mon Nov 30, 2009 4:37 am

yup, I was going to say about the proportions too.. :3
not only on the girl, but on the wolf too. looks like it's nozzle
is too low.

other than that it's looking good.

Posted: Mon Nov 30, 2009 3:39 pm

Thanks, I'll try to proportion it better on my next sketch. x)

Slynst

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Azusanga

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Posted: Mon Nov 30, 2009 3:55 pm

Yah, I was going to say that too.

Also, the wolf's eyes... one is focused to the right, and one is straight forward.

Posted: Mon Nov 30, 2009 7:17 pm

Satin_Slippers

Yah, I was going to say that too.

Also, the wolf's eyes... one is focused to the right, and one is straight forward.

Lol, one is normal, and one is with my initials in the center x)

Slynst

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broken_bleeding_angel

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Posted: Wed Dec 02, 2009 2:12 pm

I see what you're saying Azu. Yeah the one eye is off and you need too work on proportions a bit.

Work on your anatomy some more.

Posted: Sat Dec 05, 2009 12:51 am

oX-lil-Ayuz-Xo

All pencil.
I did this last week.

User Image

Pencil crayons and some pencil.
I did this quite a while ago. Six months?

User Image

Pencil and some pastels. (I know the area that I used pastel on is really messy D: )
I did this today.

I've never been to art class, so I'm in need of some advice.
Constructive criticism anyone?

dats rlly gd wat u drew n u shaded in der rite places so its fantastic