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witchlight

PostPosted: Wed Dec 07, 2005 12:36 pm


I just finished this up over the weekend. It is an avi portrait for Totorochic.
Done in color pencil on pastel paper.

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PostPosted: Wed Dec 07, 2005 1:02 pm


Very nice art. The shading is great. Well, I think you put a little too much shading below the neck. Also, I notice the neck was quite short.

In general, I like it.
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kangri_23

PostPosted: Wed Dec 07, 2005 1:04 pm


nice
PostPosted: Wed Dec 07, 2005 9:40 pm


Beautiful! heart You handle pastels very well!

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blackenedhonesty

PostPosted: Thu Dec 08, 2005 2:30 am


That's incredibly pretty but I think you should have either added more hints of yellow on the left hand of her face or another color that would complement all the colors you used for the overall drawing. Good work. heart
PostPosted: Thu Dec 08, 2005 6:55 am


Well the yellow is the refection of the halo. Thank you everyone for the compliments and helpful crits.

witchlight


SpIrOcHeTe

PostPosted: Fri Dec 09, 2005 12:05 am


witchlight
Well the yellow is the refection of the halo. Thank you everyone for the compliments and helpful crits.
The face is good, though if the yellow is a reflection from the halo you need to make the halo more shiny, brighter so that it has a higher tendency to refract light rather than the mute, dull halo you have now. The neck is short but it doesn't matter since the hair hides that, what bothers me is the color in her chest, the contrast in color is right but light part of her chest needs more of that pink undertone to make it seem more connected and less like she is blushing or has some sort of sunburn abover her colar bone.
PostPosted: Mon Dec 19, 2005 8:33 pm


I like the way you handled the hair and eyes. Nice style.

Akumu_Okami


Lierne

PostPosted: Mon Dec 19, 2005 8:38 pm


This is nice.

I too really like the eyes. Especially the little tear duct.

What sort of colored pencils do you use? Prismacolors?
PostPosted: Thu Dec 22, 2005 11:43 am


Excellent pic, love the color pencil techniques.

drakkenmuerte


Capt. TreeLeaf

PostPosted: Thu Dec 22, 2005 11:47 am


Wow, it's very pretty. I like the way you did her face and her hair. But you probably should have done a little more to frame the picture in.
PostPosted: Fri Dec 23, 2005 7:40 pm


wow... that's really good! >o<

Ketshiro Taro

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