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 Posted: Sun Nov 29, 2009 6:45 pm
[[Approved by Cory]] Ok so heres the system. Genin can control 2 puppets at most unless they have an ability that adds more puppets to that count. Chuunin: 4 Jounin: 6 Sannin/Kage: 10 Human puppet: 100 That is the maximum number of puppets you can use per class. Now then this is the other system we will be using for this thread. You decide the rank of the puppet you make, but the number of posts you must make to make the puppet increase. D= 2 C= 5 B= 10 A= 15 S= 20 SS= 20 plus approval of a mod for the immense power it could cause. Post your custom puppets down here for approval by me. The description must be a paragraph long and please be literate so you dont kill my brain. NO PUPPETS CAN DRAIN CHAKRA! EVER! Heres the layout:
Username:
RPC:
Rank:
Puppet Name:
Puppet Rank:
Description:
Weak Joint:
Picture (not mandatory):
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Posted: Sun Nov 29, 2009 6:49 pm
Contis puppets so far! Username: Constipated Emotion RPC: Aoi Rinnegan Rank: S-Ranked Puppet Name: Rybio Puppet Rank: B Description: A very human-looking Puppet. Rybio possesses an lethal poison spray that he emits from his mouth. It kills in less than 4 days if it even touches your skin. The spray only coveres about a foot in front of his face though. It holds two blades. One serrated and large and the other a sickle that can cut clean through bone. Its fingers emit thin but durable metal wires to connect to a loop in his blades so it can strike from longer distances. There are blades sticking out of the front of its shoe as well as its wrists. Very physically powerful Puppet. It has teeth that are made of a strong metal. They are sharpened to perfection and could rend any mans throat easily. It has a bladed ‘Tongue’ that he shoots out for a quick death rather then the slow acting poison spray. It has a blue hood covering the upper half of its body to hide and protect its weak joint as well as hide its surprise. Under the hood, where his chest would be, there is a place just large enough to fit a body into if they were pulled in by the puppet itself. The pressure pads inside of that hole, would be triggered, causing small blades to erupt inside of the hole. There’s also explosive tags inside him for extra measure if he needs to take someone out in a pinch or face death. Almost every one of his joints has a dagger sized blade that can come out of it. Great at grappling barehanded. He is in fact a human puppet that Aoi had killed before he joined the akatsuki. The puppet retained a strong fighting ability that enables it to take almost anyone in a hand to hand grapple. Weak Joint: The joints on its knees. Picture (not mandatory):  Username: Constipated Emotion RPC: Blue Rinnegan Rank: S rank missing nin/ Akatsuki Puppet Name: Aliot Puppet Rank: A Description: Aliot's blades are as sharp as katanas and there are 20 of them emerging from the back. Aliot's nails can extend into small Ninjato and he can fire an acid/poison spray from his mouth. He is just your usual steel puppet. He has a thick poison coating the blades that can kill within a week if not treated properly. The speed of Aliot and his stealth capability, capable of looking like a normal human, makes him deadly. Weak Joint: Between is shoulderblades where the blades come from. Picture (not mandatory):  Username: Constipated Emotion RPC: Blue Rinnegan Rank: S-ranked missing nin/ Akatsuki. Puppet Name: Alicel Puppet Rank: S Description: Alicel is a slim girl. She is a human puppet made by Blue. She was in fact a girl he was sure he was in love with when he was a child. She rejected him and he repaid her by killing her. This just goes to show Blues heartless and sick demeanor. Alicel has heavy titanium spheres as hands, with long razor sharp sickle-like claws on it. She always wears a long sleeved shirt to hide them. She usually wears a small skirt other than that. The metal spheres are connected by a cable to be sent out like a projectile or to latch onto something or someone. She has normal looking teeth but behind them on the roof of her mouth is a small microphone about the size of a bug, that Blue can project his voice through. Theres also a tape recorder behind one of her eyes for reconassaince. She has a chakra shield that blocks out chuunin or lower attacks and causes a minor genjutsu to anyone near her. She becomes invisible to the naked eye to anyone within half a mile of her, but if anyone were looking from farther away she would be clearly seen. Her claws inject a deadly poison that can kill in three days without treatment, but it only works if it gets into the bloodstream. She has a special chakra infused convex lens in her eye that allows Blue to see through them as he would be seeing through his own. Including eye jutsus. [Not like sharingan or genjutsu, but like seeing through mist] Weak Joint: Shoulders. Picture (not mandatory): 
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Posted: Sun Nov 29, 2009 7:05 pm
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Posted: Tue Dec 01, 2009 4:12 pm
Username: Aqua Fall 12 RPC: Cory Lei Rank: Genin (D) Puppet Name: Aian Gunba (Iron Warhorse)
Puppet Rank: C
Description: Due to the fact Cory lacks raw power in his arsenal of puppets, he sought to fix it by taking wood from the Fire Country forests. All Cory really did was take blocks of wood and sand them down to the point it was very hard to burn and retain water damage. Aian Gunba cannot be affected by wind jutsu at his rank and below, seeing as how he cannot be lifted or moved easily. For the hands, Cory used steel cannonballs that he had salvaged from a shipwreck during his training with Blue to the Wave Country. Aian Gunba is known for amazing feats of strength, being able to shatter a boulder in a single hit. His strikes can shatter bones with little difficulty, and fracture Kaguya bone with relative ease.
Weapons:
- Super Strength (Can lift about 600lbs/272.7kg)
- Steel Spheres in hands
Weak Joint: Right Wrist (Very hard to hit)
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Posted: Tue Dec 01, 2009 4:22 pm
Just a sidenote but 200 pounds wouldn't be super strength. XD
super strength would be like 400 pounds or above. haha.
I know people that have lifted 350 pounds. XD
Just telling you.
Also as for its inability to be scratched or damaged easily that needs to be changed.
Like lets make it block winds up to one rank above him and as he levels up it increases and such.
Make sure that he isn't impervious to normal weapons either. So he can be scratched. It doesn't matter much as long as his weak joint isn't hit.
Other than that Its approved.
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Posted: Tue Dec 01, 2009 4:32 pm
Aqua Fall 12 Username: Aqua Fall 12 RPC: Cory Lei Rank: Genin (D) Puppet Name: Aian Gunba (Iron Warhorse)
Puppet Rank: C
Description: Due to the fact Cory lacks raw power in his arsenal of puppets, he sought to fix it by taking wood from the Fire Country forests. All Cory really did was take blocks of wood and sand them down to the point it was very hard to burn and retain water damage. Aian Gunba cannot be affected by wind jutsu at his rank and below, seeing as how he cannot be lifted or moved easily. For the hands, Cory used steel cannonballs that he had salvaged from a shipwreck during his training with Blue to the Wave Country. Aian Gunba is known for amazing feats of strength, being able to shatter a boulder in a single hit. His strikes can shatter bones with little difficulty, and fracture Kaguya bone with relative ease.
Weapons:
- Super Strength (Can lift about 600lbs/272.7kg)
- Steel Spheres in hands
Weak Joint: Right Wrist (Very hard to hit)
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Posted: Tue Dec 01, 2009 4:50 pm
Accepted. :]
Dont forget to add it onto the sdame post. :]
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Posted: Wed Dec 02, 2009 7:01 pm
Username: Sakoyoshi Daianohara
RPC Name: Hideki "Hazard" Morinozuka
RPC Rank: Genin
Puppet Name: Raiden
Puppet Rank: B
Description: This puppet is part of Hideki's Thunder Squadron. This is the Link Puppet. It has a a Lightning Rod on its forehead that Raiden can conduct Lightning with and absorb the energy. This ability is selective and can absorb any Lightning Jutsu up to A-Rank. This puppet can charge its own attacks with the energy. It is able to fight in close combat and can emit electrical pulses that stun a human's body and cause severe damage.
This puppet's special ability in the Thunder Squadron is that it can link to another puppet with its own Chakra String. It can send its own energy into another puppet that can manipulate Lightning. It can link to up to however many puppets that Hideki can control. This does not allow Hideki to control more puppets. This ability adds an Electrical Charge to attacks and enhances all Lightning-Based attacks. Strings can be attached for a total of 10 of the user's posts. Raiden must absorb a Lightning-Based attacks to use the Link Ability.
Weak Joint: Tail
Use this code for the puppets. Looks better and easier for the people who like to add the "Bold" and "Italic" codes.
[color=black][size=9] [b]Username:[/b] [b]RPC Name:[/b] [b]RPC Rank:[/b] [b]Puppet Name:[/b] [b]Puppet Rank:[/b] [b]Description:[/b] [b]Weak Point:[/b]
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Posted: Thu Dec 03, 2009 5:05 pm
Username: xX Death Soldier Xx
RPC Name: Cody Morinzuka
RPC Rank: Genin
Puppet Name: Kristalltod
Puppet Rank: C-Ranked
Description: Kirstalltod is a Dragon like puppet. He was one of the first puppets Cody made. Kristalltod can shot neddles out of each claw. He can also shot out a deadly poison gas from his mouth. His wings are as hard as steel so he could use them for a defense if needed. Kristalltod also has poison on the tip of his tail. Kristalltod has two chest conpartments the left one can shot out Kunai or Shuriken. The right one has thin wire used for traps. He can also have the wire coated in poison for a more deadly affect
Weak Point: Mouth joint
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Posted: Thu Dec 03, 2009 5:10 pm
xX Death Soldier Xx
Username: xX Death Soldier Xx
RPC Name: Cody Morinzuka
RPC Rank: Genin
Puppet Name: Kristalltod
Puppet Rank: C-Ranked
Description: Kirstalltod is a Dragon like puppet. He was one of the first puppets Cody made. Kristalltod can shot neddles out of each claw. He can also shot out a deadly poison gas from his mouth. His wings are as hard as steel so he could use them for a defense if needed. Kristalltod also has poison on the tip of his tail. Kristalltod has two chest conpartments the left one can shot out Kunai or Shuriken. The right one has thin wire used for traps. He can also have the wire coated in poison for a more deadly affect
Weak Point: Mouth joint
You are restricted to E-D ranked puppets, and Kirstalltod is easily B-A ranked. You can make him, but you wont be able to control him until later. I would approve, but it's up to Trans-Lamb.
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Posted: Thu Dec 03, 2009 5:14 pm
Aqua Fall 12 xX Death Soldier Xx
Username: xX Death Soldier Xx
RPC Name: Cody Morinzuka
RPC Rank: Genin
Puppet Name: Kristalltod
Puppet Rank: C-Ranked
Description: Kirstalltod is a Dragon like puppet. He was one of the first puppets Cody made. Kristalltod can shot neddles out of each claw. He can also shot out a deadly poison gas from his mouth. His wings are as hard as steel so he could use them for a defense if needed. Kristalltod also has poison on the tip of his tail. Kristalltod has two chest conpartments the left one can shot out Kunai or Shuriken. The right one has thin wire used for traps. He can also have the wire coated in poison for a more deadly affect
Weak Point: Mouth joint
You are restricted to E-D ranked puppets, and Kirstalltod is easily B-A ranked. You can make him, but you wont be able to control him until later. I would approve, but it's up to Trans-Lamb. Ok I will beable to live with that.
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Posted: Thu Dec 03, 2009 10:00 pm
Username: Aqua Fall 12
RPC Name: Cory Lei
RPC Rank: Genin
Puppet Name: Toriodoshi (Scarecrow)
Puppet Rank: C-B
Description: Toriodoshi is a puppet known for it's speed, and effectiveness in battle. It is said that Cory spent time watching mist swordsmen, studying their techniques so that he may implement them into his puppet's controls. Toriodoshi's right hand is a large scythe blade, like the ones farmers use to harvest crops, and his left, a dagger like the ones hunters use to hunt. His eyes are made of layers, making it seem as though he has the Rinnegan. Toriodoshi doesn't have the rinnegan however, but the eyes allow Cory to see through Toriodoshi's eyes when riding inside of him. His chest compartment can open up, where he can trap opponents or transport allies, at the back of the chest compartment is a rack where very durable wire is held. This wire is shot out to ensare his opponents, and reel them back in to face their doom by being crushed by his chest cavity. The black dot on his head shoots senbon out at frightening speeds, and his oral cavity sprays out a poison gas which can kill within a week if not treated properly. Flashbangs, smokebombs, and poison smoke bombs are also in his oral cavity.
Weapons:
- Scythe Arm
- Dagger Arm
- Senbon Shooter
- Poison gas/Poison gas bombs
- Flashbang
Weak Point: Neck
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Posted: Fri Dec 04, 2009 4:02 pm
Aqua Fall 12
Username: Aqua Fall 12
RPC Name: Cory Lei
RPC Rank: Genin
Puppet Name: Toriodoshi (Scarecrow)
Puppet Rank: C-B
Description: Toriodoshi is a puppet known for it's speed, and effectiveness in battle. It is said that Cory spent time watching mist swordsmen, studying their techniques so that he may implement them into his puppet's controls. Toriodoshi's right hand is a large scythe blade, like the ones farmers use to harvest crops, and his left, a dagger like the ones hunters use to hunt. His eyes are made of layers, making it seem as though he has the Rinnegan. Toriodoshi doesn't have the rinnegan however, but the eyes allow Cory to see through Toriodoshi's eyes when riding inside of him. His chest compartment can open up, where he can trap opponents or transport allies, at the back of the chest compartment is a rack where very durable wire is held. This wire is shot out to ensare his opponents, and reel them back in to face their doom by being crushed by his chest cavity. The black dot on his head shoots senbon out at frightening speeds, and his oral cavity sprays out a poison gas which can kill within a week if not treated properly. Flashbangs, smokebombs, and poison smoke bombs are also in his oral cavity.
Weapons:
- Scythe Arm
- Dagger Arm
- Senbon Shooter
- Poison gas/Poison gas bombs
- Flashbang
Weak Point: Neck
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Posted: Sat Dec 05, 2009 10:04 am
@Sakoyoshi: Declined. You are only a genin so you can only use D ranked and below puppets. you can make it for later though, although there are still problems. It cant connect to other puppets. Thats Pretty much giving you the ability to get twice as many puppets. Anyways the puppet wouldn't have its own chakra to use for the chakra string.
@Death: Denied. It has to be D ranked or below. Also the poison wouldn't e deadly if it were C ranked unless, it took like a week to kill.
@Cory: Accepted, but you cant use it till your chuunin.
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Posted: Sun Dec 06, 2009 8:24 pm
I understand that I can't use it yet, but, about the Chakra Strings, Raiden can't control other puppets. It transfers energy to other puppets to amplfy the attacks. Raiden is mainly for support so that I can beaf up my other puppets in the Thunder Squadron. To use the strings, it has to absorb lightning. I can put limits on how long the strings can be attached to another puppet if you like.
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