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Tsukoyomi
Rank: Only Mangekokyo Sharingan can do it.
Ninja with Sharingan looks into the eyes if opponent for this justu to work. Happens in 3 seconds tops. There are 3 stages of pain. First stage, physical pain. Second stage, They fall in a deep pit that never ends. Third, Emotional and Mental Pain. Repeats Tragedy in life over and over.

After peeking over the jutsu, the stat point allocation, and the overall detail I'd say we probably have a school candidate here, even taking away the Uchiha factor.

While I ain't a mod I do offer some services that might help get you on the right track. First I suggest you read over the full character creation process and think up some ideas for a non-Uchiha character, preserving whatever details you can, and from there we can work on fleshing out some more detail and giving it more of the literate factor with proper balance.

To quote the Character Rules topic created by Mrs. Tsunade of the Sannin. I've underlined the specifics that I want you to read:





Also, we have been enforcing the idea that when you start a brand new profile, that you only come in with a single jutsu. This is so that you, as an individual, can grow in our community and become a more fully-developed character.

I like that you spent time on the profile and you have clearly thought through your fire techniques, but there are a few things I'd like to point out.

1. Shadow Clone Jutsu: Not only is this a canon technique, it is also a forbidden technique and possession of it's knowledge is border-line illegal, as evident by how much work Naruto had to go through with his scroll stealing just to get his hands on it.

2. Lions Barrage: Is a canon technique, created by Gai, taught to Rock Lee, copied by Sasuke and also copied by Naruto. In order to have a technique like this, we require that your character receive In Character training from one of those four canon characters. This isn't an entirely impossible task and I'm certain if you worded a PM requesting this training nicely, any of the moderators would be happy to assist you.

3. Genjutsu Binding: I like the idea, but what you need to remember is that a Genjutsu can be broken with a simple Kai technique. What I would suggest, is that while the person is mentally trapped in the Genjutsu, that you physically bind them down using something like chains or ropes. That would actually be a rather effective technique.

4. Demonic Illusion: Tree binding Death: I want you to focus on exactly what a Genjutsu is. Think of it like a mirage, you are causing the brain to think it is seeing something that is not actually happening. You aren't actually a part of the jutsu, so you as a character can move around and do whatever you want while they are trapped within it. Genjutsu can be simple, things such as as casting an illusion where a person thinks the paper they are signing is a gift-card for a long-time friend, while in actuality they are signing a document selling there first born child into slavery. They can also be complex, making the person believe they are surrounded by dangerous traps, scaring them away from moving while in actuality you are using the time that they spend in your illusion binding their hands and feet so that you can haul them off to jail. If you have been keeping up-to-date on the television show Heroes, think about the mind games that Sylar/Matt were playing against each other earlier in the season, it was never OVERTLY dangerous, just simple tricks of the mind that caused the other to stumble into something horrible.