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 Posted: Thu Nov 26, 2009 6:15 pm
[[Approved by Cory]] Ok so heres the system. Genin can control 2 puppets at most unless they have an ability that adds more puppets to that count. Chuunin: 4 Jounin: 6 Sannin/Kage: 10 Human puppet: 100 That is the maximum number of puppets you can use per class. Now then this is the other system we will be using for this thread. You decide the rank of the puppet you make, but the number of posts you must make to make the puppet increase. D= 2 C= 5 B= 10 A= 15 S= 20 SS= 20 plus approval of a mod for the immense power it could cause. Post your custom puppets down here for approval by me. The description must be a paragraph long and please be literate so you dont kill my brain. NO PUPPETS CAN DRAIN CHAKRA! EVER! Heres the layout:
Username:
RPC:
Rank:
Puppet Name:
Puppet Rank:
Description:
Weak Joint:
Picture (not mandatory):
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Posted: Thu Nov 26, 2009 6:33 pm
Username: Constipated Emotion RPC: Aoi Rinnegan Rank: S-Ranked Puppet Name: Rybio Puppet Rank: B Description: A very human-looking Puppet. Rybio possesses an lethal poison spray that he emits from his mouth. It kills in less than 4 days if it even touches your skin. The spray only coveres about a foot in front of his face though. It holds two blades. One serrated and large and the other a sickle that can cut clean through bone. Its fingers emit thin but durable metal wires to connect to a loop in his blades so it can strike from longer distances. There are blades sticking out of the front of its shoe as well as its wrists. Very physically powerful Puppet. It has teeth that are made of a strong metal. They are sharpened to perfection and could rend any mans throat easily. It has a bladed ‘Tongue’ that he shoots out for a quick death rather then the slow acting poison spray. It has a blue hood covering the upper half of its body to hide and protect its weak joint as well as hide its surprise. Under the hood, where his chest would be, there is a place just large enough to fit a body into if they were pulled in by the puppet itself. The pressure pads inside of that hole, would be triggered, causing small blades to erupt inside of the hole. There’s also explosive tags inside him for extra measure if he needs to take someone out in a pinch or face death. Almost every one of his joints has a dagger sized blade that can come out of it. Great at grappling barehanded. He is in fact a human puppet that Aoi had killed before he joined the akatsuki. The puppet retained a strong fighting ability that enables it to take almost anyone in a hand to hand grapple. Weak Joint: The joints on its knees. Picture (not mandatory): 
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Posted: Thu Nov 26, 2009 6:39 pm
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Posted: Thu Nov 26, 2009 6:41 pm
Why did you say that approved? you are a not Crew or higher... Until Crew or higher see your custom... and its not my job to approve or deny this custom puppets..
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Posted: Thu Nov 26, 2009 6:44 pm
I realize that I'm not crew but Cory told me I could create and be the approver for this thread. You can ask him yourself it happened through PMs.
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Posted: Thu Nov 26, 2009 6:52 pm
Alright then my apolgize...
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Posted: Thu Nov 26, 2009 6:53 pm
Its all good. Lol.
Oh and cory gives his regards by saying. 'Bleh' in the context that means '******** off.'
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Posted: Thu Nov 26, 2009 7:27 pm
Username: Aqua Fall 12
RPC: Cory [put last name here]
Rank: Genin (After I scrap mah character)
Puppet Name: Mantisu (Mantis)
Puppet Rank: E-D
Bio: This is Cory's first puppet, and is actually quite simple at first. During the first days of construction, he only sported flash-bangs, poison gas, and blades and was usually used only as a support-specific puppet. Seeing as how this was Cory's very first personally-made puppet, he holds it dear, and upgrades it every now and then. It is a humaniod shape, with a strong, wooden, yet hollow body that creates an eerie knocking sound whenever hit. Mantisu has a no special human features, and only has eyes, and a mouth.
Weapons:
- Blades on fingers
- Four arms/hands
- Flash bomb-launcher in chest cavity
- Mild poison gas that causes severe itchiness in oral cavity
Weak Joint(s): Neck, shoulders, and groin
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Posted: Thu Nov 26, 2009 7:32 pm
You have to give it a general shape. Like is it a human sort of shape like karasu or is it different like black ant or something?
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Posted: Thu Nov 26, 2009 7:36 pm
Aqua Fall 12 Username: Aqua Fall 12
RPC: Cory [put last name here]
Rank: Genin (After I scrap mah character)
Puppet Name: Mantisu (Mantis)
Puppet Rank: E-D
Bio: This is Cory's first puppet, and is actually quite simple at first. During the first days of construction, he only sported flash-bangs, poison gas, and blades and was usually used only as a support-specific puppet. Seeing as how this was Cory's very first personally-made puppet, he holds it dear, and upgrades it every now and then. It is a humaniod shape, with a strong, wooden, yet hollow body that creates an eerie knocking sound whenever hit. Mantisu has a no special human features, and only has eyes, and a mouth.
Weapons:
- Blades on fingers
- Four arms/hands
- Flash bomb-launcher in chest cavity
- Mild poison gas that causes severe itchiness in oral cavity
Weak Joint(s): Neck, shoulders, and groin
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Posted: Thu Nov 26, 2009 7:38 pm
Accepted. If you ever add anything onto it please repost this and add it for approval. if it goes up a rank because of it, just post the difference between the ranks that it was originally and what its becoming. Lol.
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Posted: Thu Nov 26, 2009 7:39 pm
Constipated Emotion Accepted. If you ever add anything onto it please repost this and add it for approval. if it goes up a rank because of it, just post the difference between the ranks that it was originally and what its becoming. Lol. Dats what I was plannin' to doo, silly-goose!
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Posted: Fri Nov 27, 2009 11:21 am
Username: Aqua Fall 12
RPC: Cory Lei
Rank: Genin (At the moment)
Puppet Name: Dangonmushi (Pillbug)
Puppet Rank: C (For when Cory is a chuunin)
Description: A very complex puppet that was created by Cory to provide a defense. Dangonmushi is hexipedal, meaning he walks on six legs, and is hunched over. He has no arms, giving him the exact resemblance to a Pillbug. His shell, which covers everything except it's head and belly defends against anything C ranked or below. Dangonmushi can latch onto Cory's back, providing a great defence to Cory in his time of need. When curled up, he is incapable of moving, unless on an incline or pushed, but is completely invincible. Dangonmushi is often used with Mantisu's upgraded form's cable-arm to create a highly-devastating Ball-and-Chain combo.
Weak Joint: Under-Belly Segments
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Posted: Fri Nov 27, 2009 11:45 am
Username: Aqua Fall 12
RPC: Cory Lei
Rank: Genin
Puppet Name: Mantisu (Mantis) V2 (Will be turned into Mushi [Cricket])
Puppet Rank: C-B (For when Cory is a Chuunin, all the way to bridging over to jounin)
Description: An improvement upon so called perfection. This is Cory's first puppet, Mushi, except, has gone through a few upgrades. A hollow, hard-wood body has been replaced completely, even the joints, with a strong, adolescent bamboo skeleton. His chest cavity has been expanded, allowing for a more spooky, hollow sound than ever before. Claws have been extended and sharpened a great deal, concealed, and can flip out whenever. It's poison gas, which has also gone under upgrades, has been changed from severe itchiness to severe itchiness, and vomitting. Everything else has stayed the same, save for the arms, which fold into eachother to create two arms instead of four to pure concealment. It's right, top hand can extend on a cable Cory has put in, and can be used in conjunction with Dangonmushi to create a devastating Ball-and-Chain combo.
Weapons:
- Cable Arm
- Longer, sharper, concealed claws
- Four arms (Two concealed)
- Oral poison gas
- Voice recorder in forehead
- Metronome in chest
- Flashbangs
- Over-all more creepy appearance
Weak Joint: Neck
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Shruikan Tenshi Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri Nov 27, 2009 12:17 pm
(since when can the approvers approve of their own stuff? and cory, can you please check out custom jutsu spot?))
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