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Posted: Fri Nov 20, 2009 12:54 pm
Some times I sit around wondering If only I If only you If only we It was never like this before We were perfect together I was half of you You were half of me Together we could take on the world But then she came into the picture When I walked into a room I wasn’t who your eyes were searching for It was her I would call out your name Our voices clashed but its was hers that you always heard first You would stand by me but wishing I was her Soon my pure jealously for your intoxicated love affair Drove my emotions out i never knew I had She was the perfect test to see if we could stand through thick & thin But we failed A hard failure indeed Cause not only did she take your hand in marriage But your freedom Your individuality Most of all your creativity All the things I boasted about when you and I were together Once she was with you; my heart no longer wanted to keep yours I grew tired and old of waiting for the day you'd return For I knew I couldn’t keep your heart She seemed to some how steal everything else Really what did it matter Now we had no chance of survival You threw it all away for that one girl Now its ten years down the road I found my one But some days I cant help but wondering what if I guess all girls do it one day I hope your truly happy For when i gave back your heart It brought tears to my eyes The tears dried soon after Healing my heart which was broken into two I’m happy for the life you have chosen not with me but another And all I can do now is ask you: Was that one girl truly worth it?
YU lik? Please comment!
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Posted: Fri Nov 20, 2009 2:07 pm
....Really nice. whee I have to seriously put some of my poems on here. surprised I like how you put your "soul" into your poems. Regardless of whether this actually happened to you or not, it actually sounds like a real person talking, not just a medley of beautifully crafted words. 3nodding
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Posted: Fri Nov 27, 2009 5:45 pm
you have got talent beyond the heavens and stars mrgreen with just this poem i can sense the emotoin behind this. oh and pls comment on my poem tell me wat you think its called 1000 miles(tell me wat you think)
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Posted: Wed Feb 03, 2010 3:12 pm
i like this poem it gud ur gud at writing poems lol
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